Intermental feat. Jessica - Why Me
 

First minute is a sample intro from Jessica singing, she is the winner of Road To Stardom, please dont jus quit and not listen to the song before I start, this song has alot of emotion I think, im tryin to up my game mad here....I tried loads of things to make it better quality....thank yall....

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"Why Me"

singing was a nice addition...perhaps 40 seconds too long


beat is okay


relax yaself when u flow...get better breath control because it sounded like u were rushing ur flow in spots


I like the voice u brought to the track though

not bad

lyrics sound personal = good


not a bad track dawg

keep at it

Thanks alot man...........

nice intro, like tha q said, its to long lol, wayyy to long but blah who cares, the beat is kinda dope seriously, i love it, where did u get it, your gettin better man, lyrics are dope, mmm watch your flow man, quality is wayyyy better than before, man how come lol ? anyway overall pretty dope track man
keep em coming:thumbup:

Thanks alot dawg..........

okay lets see...................

that jessica part is way too long....lol...cut that alittle......
yea...waht those otehers says...work with ya flow....
quality was way more betta.......i like it.....gd job dawg...
just cut that jessicas part...and make ur part longer.....
nice job man...u mad elevated..........

Thanks alot dawg....rlly appreciate it

As well , I like the Intro, It was a nice twist.. Your flow sounds good, needs a bit of work, but for the most part its dope, This was a good track some areas need to be improved.. But dope shit///////

Thanks alot dawg i really appreciate it

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singin was straight..u prolly could put her on the beat...




ya flow is rushed off the jump..fix ya flow take ya time..u aint hittin the snare either..delivery is ok..quality could be upped tho..u got some things to work on tho..ya flow and it sounds like u tryna whisper in some spots..might just be me..but just bring everything up some levels..

Iite thanks i appreciate it,

cool trak. for da person who asked about the beat. it's a nas beat. intro too long, i think u should have incorporated it wit the beat.

Dope intro~i enjoyed it, nice beat too..good flow,your on beat, i think you could pronounce your words more and raise the vocals a little,but you have nice mic presence and a nice voice. Good track, keep dropping.1

Thanks man... I appreciate it very much......

Yeah its a Nas Beat produced by Alchemist called Book of Rhymes

intro is dope... waaay too long though you shuuda had it bout 10 secs its till goin on.. deffo shorten it, am losing interest now.....

iite here we go.. beat is kool. vocals are low. hard to hear you. quality is better though. emotion is iite could be better. flow needs a bit of work as does your breath controllit really sounds like your whispering...

up your vocals and emotion, work on your delivery and flow.

then se how good you are. good job though... pretty decent. better than your others

Thanks man.............

I think the intro's mos def dope,
Yeah i love this beat, shame the original is fucking ill though
Ur version
U def improved ur flow has def improved theres not as many stops in it anymore
Still need to work on ur delivery hit them words on the snare ya kno?
quality is ALOT better
Lyrics is coo as usual
A nice listen
Im gonna be honest wiv ya holmz
when ya 1st started out ya shit wasnt that good but uve gradually got better and better and i really enjoyed the listen
props homie

Thanks alot man.............

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Listenin'...

Damn...nice singing...mos def dope intro...long as hell but Im not complaining...

Beat kicks in...decent...first verse comes in...nice flow first line and then it falls off...it sounds like you rushed as hell...you need to have more breath control, but no worries I use to have the same problem...Hook is decent...keep it up man, you'll get it...

thanks alot........up.......