Paranoid - "Can't Nobody" (Best Shit From me)
 

Props to Lady Fiya for mixin this for me, wit the noise reduction and all that.

thanks.

www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2460155
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2460183

lol...aww makes me think soft...nice flow..it kinna seemed u were counting ur flows tho...but fuck that u went smooth on this...you worded ur aim out...clear concept and stuff...cool piece right here...i like it...

*sings* aint no body love me like u do...


lol...anyways hit mine...link below


wun

Listening:
Beat is cool seriously, now i know what type of beats you like, quality is soso but still good, no hiss so its good, nice flow seriously, i admit this is your best, put more emotions to it, nice lil voice chorus, lyrics were simple but still a nice kinda love story, overall this is your best track, oh and btw i like your voice, keep them droping
7.5/10

anotha dabatos sing-songy beat


lol @ "yea...UH...UH"...sounded so robotic...let loose wit it like..YEA...ughhhhh ughhhhhhhhh


ur lyrics aren't bad...but ur flow was robotic...


relax on the mic

feel natural

ur voice is kinda deepish


but the yea and ughs are killin me


lol


u've elevated though

and did u say "Q was on ur mind 24/7?"

OH..."YOU" were on my mind

ahhh gotcha!


nice track


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lmfao Q, im trying to work out my sound, i dont think i sound robotic but i do agree that yea and uh is really annoying. it would be better if i showed it ebtter but im really likin this.

thanks for the feed
uppin

that beat was fire...thats a common type of beat...lol funny cuz he's in ya sig... ya quality aint too great shoulda turned up a vocals up a lil more...ya flow aint too bad.....voice is cool.....this song aint bad....keep um coming....7/10 keep um coming

really feelin the beat.....

yea definitely relax on the mic more....you kinda seem like your a lil tight up.....

you gotta pretty good voice...i think once you get your delivery and presence down...your voice will really compliment everything.....

lyrics are good.......

delivery is def better than last track....but you still gotta work on it....and your emotion on this track should be upped a lil bit too......

overall this is your best....still some things you def gotta work on.......flow being first IMO....then everything will come after that........just keep elevating.....decent song man

yo Jroy this aint a common beats its a Nas beat lol

anyway thanks for the feedback.

uppin..........

leave links yall.

uppin...........

yea like some of the others said your flow is mad robotic...its nice flow but your all robotic an ish....you lack emotions i felt, i think you coulda used more emotion an sounded mad monotone too...but on a good note, it was smooth .. just felt you could have improved on it a lil...1

thanks uppin....

decent beat, kinda over-used now tho... lets take a listen, mixin is ok, too much noise reduction its taken away from ur natural vocal sound... yeh alot of mixin issues... flow is ok, could be alot better, ur lackin presence and emotion.... lyrics are ok.

the same comments apply for all verses basically... keep at it fam

btw returnin the favour, link in my sig

I'd appreciate it if you read what I said on my first post please, I didn't mix this.

yea I'll rtf.

uppin

i know you didnt mix it, but that doesnt matter.

when i crit i crit everything despite whos done what, part of the track is the quality, which is down to the mixing so despite whos done it, that will be critted

This Is Pretty terrible. No Offense To Lady Fiya But That Mix Is Wack.

Your Voice Is Fucked Enough As It Is, but this sounds like your rappin into a milk carton or somethin.

Your Flow Is Pretty shit aswell, And wtf, rhymes are lame, walk-talk and Shit. And Arent you like 15 or some shit.

^your a dick.

uppin

hmmmm this was okay.....werd i was holding up my lighter while listening *sniffle*
naw beat was nice,the voice quality was kinda blah but okay,the flow was on point,the concept was very played but still good,emotion was heavy in this...nice little song bro

l o l