D-mat vs Venture
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Feeding allowed
You spit 1st homie?

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-15-06 at 05:49 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

you gonna spit homie?

Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 11:23 PM.

just like aerobic tapes in the US, you will never see anythin but a shelf,
he'll neva make it big, why? cuz hes so wack he cant even quote himself.
the only good feed he'll get is if someone throws him a bone in a online chat,
i could say say ill throw him down, but hes already down on d-mat.
go home man, cuz kansas is just a place of myth and your skill is fiction,
you rep your city as a shithole, so what does that say bout your writtens?
keep this kid red like rubies, cuz thats the closest he'll come to stones,
who knowz though, maybe he'll be able to afford that nice box for a home.
you just a negative, even photos come out on a bad side you gotta be kiddin,
even with eminem on ya team, you still cant come close to dissin.

alrite check. im accepting.

D-mat has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-06 12:37 PM.

venture dont venture far from home..
cuz no intelligent rhymes come from his dome..
hes like dyke jones and im like chamillionaire..
hes the pop faggot, im keeping the rhymes rare..
anyone form the PSA could merk you to hell and back..
but thats not hard, cuz you like tony yayo on wack crack..
i havent seen your verse yet, but one thing i would bet..
is that your not a rap vet, dont step, your a tame pet
and im rap verses lion, excile you like a u.s hawaiiain..
leave you whining for mommy, leave you a crying..
im spitting this without a feed, but your name is all i need..
liek 50 cent you snitch about weed, and after this you read..
you will just back down like a bitch, like 50, go and snitch..
in this battle you lose like the football team from nati..
bitch yous a fatty, like 100% all beef patty..
don't fuck with the PSA, the dy-nas-TAY!
dont worry, i took care of ya mom the other day!

ok pretty sure i left a line out.

you will just back down like a bitch, like 50, go and snitch..
you need soem dark magic aka with to become finacially rich..

sorry bout that

Voted For: Venture

Flow: D
Punches: V
Personals: If any, they were weak..................
Metaz: V
Multies: No One

V - Venture

weak battle....venture, u did ge tthis, but u dont want the readers to have to think, when u post lines like SO WHAT ODES THAT SAY ABOUT YOUR WRITTENS? takes focus away when u ask questions like that

D-Mat, try to up ya punches and metaphors bro....u were on thee chamillionaire thing, where did 50 come from???
Jus wasnt makin sense to me...u were dissin, not punching... a punch is a COMPLEX Diss+Metaphor

aight thankz for the vote..........................

alrite yea keep the votes coming.

votez are need damn it!...............................

god damn, aint no one voting......................

This was feedback posted for Venture
 

...........................checkin the polls.............

dude, stop checking the pollz on my battlez. if u aint gonna vote then dont say shit.

alrite people drop some votes.

Voted For: Venture

Venture Took This By Far... D-mat, You Sounded More Like A Chamillionare Track Than A Diss Verse. I Like Ventures Play On You Name With The Mat Thing. He Just Came Harder And Had The Advantage Overall. You Need To Work On Your Punches And Meta D-mat.

Voted For: Venture

Vote: Venture

Flow was even, both catz flowed aiight. Venture took punches, though they weren't very hard hitting, but they hit harder than D-mats. There was only 1 personal from each, and venture's "already down on d mat" was the stronger one, so he got personals. Only a couple of multis in Ventures drop, and one in Dmats, so Venture took multis. no real wordplay from either cat. Venture took this one.

Vote: Venture

Voted For: Venture

venture u lines were better
just like aerobic tapes in the US, you will never see anythin but a shelf,
he'll neva make it big, why? cuz hes so wack he cant even quote himself
that was a good opener and the rest lines were pretty good


d-mat u just startin out so tats ok u gotta get better u know tat
venture dont venture far from home..
cuz no intelligent rhymes come from his dome..
u could do better dud but u tryin

vote venture

plz rtf dudes
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Voted For: Venture

venture cuz his punches were a lot stronger, more flow and i had a chuckle or two also his rhymes we "tied" much better