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John C. vs one mic
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10-UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting good luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-09-05 at 05:30 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-05 05:30 PM.
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this is my check in
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...yo
all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key' this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen? ... this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee" KO |
John C. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-05 09:49 PM.
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my bad, im not used to this format
...yo all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key' this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen? ... this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee" KO |
yo, you cant rap, your only skill is 'bitin names'
im'a turn up the heat, make your life a shame obviously you underestimated me, i produce battle scars your rhymes are filled with myst and darkness like your avatar you cant handle bars, me beatin you is my fate its funny, cuz this guy jus' realised wrestlins fake* you so scared of me, you probablly wet the matress this guys jus' had his first erection......when he was lukin at Brad Pitt hold on, cuz imma ride through.... stop rappin, cuz all you good for, is takin orders at the mcdonalds drive through *-John cena is a wrestler, aswell as a rapper for anyone who didnt know no hate man, jus rappin. |
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This was feedback posted for John C.
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ey yo, john, i woz born like four days after you lool
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Voted For: John C.
yo, you cant rap, your only skill is 'bitin names' im'a turn up the heat, make your life a shame 3...no punch...u'll make his life a shame?..how does it diss? obviously you underestimated me, i produce battle scars your rhymes are filled with myst and darkness like your avatar 2..meh..nowaday rippin on avatars are lame unless your doing something creative. you cant handle bars, me beatin you is my fate its funny, cuz this guy jus' realised wrestlins fake* 2...How did he now realize wrestling's fake?Becuz he's named after a wrestler doesn't mean that. you so scared of me, you probablly wet the matress this guys jus' had his first erection......when he was lukin at Brad Pitt 1...gay jokes are played and erection?..c'mon...that's newbish. hold on, cuz imma ride through.... stop rappin, cuz all you good for, is takin orders at the mcdonalds drive through 2....another played concept. all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin 3...the whole "one vote/luck" thing is played. come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID 4...ok... replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key' 2...key lines are a lil blah. this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete 4...decent....... cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen? this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission 3.....weak........ indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee 4...I seen this wordplay done before...so.. Well...this was one-sided... One Mic... Too many played lines.Rippin on people's avatar nowadays doesn't cut it..And the whole usage of gay/erection lines are played.And that line about wrestlin fake made no sence. John C won this. vote-John C Drop a vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210224 |
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Voted For: John C.
JOHN ...yo all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key' this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen? ... this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee" vs nuttin overall this was a preaty weak battle....i was seein anything that really caught my attetnion from eiother of you but....John won cuz the other guy sucked....you had no good punches or wordplay.....and you rhymed through with through....i know you were meaning different throughs but you spelled it the same and some people may not catch that......but overall John won for not bein as bad please hit this battle up fairly thanks defined vs legend |
Voted For: John C.
ok good battle both yall.. one mic - your verse was pretty good, alright flow, need to expand on your vocabulary a bit more and structure, the punches were good, need a little bit more wordplay and multies, but overall it was a good read had some good parts.. john - your verse was very good i didnt expect this from you, your flow was good, some lines were a bit stretched but good, the vocabulary was good, you had some nice wordplay and i thought your verse was very on point and punches hit when they were thrown.. overall - john... no hate. |
Voted For: John C.
One Mic yo, you cant rap, your only skill is 'bitin names' im'a turn up the heat, make your life a shame Not a punch.. obviously you underestimated me, i produce battle scars your rhymes are filled with myst and darkness like your avatar Decent.. you cant handle bars, me beatin you is my fate its funny, cuz this guy jus' realised wrestlins fake Nah.. you so scared of me, you probablly wet the matress this guys jus' had his first erection......when he was lukin at Brad Pitt Didn't connect.. hold on, cuz imma ride through.... stop rappin, cuz all you good for, is takin orders at the mcdonalds drive through Not a punch.. John C. all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin Not a punch.. come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID Decent.. replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key' Ehh.. decent.. this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete Nah.. cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen? this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission Not a punch.. indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee" Decent.. Overall, one mic had one decent punch and the rest either didn't connect, or weren't punches. His wordplay was pretty basic and wittiness lacked in his verse. John C. had three decent punches in his verse, a few that didn't connect and only two that weren't punches. Two of his didn't connect, but his wordplay was worded better, and his concepts were better as well. So, in conclusion, John C. gets my vote for the better overall verse. Vote - John C. |
Voted For: John C.
This was murkage.. One mic- you lacked punches, flow, personals, wordplay, complexity. and the list goes on John c. You had your share of decent lines along with some nice ones, good verse. V/ John C. Return the favor- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211956 or else i'll just stop voting in ya battles sluts :p |
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