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Mad Dog - RG Round 1
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Intros ite,
beat decent...and when ya flow kicks in its decent, made it into a sorta banger, heard a lotta name droppin, not bad mate RTF PLEASE |
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though I want nothing to do with Dooms' bullshit tourney, I'll leave feed...
I'd merk that beat... but neway ur flow is on point...And, you heard it hear 1st, you have the best voice of any UK rapper on this site...(I'm not counting INtermental) lyrics are what they are...nothing major either way solid 1 |
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Thanks uppin.......... |
Damn This Beat Is Dope........Love The Way You Come In The Flow is On Pouint You Got A Dope Delivery On This With Presence At The Top....Emotion Is Good Could Be upped A lil Thoug Its Still Dope As Hell The Lyrics Are Dope At The End Wjere You Said Rap Game Lol That Was Weird But Koo You Killed The Beat Yo GOod Track 8/10
Rtf On My "THe Rebirth"Plz |
thanx uppin....
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woop woop woop.
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ok so i hate UK accents.
now for the beat. umm very differnet. personally i didnt like it. your flow was good. on point. and you didnt keep the same flow so it made it interesting. couldnt really tell what you was sayin cause your accent. your quality wasnt too good either. i would lower your adlibs. |
peeped this already in the other thread...im not really feeling the accent either but you nice at what you do ya flow is nice gully presence but really about the voice thing i cant really hear the accent except on certain parts its all good tho u did ya thing :0..seems like folks really tryin to get to the next round with impressive short audios ..good shit guy
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wtf
was you speakin english? that shit was garbage |
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lol @ you taking advantage of the feedback clause in RG... and seeing as we invented English...it's clear to say Americans fucked it up...but thanks for the feedback e'ry 1 else uppin |
and again woop.
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ok...I copped this jus blaze beat myself was gon spit to it.......ok u clearly a uk rapper..u accent wasn't too dominate early but it starts showing towards middle...which I aint a fan of uk accent...I always said it lacks fluidity....sounds like u fighting wit ya pronounciation to have ya words flow seemlessly together but the english way of speaking to me is naturally kaotic...sum know how to tone it down a bit u tried but not really working.........flow was basic an a tad choppy....delivery u opened wit intensity an strong..I was feeling u at jump but after first 4 bars u dropoff quickly...u lost that emotion that held my attention..I had to listen to it twice to catch lyrics cuz first listen I was jus goin thru motions..u completely lost my attention...lyrical u was ah'ight..nothing jumped out...u could flipped this topic so many ways but u took the predictable route......well all in all I wasn't feeling it, no hate son....but it jus wasn't working IMO...but stay up..u def got an upside......1
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hmmmmmmmmmmmm.......... no comment
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^ Thanks for the detailed feed :thumbup: Quote:
^ Again lmao @ the RG feed stip coming into play again...but thanks though for the up :thumbup: |
iite beat is ill... you kick in pretty good... flow is pretty good... i dun like the name droppin though. not a bad track though, its a banger,, uplifting track, adlibs are off in some parts.....
outro is meh though coz u aint gonna get the trophy :thumbup: overall decent track, elevated in makin songs nice job |
cheers oopin...
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Listening...
For some reason I don't like your quality...flow is coo...I think the UK accent adds to the track. Nice flow...I like lyrics, the beat is a'ight...delivery is coo... Word, keep it up man. We gotta collab one day. Return the favor please. :D http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212934 |
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co-sign.. but i felt you did have conviction... not a complete bomb... the accent is just hard to get past a lil sometimes.. you know? |
Am feelin the beat, original UK rapper here namsayin spittin pretty good..flow was on point..quality is iffy quality is holdin alot of kids down on this cyber world..seriously but u did ya thang B
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Na i know...coz i spit this at work mixing time is limited...but ye hopefully when i get my com back at home i'll have much more time to work on tracks instead of rushing them to meet deadlines and for some reason my mic isn't as clear here as at home...i think it's to do with the surroundings i unno...but thanks all so far keep droppin...ya supports greatly appreciated...also drop links if you got them :thumbup: |
ippity oop.....
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chitty chitty bang bang
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^ what i jus said
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