Battle Rules:

10-UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-09-05 at 05:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-05 05:30 PM.

this is my check in

...yo
all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win
cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin
come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed
your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID
replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy
you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key'
this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory
where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete
cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen?


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this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission
indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat
or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee"

KO

John C. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-05 09:49 PM.

my bad, im not used to this format

...yo
all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win
cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin
come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed
your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID
replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy
you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key'
this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory
where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete
cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen?


...


this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission
indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat
or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee"

KO

yo, you cant rap, your only skill is 'bitin names'
im'a turn up the heat, make your life a shame
obviously you underestimated me, i produce battle scars
your rhymes are filled with myst and darkness like your avatar
you cant handle bars, me beatin you is my fate
its funny, cuz this guy jus' realised wrestlins fake*
you so scared of me, you probablly wet the matress
this guys jus' had his first erection......when he was lukin at Brad Pitt
hold on, cuz imma ride through....
stop rappin, cuz all you good for, is takin orders at the mcdonalds drive through

*-John cena is a wrestler, aswell as a rapper for anyone who didnt know

no hate man, jus rappin.

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ey yo, john, i woz born like four days after you lool

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Voted For: John C.

yo, you cant rap, your only skill is 'bitin names'
im'a turn up the heat, make your life a shame
3...no punch...u'll make his life a shame?..how does it diss?
obviously you underestimated me, i produce battle scars
your rhymes are filled with myst and darkness like your avatar
2..meh..nowaday rippin on avatars are lame unless your doing something creative.
you cant handle bars, me beatin you is my fate
its funny, cuz this guy jus' realised wrestlins fake*
2...How did he now realize wrestling's fake?Becuz he's named after a wrestler doesn't mean that.
you so scared of me, you probablly wet the matress
this guys jus' had his first erection......when he was lukin at Brad Pitt
1...gay jokes are played and erection?..c'mon...that's newbish.
hold on, cuz imma ride through....
stop rappin, cuz all you good for, is takin orders at the mcdonalds drive through
2....another played concept.

all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win
cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin
3...the whole "one vote/luck" thing is played.
come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed
your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID
4...ok...
replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy
you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key'
2...key lines are a lil blah.
this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory
where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete
4...decent.......
cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen?
this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission
3.....weak........
indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat
or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee
4...I seen this wordplay done before...so..

Well...this was one-sided...
One Mic...
Too many played lines.Rippin on people's avatar nowadays doesn't cut it..And the whole usage of gay/erection lines are played.And that line about wrestlin fake made no sence.

John C won this.

vote-John C
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