one mic vs ~Conflict~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-02-05 at 05:43 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 05:14 PM.

its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death

*-in bad restaurants, you dont normally give tips, and the other meanin of when i say "givin more" is that i dont have to give more effort than usual to beat him.

quick 10 min verse. no hate..........

~Conflict~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 05:37 PM.

How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/

nice verse...........uppin this...................

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Voted For: one mic

One Mic

Well,you had some decent punches.I Liked your first bar,with the conflict nameplay.The restaurant line was wack though.Seemed to complex.I understand what you were saying,but still...just get to the point with your punches.Aviod explaining your punches in the future.And don't make punches on avys anymore,their just boring nowadays.

Conflict


Ok,you had a choppy flow in your verse,That 1st bar was stretched out too much,making it flow bad.And it also wasn't a punch.Saying you'll smash 'em,trash 'em,and take his mic away doesn't diss.And your last bar,wit the sleep/vet clinic thingy....PLAYED OUT.

Vote-One Mic

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This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~
 

you one mic you got this son you got this another god doing it big fasho

i mean the feedback is for one mic sorry cuz but conflict you suck

thanx legend man. uppin this shit....................

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This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~
 

lol conflicts you faggot just cuz ur my boi i cant vote so ima say all together it was ight for both try harder

k thanx for the feed. uppin for votes...................

This was feedback posted for one mic
 

good verse bro. I like ya style

Hope the votes come in for you now

thanx Tie-D, you my boi yo. uppin this................

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Voted For: one mic

One Mic:
its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
iight punch - 4/10
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
Not Good - 2/10
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
Meh - 3/10
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death
Played - 2/10
11/50

You had a good opener, and the flow was decent.


~Conflict~:
How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
ok punches - 3/10
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
iight - 5/10
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
ok - 4/10
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/
ok punch - 5/10
17/50

You had a good flow, and some punches that hit hard.

Vote - Conflict

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: one mic

How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
^^^weak opener
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
^^^NO punch
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
^^^Weak
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/
^^^Ight closer

its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
^^^ight opener
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
^^^Ok....not worded right
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
^^^good
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death
^^^Ight closer

V/one mic this was a onesided battle con u came wit a weak verse no real punchs or wordplay also no good personals.....one u came wit a good solid verse that was consistent u get my vote.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277
^^^RTF Honestly....OR THis Vote will be removed

thanx man. uppin this.............................

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Voted For: one mic

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one mic -

its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
- Not hard by any means, but ok
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
- Personal and ok
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
- Not workin
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death
- This is ok for a finisher

Your verse flowed well throughout, rhyming was fine with use of multis at times...you had lines that were ok for a battle, but limitied creativity....

~Conflict~

How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
- Big no...
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
- No
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
- Not really, why 'deadly'? Your backfiring....
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/
- So sweet that you want to put him to sleep...is he 'sick'? this backfired big time...plus the word you were looking for was veterinarian....

Your verse was all over the place lyrically...no line would be considered ok, and some of your lines were shooting bullets back at you....you need to improve on making your lines witty and really attacking the opponent....read your lines like they are someone else's and rate them, try something else if one of them doesn't work...you sound new, so read verses of others that are better and keep tryin...


Ok this battle was comfortably won by one mic....better lines, attacking the opponent more...Stay Up Both

This is my battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216087

thanx for the vote man, appreciate it. uppin for more votes........

No one is voting on my battle, if you have time drop an honest vote...

I left a link in my last post

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Voted For: ~Conflict~

Break Down-I Have To Say This Battle Was Whack From Both Parts But Although one Mic Had A Few Personals His Verse Was More Self Glorifyin Than Punches....So In My Opinon Conflict Got This...............

No one is still votin on my battle, drop an honest vote Ill and Conflict as I voted here

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Voted For: ~Conflict~

1 mic

not a lot of punchez, just saying your better. the little punchez you had were kinda weak. not a ton of creativity either. u need to work on insulting and not saying u r better.

conflict

u had a few punches in thiz verse that hit kinda hard. i last how you said his mic was confiscated. though u said that twice, so u need to work on making more punches from different conceptz. decent verse though.

v- conflict