Its Zone Out!!*new shit peep peep peep*
 

yeah, I've active in everything audio related on RV
My latest shit, is for the rap game shit that apexx got goin on




Its Zone Out



yeah, to that dipset anthem beat. I was goin use the no no no beat, but this beat brings back memories.
This is easy, one of the best songs this round.

feedback on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212670
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210088

such a played beat... intro is annoying.. too many "jyeah" shits

lol @ your clarity being none existent, your vocals cant be heard for shit, what i can hear you got too much reverb, flow sounds average, delivery i cant tell, sounds like u have energy.

but yeah, i seriously cant comment for shit your mic skills simply cos i cant hear them

and before you start with some lame "your set-up must suck" type shit.

i use studio standard monitors.... so fix your shit, especially when u tried dissin mine

Damn, another nigga commented on my reverb and echo
that shit must've JUST started doin that
how I fix that

and Leady, I know you wasnt gettin smart with me cos I said your trash wasnt needed, cos nigga, you suck fa real, LIKE IN REAL LIFE.
Remember when I asked people to be on my mixtape, and you posted yo soundclick, and I said it didnt match?
I wasnt bein nice,
IT REALLY SUCKED, I AINT WANNA HEART YOUR ENGLISH MUFFIN FEELINGS!

u think i care wat sum 2 bit netcee thinks?????

you think i suck.

wow, woopty doo... want a cookie?? i know id murder you on a mic anyday of the week.... but atleast i have a fan base away from the net :thumbup:

I seriously doubt it with the way you rap.
the only fan base you have is the top of your ceiling fan:whacky:
and son, I've heard your shit. you couldnt murder ANYONE!!
Im sorry, but you're just garbage.

lol... thats funny, we dont have roof fans LMAO nice try though.... and trust me, i KNOW id murder you... and i couldnt murder anybody??? thats funny concidering i have a 2-0 audio record on this site alone, and ive won countless other battles on sites with 100x's more skill than here, aswell as battles at freestyle battle nights, so yeah, hush up kid.... oh i nearly forgot to mention, im the reason tony green left, abit coincidental that i diss him, he says "i never peeped" rather than talkin shit bout it, n 2 days later announces he is leaving.... :thumbup:

Im not Tony Green, besides Tony Green was a million times doper than you, nigga you suck.
flat-out. I dont know NO other way to put it, you're garbage.

you look like a fat ass pig, you sound like you have a mouth full of chocolate and marshmellows and your audios sound like a million retarded babies gettin raped at the same time.



www.haterz.u-mad.net

lol your too funny... keep thinkin you nice and talkin shit like u actually have reason to.

and i'll chill here writing a track for my CD knowing that its going to sell and ill have fun performin to promote it :thumbup:

bye bye

roflmao

yeah
yo cd is goin sell, alright
its goin sail when its tossed in the fuckin wind.

wow... sail and sell, sound nothing alike for starters... but it took you long enough to think of that.

i reckon that hamster that turned the wheel in your head died tryna help you think of that... poor little bugger

wtf
sell and sail sounds nothin alike?
wow
you british fags sound more fucked then I imagined

sell

is pronounced like the letter "L" but with an S...

sail is pronounced extremely different.

that to me, is forced wordplay... but its also played.... and the english language is fucked????? its the american version of stuff that is wrong actually, cos what we speak here is the original english language

sell = S ELLL
sail = say ul

Im GLAD us Americans declared war on you fags and seperated outselves.
lol @ our small 13 colonies ownng your entire country.
and england was KNOWN for their navy too
smh
just like America owned england then
I own you now, fucka

I owned you in tag tourney :)

Now complain about the votes some more.

*looks at your verse*

now, you didnt own ME.

