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7. Daubs vs 8. FuxJustAWord
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Hi fux,
drop early? |
check.... do w/e u want.... im most likely droppin before friday anyways
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you play left back...in the changing rooms at these dull times
cause word plays so shitty...i'l win with a basic punchline |
The ladies all wanna fux, but Daubs gets no women, ya need help son
Cuz the last time u caught a few winks...... u were just gettin slept on |
GL.
Up........ |
vote:fux...........better punch
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up................
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Gotta give it to daubs here.His punch was just...better.And also,fux..on and son don't rhyme.They may "look" like they do,but they don't,
Vote-Daubs |
^^^ - Wow, I can't believe some of the feedback I read here sometimes. Well yes, on and son don't rhyme, but can you read dude? Help son and slept on definately do rhyme. If you still disagree, you might want to start listening to more rap and what kinda words they rhyme.
Anyway, close battle here. Fux came okay, the concept wasn't bad, but nothing overly dope about it. Daubs came with a nameplay. I dunno if it's been done before. It prolly has and I just haven't seen enough battles at RV to know that. However, done or not, I kinda liked it. I really could see myself going either way, but I preferred Daubs' punch. Good battle tho fellas. Vote - Daubs |
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Uh-Uh..since you feel the need to come at me,trying to agrue against my feed... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...911#post2561911 ^accept that. |
Thanks for feedback.
Uppin. |
v/ fux
harder punch |
yea yea... 2-2.. can yall not beef in my thread?
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init lol.
Decent punch fux. Up. |
Daubs – This was a decent punch, don’t really like the set-up though – nice nameplay and all, and it flowed well
Fux – Your punch was decent too, I liked the concept, original and it too flowed well… This is definitely the closest battle, at least that I’ve read, and a good battle too…for some reason I’m inclined to vote for Fux, probably because I just thought his punch was more effective with the set-up, even thought Daubs was more personal with the nameplay… Vote – Fux |
lol...its a PLL battle, not a set up battle.... and the setup was relevant to sport /play.
safe anyway. 2-3 up. |
Yeh I know, and that's what it came down to in my opinion because the punches were about as good as each other....Fux just set his punch up better than you, and I know the relevance of what you said, just think you did not word it as well as Fux did....
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dis was a pretty ill baqttle,...
daubs wordplay was sick... ima go wiv daubs i think he edged it out v/daubs |
Uh yeah, I think Fux had a harder punchline.
I didnt really see yours hitting Daubs. :( I thought Fux has a weak PL too tho, but it hit a little I suppose. V/Fux................... |
safe.
3-4. Up...... |
v/fux
eh, think the set up for daubs ruined it....this was close though, hard to decide |
Ok.
Uppin for more? |
I had to read it about 3 times to decide. Real close battle here. I'd give it battle of the week. Took me a minute to get get Daub's punch because I'm so used to just reading Fux punces on Fux and forgot he had Word in his name. The name/wordplay punch by Daubs was dope. The getting slept on punch was ill. Basically a toss up, but I feel that Daubs edged it out by just a bit.
Vote: Daubs |
FuxJustAWord wins.
Daubs loses. |
This thread is now closed.
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Moved to Closed Battles.
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