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| the_DukE |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
| Wicked One |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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12-09-05, 12:40 AM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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Wicked One vs the_DukE
IP: 28AD 5545
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12-09-05, 12:50 AM
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#2
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IP: 2029 97B3
the_DukE has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-05 12:50 AM.
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12-09-05, 02:30 AM
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#3
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IP: 2029 97B3
this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/
rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// |
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12-09-05, 03:40 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-05 03:40 PM.
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12-10-05, 02:24 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows...
Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits...
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12-11-05, 11:14 AM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 3240 794D
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12-11-05, 05:54 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
Voted For: the_DukE
This nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// ^^^Weak opener..played make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// ^^^Weak droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// ^^^Ight this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// ^^^No i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// ^^^Weak on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// ^^^played first line Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows... Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. ^^^Ight opener Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... ^^^Weak I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... ^^^Nice punch Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... ^^^Ight nuthin special In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... ^^^Good U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... ^^^Ight Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... ^^^Good closer V/Wicked one this was a one sided one......the duke i see u werkin on things ur elavatin jus battle ppl more ur level now....wicked one u came wit a solid verse it was consistent wit diss's that werent played... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277 ^^^RTF HONESTLY OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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12-11-05, 06:26 PM
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IP: 3ABB F828
Voted For: Wicked One
I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... ^^^ only decent lines in the battle other dude had boring shit.. and it was corny like when he was like "i need some toilet paper cuz i'm almost done shittin" LMAO..wow v/wicked one for coming with punches http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216292
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12-13-05, 11:21 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
aiight, y'all entitled to ya own opinions, but c'mon now.....lets get some votes and close this out peepz....uppin........
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12-13-05, 03:41 PM
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IP: EE65 E68C
Voted For: the_DukE
Wicked One Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows... Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose.. - Nope... Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around... Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns... - And? I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child... When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile... - Ok at least your trying to attack him now Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs... Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes... - NO...... In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... - Could have worded this much better, but its decent U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada... Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava... - Not workin Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... - Nah.... Ok, I have no idea if you are new to text battling but I think you may be quite new so in that case keep textin and battlin...you could improve it seems like, but this verse was not too good...some lines were ok but you didn't connect much at all, and need to improve in that department...also your flow was horrible, sort the structure of your verse out and not only will it be much easier to read but it will be more effective... the_DukE IP: this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// - Ok opener... make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// - no droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/ got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit// - Nah this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/ the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen// - its....ok i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/ walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain// - Could have worded it better but decent on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/ wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek// - Ok... Your verse was stronger in some areas that others, some good lines and good flow with decent rhyming....maybe some more effective punchlines is what you need Ok, DukE won this battle in my opinion....stay up both though.... And post an honest vote at my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216087 Peace |
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12-13-05, 03:47 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: EE65 E68C
Shit ^^^ I know your not new Wicked One, don't know where that came from....close battle though, I forgot to mention
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12-13-05, 05:21 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 0825 899A
Ayo what the fuck...cmon now i fucking merked this dude....Fuck yo vote...Damn...Fucking upppinnnn...
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12-13-05, 07:45 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 28AD 5545
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12-13-05, 08:06 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 10D2 D962
Voted For: Wicked One
Wicked One - You had a good flow, punches where hitten hard. You had good personals also. Best Line - Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits... I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits... Worst Line - In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice... I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ... The Duke - Your flow was good, rhymes where played, same with punches. Best Line - this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/ rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks// Worst Line - make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/ sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels// OVERALL - This was a one sided battle with Wicked gettin' the win. He had the better punches, and his flow was better. He also had better personals. Duke work on your flow, and your punches need to be more creative, and less played out. Vote - Wicked One RTF in SIG! or vote REMOVED!
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12-13-05, 10:56 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
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