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Old 01-18-06, 10:34 AM   #1
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tech skillz vs JC REAL

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Old 01-18-06, 10:38 AM   #2
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JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-06 10:38 AM.
 
Old 01-18-06, 11:35 AM   #3
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Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-06 11:35 AM.
 
Old 01-18-06, 11:54 AM   #4
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You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
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Old 01-18-06, 05:20 PM   #5
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as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin

*phat = cool

they its all in the name of fun boy,
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Old 01-18-06, 05:35 PM   #6
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This was feedback posted for JC REAL

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id say you both did good..................................
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Old 01-18-06, 05:47 PM   #7
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Voted For: Tech Skillz

Flow: Tech
Punches: Tech
Personals: MEH
Multies: NO ONE
Metaz: Tech

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ok, tech jus out right won this...

JC, that line about beatin ur child... NOT RITE, shouldnt have even put that in there....

Tech had the flow, punches and metaz....

JC, elevate

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Old 01-18-06, 05:58 PM   #8
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thanks for the vote........uppin for more votes........
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Old 01-18-06, 07:13 PM   #9
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Voted For: Tech Skillz

tech cuz, i felt no flow in JC's verse, tech had better punches and his rhymes were much better

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Old 01-18-06, 07:39 PM   #10
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thanks for the vote, uppin for more votes here..........
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Old 01-18-06, 10:12 PM   #11
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twenty 9 vote shouldnt count he voted against me because i know him and because i beat him in a battle and im in a battle against him know
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Old 01-19-06, 12:49 PM   #12
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show me some links and i won't count it, other than that it's honest to me since it's true i am whopping your ass....lol
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Old 01-19-06, 01:11 PM   #13
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JC REAL:
as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
5/10 - Good Multi's.
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
3/10 - Bad.
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
3/10 - gay n played.
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
2/10 - he fuckin' wit a easy win.
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
5/10 - ok punch.
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin
3/10 - stupid closer.

=21/60

You had a good flow, your punches were pretty bad, you didnt use any good wordplay. Up ya Game!



Tech Skillz:
You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
6/10 - Good Punch.
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
6/10 - haha, niice punch.
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
5/10 - decent.
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
6/10 - Good Wordplay.
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
4/10 - Weak Closer.

=27/50

You had a good flow, you used some strong hitten punches, and some good wordplay.


OVERALL:Tech Skillz gets my vote, he had the better punchlines, his wordplay was better. He used good multi's and overall had a good verse, made me chuckle a couple or times.
JC your rhymes need some serious work. Your flow is ok, you use some good multi's but your punchline are basic and played and you dont have any wordplay. Work on this shit or stick to battlin' newbs - Just advice, no Hate!

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Old 01-19-06, 02:28 PM   #14
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thanks for the vote killaz, uppin to finish this shit
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Old 01-19-06, 05:26 PM   #15
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my vote 4 tech was not a hate votem really do think he was better, so JC stop searchin 4 excuses and take the loss like a man
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