Sadly, my partner was busy and rushed his verse, so he wasnt up to par.
regardless though. if my verse by itself, was compared to yours, I would've won easily
the same thing with mines and EC

lol you really need to get over yourself dude.

oh no, another american tryna diss our country, oh dear, little does he know that navy seals e.t.c are trained by brits, or people who have been trained up by brits, all techniques, excercises e.t.c... all british, want me to continue?

wtf does that the navy seals have to do with me bein better than yo wack ass on the mic?
dumbass!

ok never heard your music before

i hate this damn beat

you say yeh too much. and zone out. and all that wanna be beatboxing. lol.

verse - sounds real good on this beat. matches real well. lyrics? well im tired of the gun shooting lyrics and wanna be's gangstas. but its still okay.

quality is pretty good. just a little too much echo.


overall pretty good.

rtf in my siggy

energy as Leady said is good...flow is ok...lyrics are hard to tell quality sounds muffled...but um j-j-j-j-joan out???...lmao...and you thought my pronounciation was bad ha ha ha...

...oh ye i know this beat...it was the beat i used to merk poop a scoop lotty in Got Skillz...duck and cover from that E-Thug E-Thug lmao...E-Style pshh :laugh:

lol cos u was tlkin bout your country bein superior to ours... and you better than me???? i hate to break it to you kid.

your flow = average at best

my flow = been proven its above average

your delivery = energetic, but thats all it has going for it

my delivery = again above average(delivery being puttin emphasis on the correct words to help ur point get across better)

your presence = yeah it sounds good, but at times sounds un-natural

my presence = proven again its above average, allways confident and allways fits the track.

your lyrics = played, simple and basic as fuck rhyme schemes and very predictable.

my lyrics = far superior to most if not all on the site.. who else is dropping rhyme schemes like me??? aswell as switching it up constantly so its never the same, along with creative lines and original meta's e.t.c

come on now kid, you seriously are not on my level, dont get ahead of yourself

Yo Leady i know ya trying to own him...but please don't hype yaself up...that post looked meh you jus done...jus clown him...he an E-Thug diss him alone on that lol

im not tryna diss him, im jus tryna open his eyes to the truth.

and he might be an E-Thug, but i know if he stepped in my estate hed get his lights knocked out like new york city

beat is overplayed


and wassup with the echoey sound in ur vocals...eh...bad quality on the vocals


and ur kinda stiff soundin at the start, even though u are on beat


and the vocals could be amped a bit


this isn't as good as the other joint I heard

elevate


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do ANY of yall niggas know me in the street.
how the FUCK do yall know Im a "wannabe gangsta?
and Im a "e-thug" wtf is a e-thug exactly
if Im a e-thug, than yall are just some e-suburban bitch ass niggas, flat out

and leady, if you was ALL of that, then when you dropped yo soundclick I would've MOST DEF put you on my mixtape, but you wasn't.
you suck, YOU SUCK REAL REAL BAD.
Thats the most simple and basic way I can out it.
fat ass pig lookin nigga

get over yourself... the reason u think i suck is cos ur narrowminded, that doesnt bother me, but its obvious im better than you... for starters, my music gets more posotive replies than yours, my music got me an offline fanbase, radio plays, plays in clubs, and much more... whats urs got you??? a couple of internet fans and alot of ppl dissin ur wackness.

oh no, you called me fat.... WOW, are you THAT desperate to try n get sum browny points???? calling me fat gets u kno where.

and you ARE e-thug... real peeps dont chat the shit online, why??? cos they cnt do shit, so why chat it???

i could own you in so many ways its not real... and i can guarantee, if i knew you in the street, you wouldnt be standing upto me, ud be too busy tryna get up off ya arse after i put u down... and thats FACT

I Like This.........I Like YOur Emotion In It Could be Upped A Lil...

Flow Is Good But Gets A lil Dull -_- I LOVEEEEEEE This Beat Lol...

Hmm....The Echo I Think Is A Bit Much...


Pressence Good You DOne Welll On That

Delivery-Is Good Like How You Portray Yourself


The Song Seem's A Lil Short Though....:/ But Its Nice


8/10 Good One :thumbup:


Plz RTF On My True Story Which Will Be Up On RV In About A Hour Lol

^thanks
this just some shit I did to get out the way.
for the rap game
he said all you had to do was make a song and i threw this shit together