37. Black Arts vs. 38. Macca
 

Black Arts checkin in

checkin in.........

Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you...........................................
.................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it

it hard to realize the line above are wack
No flow no votes I was thinking.............
............................damn was that a rap

V./ Black

Shit, he self glorified and still took this,

weak macca.

Both of you stop using the 3-line punchline technique, at least until you actually know how to use it...or at least not use it horribly like you displayed here.

V// Macca and Black Arts both lose

v/ black arts...........

Vote - Macca ...

And here is the reason. Both individuals came basic, but Macca had a rhyming punches. I think punches are suppose to rhyme right? |||DRKMAN||| , you had a pretty good concept. But, I've seen that flipped way better in the past. No hate though, just try to be more creative...

Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you...........................................
.................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it

too many dots..seemed to self glorify..and as said before...the 3 line thingy ain't work good.And really...garbage/halved it...I don't see how you can make it rhyme..even accented heavily.

it hard to realize the line above are wack
No flow no votes I was thinking.............
............................damn was that a rap

1st line...hard to realize the line above is whack?Uhh..I think that compliments.It's sposed to be it AIN"T hard to realize.And the punch wuz damn basic..

v/Black Arts or Souljah or w/e...

Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you...........................................
.................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it
^^meh very simple self glory

it hard to realize the line above are wack
No flow no votes I was thinking.............
............................damn was that a rap
^^too simple, no wit

both weak, so Black gets it for actually making his bar more creative, better flowing

v/Black

garb - ige
halved - it

perfect rhyme?

well. shit. I didn't notice that thing. damn I didn't notice the mistake. fuck. can we redo this battle or not.

yer thats exactly what i woz thinkin, how duz garbage and halved it not rhyme???? :huh:

no...doesn't rhyme at all..

garb-ige..<--pronounced just like that

halved-it...<-halve is pronounced HAVE-d...so have-d-it

harved-it in my accent.

my last post here.

Wait...Macca...what?

Fucking UKians and their accents incorporated into text.

v/D, because I have no idea what Macca was talking about...hard to believe the line above are wack? What lines above? D's? How is it 'hard to believe it's wack', making it okay?

in the UK we don't pronounce halved it as have-d-it
we say haavd it

so you can't penalise just because you don't know jack about the UK

ooh..ok...I git it now...my fault..I didn't know u wuz UK.

nah thats cool mayn :thumbup:

vote: drkman i thought hes hit better

v//black arts...cuz it wasnt as bad

i vote for this guy

Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you...........................................
.................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it

well Since this is a punchlines League I Gotta vote for the better Punch

But it didnt Have any rhym at all

v/ DRKMAN

i have to macca. black arts punch didnt rhyme to me. i know he lives in the uk, but that doesnt work in a text battle. macca tried to throw a punch instead of having a self glorifying line as well as rhyming.

vote - macca

Blacks didnt rhyme...

while Maccas didnt make sence.

V/Black...

|||DRKMAN||| wins.
Macca loses.

This thread is now closed.

Moved to Closed Battles.