Intermental feat. Mardell Maxwell - Everythin' I Do
 

WOW mardell maxwell on the adlibs, this guys soo talented and i thank him alot fo bein on my track...im on the verses...max on the hook..this is a real nice song fo ure gurl..this is dedicated to my girl fo christmas...

www.soundclick.com/intermental

"everythin i do"

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217789
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217801

Listening:

Singing dope.I dunno if its me or r ur vocals a bit low.Sweet chorus.DOPE.Flow is nice!
Liking ya lyrics!Emotion real subtle and fits,delivery is nice too!

good track inter!:D

Aight

Beats Nice...I Heard This Beat I Forgot WHere It From Lol...

Aight Inter

Flows Nice

Dleiverys Koo

Lyrics Are Koo

Presence Is Nice

You Know I Aint Into Love Tracks That Much

Hooks Fuckin Dope

Damn He Can Sing

WOW

Inter Again

Same as 1st Verse i Think

Flow Falls Off Once

Hook Again:)

Your Verse Again

Same As Other Lol

Hook Again..................


Nice Track

Overall:8/10

:)

Yea......thanks fo feed.........

get bakk on msn NOW! lol:D

upppin.............

Wow, Nice Man, Delivery Was Great, Flow Came Nice, Never Fell Off Once, Always On Point, Hook Was Nice To Man, Beat Was Great, What Beat Is This? This Track Was Hott Man Like It, Good To See Guys Doing SOmething For Girls Man, Mad Props On This Keep Doing Your Thing

PS We Should Collab

fo sho thats whatsup./.......

upppin dat........

wut if u don't have a girl?

eeh

beat...I'm not feelin...sounds like the theme music to cheers or something...wait, I actually rapped to the theme from cheers

nvm


Inter...ur flow is fine...ur delivery is expressionless...and for this to be ur girl, u don't sound convinced

hook sounds nice...cud be amped...I couldn't decipher what he was singing


ur vocals need to come through crisper...amp them...and ur emotion is ZELCH

disappointing


the feel of this track is good, but that's only because the beat is so expressive...Take away the beat, and you have a lackluster track

However, it's personal, so I won't hold that against you.


Not a bad drop homie...jus need WAY MORE EMOTION in a track dedicated to the one u supposedly love.


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i see what u sayin fam....but i think i wudve expressed too much emotion like ive done before n its fucked the flow up on the track..but imma try balance the two..thanks fo feed

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Inter your flow is cool, delivery ok but could of had abit more emotion seeing as thought it's fo yo gurl. but think you shoudl up your vocal volume cause i cant really hear them imo.

Hook's nice damn that guy is talented wit his singin it's real nice, but think the volume should be upped again couldn't really hear it but still nice.

Verses are all good, flow wise, but think you should amp them can't really hear them. Same with the hook.

But overall it was a pretty dope track for yo gurl.

Hope she likes it dawg.

Overall - 7.8/10

it is^ lol

BEAT SMIIITH! hes dope wit it.

anways..ya presence is horrible.
ya emotion is pretty bad.
the singer is dope, who is it?

the singers hot
u need to keep elavatin. u got potential

up..................

I think ima download this one too.....the hook is fuckin dope as fuck!, beat is fuckin dope as well. but for you intermental ima say your mic pressense was dope man came in nice, flow was on lock and as was your deleivery. lyrics were pretty good and the total image on this track is great, nice and smooth mellow style. dope track man

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thanks fam i apreciate that............

the beat isnt exactly the same but i think alot of u think the beat sounds familiar because it has the same notes of that Nelly and Kelly Rowland song.... cant remember the name, but yea, same piano...

this track is decent, the overall feel of the track is realgood, but its not a great song lyrically, and whoever is singin is pretty good...... pretty good song but u sound uninterested on the track sumtimes.... decent flow, but uve dropped better......decent

RTF..... links in my sig

aight..



first verse - flow was shaky in my opinion.. and couldnt understand alot of whaty your were saying.. had to listen hard to get it.. lyrics were aight.. not a bad verse..

chorus - He can sing.. harmonies were on point most of the time..

Second Verse - same as the first.. flow could have been more captivating.. but wasent bad..

third verse - same as before


i think you need work on ya lyrics a lil more.. flow will come.. not a bad track but it could use some work.. 6'ish/10

Thanks for youre feed..ill work on it

see everyone dissed both u and unf when you started including me lol but ur getting soooooo much better ur def in the top 10 audio heads on this site

i want to be on a song with ur singer :( his adlibs helped ur verses

1st verse your voice and accent sounded really good on this track the best ive heard it sound yrics i liked them they fit the dope ass beat well really lovely

singers hook was dooooooope hes good is he on sc?

2nd verse i didnt like quite as much alot of multis though cool shit

3rd verse i think i heard a pop the first time ever lol i liked ur flow and voice the best on this verse by far but i hate the hot dog line : /
overall cool ass track i think im going to download it
sorry i took so long to reply

lol its fine ma lmao at the hot dog line but yea his soundclick is:

www.soundclick.com/mardellmaxwell

and yea I apreciate that fo real and people dissed u cos u put me in CS?

see, I told you I was goin leave some feedback
Im lovin the piano
1st verse was cool
Im not really into love songs, girly tracks that much
the hook is fine
2nd verse
sounds ALOT better than the 1st verse
you was flowin waay better
hook again
3rd verse
im mos def feelin the rhyme scheme better
the hot dog and chedda line was, lol, un explainable, man
ok ok ok, overall, I would have to say this track is average.
Im not a big fan of love songs/ girly tracks, I only really feel a few.
But this shit isnt bad, because you was on the level of Bow Wow and Pretty Ricky and them other cats that be makin songs like this
its all good, keep elevatin, keep droppin tracks, as always

word thanks I apreciate the feed fam...