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NotoriousM vs Street Disciple
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8 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-15-05 at 01:52 AM Must drop verse in 3000 minutes after check in. |
NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 01:53 PM.
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Street Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 01:54 PM.
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Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer |
Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meat You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer Spellin Error:I spelled meat meet, edited it, if anything needs to be explained, just pm me. |
Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap Cus ya rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meat You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer Explain:The postmen I see where blueish type shit, like a cop, a fed is a cop with the gov, so he know nothin bout the streets and miexed the two up, no one notices him like he a ghost writer, ghosts can't be seen, so it's like his shit is neva gonna be nuthin special, no one notices it, or pays attention to it, black wall street was made by the game I think, but that was supposed to be literall... |
Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen...
Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green... Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate... Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate... Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws... |
Uppin this shit fo veres also T-dot made a thread to battle against you, ya might wanna check it out.....
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Voted For: NotoriousM
NotoriousM: Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen... Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green... Ok Punch - 3/10 Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... MEH - 2/10 Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate... Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate... OK - 2/10 Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... OK - 3/10 Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws... Good Punch - 3/10 13/50 You had an ok punch. and the flow was ok. Street Disciple: Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap GAY - 1/10 Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold MEH - 2/10 Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet MEH - 2/10 You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed FAKE - 1//10 This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer SO?..1/10 7/10 You need to work on shit kid, hope you spit better for our battle. Work on punches. Vote - Notorious M |
Na nigga fuck outta my battle with them hate votes, and you wanna talk bout my shit nigga?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175372 I'd fuckin merk the shit outta stop talkin shit you lil bitch, dont get mad cus you garbage at rhymin, fuckin make that battle so I can merk the shit outta ya bitch ass... |
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Voted For: Street Disciple
voted 4 Street D...u flowed better..punches were more thought out, much more thorough..good double rymes....Notorious had a good ending...not as good though as Street's overall drop... -------------- Best Lines: Street D: You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed (G'ya) Notorious: Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times.. (best one i found...i didnt like any of the doctor, nurse, operation shit) ----------------- RTV, Honestly One |
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Voted For: Street Disciple
Street Disciple: Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap no, wack Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold played, wack Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet played as fuck, wack You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed nooooo This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer no...... NotoriousM: Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen... Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green... wack Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... no Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate... Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate... no diss whatsoever Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... wtf? no Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws... played as fuck, and wack Overall vote- This was shit battle...Notorious had no punches and was overall wack...almost all of SD's lines were played, or either wack as hell...still better than NM tho...so vote-Street D |
This was feedback posted for NotoriousM
just checkin out the battle its aii .......................
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Voted For: Street Disciple
Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen... Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green... Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate... Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate... Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws... you have a basic flow some good rhymes and a decent apporuch but you need to get more raw like you need to attack more i think befor we can concider you part of this crew you not far but still need a bit of training and i think by battle more cats you will get what im saying to you now, decent try but attack your opponit more and diss your oppanit more nice try Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer i felt like you attack more at your oppnit some was basic some was ok noting good you need to attack your opponit more and get more concepts going cause all of them was either old or recycled concepts good try but i think you won this battle take this battle as a exsample of why you need to attack more because you never know how much your opponit is going to attack and not just flow you see there is a difference and that has alot to do when someone picks who wins you wanna pick who is attack more with original concepts and not just flowing thats why i think you won |
Voted For: NotoriousM
nicce.. best line-Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... worst line-Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... overall-great puches, rhymes well vote- NotoriousM |
Voted For: Street Disciple
lol SD handed No his ass on this one... No just didn't come hard enough... looks like he took SD too lightly... *shruggs* Opener: SD Closer: SD Punches: SD Personals: NotoriousM Creativity: SD Complexity: SM Enjoyment: SM Vote: SM |
Voted For: Street Disciple
oh......street u won this one eazy better rymes and flow and structure notor u rymes could b better i seen way better from ya but nite wasnt ur nite so vote for street no hate notor u did good and u street rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...645242&posted=1 |
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