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Wicked One vs the_DukE
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6-14 Lines... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 12-10-05 at 12:40 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
the_DukE has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-05 12:50 AM.
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this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/
rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// |
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-05 03:40 PM.
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Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows...
Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... |
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Voted For: the_DukE
This nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// ^^^Weak opener..played make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// ^^^Weak droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// ^^^Ight this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// ^^^No i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// ^^^Weak on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// ^^^played first line Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows... Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. ^^^Ight opener Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... ^^^Weak I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... ^^^Nice punch Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... ^^^Ight nuthin special In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... ^^^Good U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... ^^^Ight Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... ^^^Good closer V/Wicked one this was a one sided one......the duke i see u werkin on things ur elavatin jus battle ppl more ur level now....wicked one u came wit a solid verse it was consistent wit diss's that werent played... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277 ^^^RTF HONESTLY OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Wicked One
I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... ^^^ only decent lines in the battle other dude had boring shit.. and it was corny like when he was like "i need some toilet paper cuz i'm almost done shittin" LMAO..wow v/wicked one for coming with punches http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216292 |
aiight, y'all entitled to ya own opinions, but c'mon now.....lets get some votes and close this out peepz....uppin........
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Voted For: the_DukE
Wicked One Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows... Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. - Nope... Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... - And? I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... - Ok at least your trying to attack him now Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... - NO...... In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... - Could have worded this much better, but its decent U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... - Not workin Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... - Nah.... Ok, I have no idea if you are new to text battling but I think you may be quite new so in that case keep textin and battlin...you could improve it seems like, but this verse was not too good...some lines were ok but you didn't connect much at all, and need to improve in that department...also your flow was horrible, sort the structure of your verse out and not only will it be much easier to read but it will be more effective... the_DukE IP: this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// - Ok opener... make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// - no droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// - Nah this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// - its....ok i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// - Could have worded it better but decent on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// - Ok... Your verse was stronger in some areas that others, some good lines and good flow with decent rhyming....maybe some more effective punchlines is what you need Ok, DukE won this battle in my opinion....stay up both though.... And post an honest vote at my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216087 Peace |
Shit ^^^ I know your not new Wicked One, don't know where that came from....close battle though, I forgot to mention
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Ayo what the fuck...cmon now i fucking merked this dude....Fuck yo vote...Damn...Fucking upppinnnn...
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Voted For: Wicked One
Wicked One - You had a good flow, punches where hitten hard. You had good personals also. Best Line - Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... Worst Line - In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... The Duke - Your flow was good, rhymes where played, same with punches. Best Line - this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// Worst Line - make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// OVERALL - This was a one sided battle with Wicked gettin' the win. He had the better punches, and his flow was better. He also had better personals. Duke work on your flow, and your punches need to be more creative, and less played out. Vote - Wicked One RTF in SIG! or vote REMOVED! |
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Aiight, first of all, wicked one, i already gave you enough credit....you got skillz, but c'mon man, do you really think this shoulda been a knock out?? i actually got one more vote, but that nigga didnt explain his reason good enough...dont hate dawg....a battle is a battle...
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I know its cool...manye i just got back from a bball game and we lost n shit...so thats why i was mad n shit...my bad man...UPPIN
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Voted For: Wicked One
Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows... Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. ...Ehh,ok. Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... ...Blah,boring. I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... .......ok Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... ...Good In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... ...decent U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... ...No Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... ...OK this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// ....Ehh,weak make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// ....Weak droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// ...Ok this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// ....Decent i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// ...Good on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek/..da-feet/defeat lines are played the fuck out. I vote Wicked one.He just came better.Duke came wack with played shit.De-feet lines would have been ok...like,5 years ago. Vote-Wicked One Drop an honest vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213623 |
Voted For: Wicked One
Wicked One Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows... Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. ^lmao at last line, first was bleh but second was pretty funny hehe Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... ^not really feelin it but its decent bar though I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... ^haha, good comparison right here, nice punch as well Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... ^hehe, solid shit, nothing WHOA but solid enough ya kno In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... ^lolz, decent but not as good as previous one U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... ^solid, not like the other solid one, this was bit less but still aight Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... ^haha...this just killed it...nice stuff this closer Overall solid battle, had few fillers in there though but got funny shit in it as well. the_DukE this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// ^aight decent opener, aight wordplay make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// ^hmmm not really feelin this line right here droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// ^good last line, first is bleh though but solid this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// ^again last line is better than first one, work on ya build-ups i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// [b]^uhmmmm...no...this wasn't working at all... on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// ^uhm I seen the feet-line lots of times already Get more creativity in ya lines, concepts were good here n there, work on em build-ups too but ya got potential for sure |
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come on y'all, just vote on this shit and lets get this done....i dont care if i lose man...this nigga got skillz...i aint doubtin that....it was a good battle....
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Voted For: Wicked One
Heres how I see it... Wicked-- You had a basically better verse...attempted multies on some lines...seems like yo verse was a lil bit more complxed than Duke's...structure could've been better...flow was on at some points...good verse tho.. Duke-- Yo verse was too simple...it flowed nicely, you had better structure, but yo punches werent complexed enough...you beat em in everything but multies and punches...just work on complexing those 2, and you straight... peace... |
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