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Tha Q. 01-18-06 10:34 PM

FEATURED TRACK FEB 9-16:"Lord, I want to live again"...Gdeuce and Tha Q...holla
 
http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox


^Click on "Lord, I want to live again"



Layout:

Intro: GDeuce

Hook: Written and Performed by Gdeuce

Verse 1: Gdeuce

Verse 2: Tha Q

**The producer make the 2nd verse 26 bars, so Deuce and I split them.

After my verse, Deuce spits for 4 bars, then I finish up with 6.

The track ends with the hook.


COncept: Gospel/inspiration themed track...Honest confession to God and one's self.


Holla

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219985
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219946

Past Tense 01-18-06 10:37 PM

Aight...peepin this out now

Production:This beat is a guitar beat...i dont like the guitar beats:6/10

flow:1rst:was ok....the flow fit but voice didn't fit the beat,2nd:damn this was good..i was feeling this more...most def.

emotion;1rst:had good emotion most def. it was hot,2nd:yeah i liked ur emotion it was good.....u sounded like u meant all of what u said

pressense:1rst:for this type of beat yeah it fit it good,2nd:Your pressense was wow..iit was illy on this track..nice


Overall:This is a ok song ...nothin i'd listen too too much.its alright
7.5/10

BigTony.Self 01-18-06 10:38 PM

g duece sound solid here.. intro decent..verse sounds a lil over mixed but the dubbs work well hook and vibe are real nice different aspect right here that rapverse hasn t seen q voice come in real nice sounds real good dubbs always solid verse is reallll good job here by yall i think its a turn for rapverse and another dimension added holla atcha boyee

G Deuce 01-18-06 11:43 PM

uppin fa sho.........................

Tha Q. 01-19-06 11:08 PM

sup gd







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Paranoid 01-20-06 07:02 PM

damn, this beat is fire! I like the intro sayin a nice prayer, that's dope. I'm doin a track to god as well but it's not on a sorrow type beat, I'm kinda makin it seem hype and shit. but this was good. I wanna collab with both of you sometime but shit I'ma say it like this both of you compared was good 2 different flows, 2 different deliverys. I have been feelin a lot of deuces shit lately. deuce you had a dope approach wit your lyrics, the hook was even pretty dope. Q I thought you gave the track a real twist with your fast flow. your lyrics were also good. overall dope track so I downloaded it. I'ma listen to it a lot now.

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Tha Q. 01-20-06 08:39 PM

^^I don't recall flowin fast...but, aiight



preciate da feed







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L-A-C 01-20-06 09:55 PM

the beat is cool....1st mcee the flow is a little to bit slow....lyrics are felt though like Slug....delivery is laid back with a emotionless monotone....chorus fits the track...second mcee outshines the first....the flow is a better....delivery is better and the monotone is dope....lyrics are felt...nice track

return the fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220095

Tha Q. 01-21-06 12:45 AM

preciate da feed












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Dabatos 01-22-06 04:32 PM

word to another gospel song =P lol.. the intro was dope.. the beat im really feelin. .iono really on how u find all these great beats fam lol.. the lyrics were very good.. you always pull something new with every new song u make man.. much props... delviery was great and everything.. oh and this goes to both emcees in here lol

Dabatos 01-22-06 07:11 PM

RTF plz :(

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220210

Tha Q. 01-23-06 08:10 PM

thank you sir








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Shawn Phillips 01-23-06 09:03 PM

damn G Deuce u got a SICK voice.. damn.. lyrics are HOT, flows sick, deliverys hot, damn dood, we need to collab fo real! holla at me man (aim: ShawnPhillips905)

hook- lyrics r pretty coo, its pretty hot.

Tha Q - pretty hot too, i think ure quality through this off, but the lyrics r pretty coo, deliverys nice, emotions coo.

and this beats fuckin sick, hook me up? :)

anyways, tracks hot, im feelin this lots. nice drop fa real
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220299
holla back^

Enygma 01-24-06 06:56 PM

G Deuce sounds like Scarface on this one. I'm liking the verse you spit on this one. You could have used a little more presence than you did though. Q came with some better delivery. I'm def feeling this track though.....

Q.....hit me up for a collab on this religious tip if you want :thumbup:™

Tha Q. 01-24-06 07:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shawn Phillips
damn G Deuce u got a SICK voice.. damn.. lyrics are HOT, flows sick, deliverys hot, damn dood, we need to collab fo real! holla at me man (aim: ShawnPhillips905)

hook- lyrics r pretty coo, its pretty hot.

Tha Q - pretty hot too, i think ure quality through this off, but the lyrics r pretty coo, deliverys nice, emotions coo.

and this beats fuckin sick, hook me up? :)

anyways, tracks hot, im feelin this lots. nice drop fa real
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220299
holla back^



Good to know I ruined da track :thumbup:



and yea...Enygma...you know it's w/e man

hit me up with a beat and a concept...it's all gravy

Ebircs 01-24-06 07:59 PM

intro is nice...

beat is sick...u come in a lil harsh...sound a bit like scarface...flow is good here..lyrics seem...deep..good shit no complaints...

hook is slow n shit..nice emotion on it...

damn bro..Q come in hella nice,wow...lyrics is nice man..and the delvery brings them out nicely man...flow is always on n shit...hoot holagan line was nice,

the 8x8 is nice here too....like how u said jesus at the end here...good track man

Feed used 1/24/06 "Unfinished Dream Ft TitoBronsky"

Lil C 01-25-06 12:52 PM

holy shit! Took me a min to check dis...sorry i aint leave no feed earlier. But dis was a dope track!.....Luved da flow(sick as hell) all of ur verses were dope but imma have to say G's and Q's were betta....n G damn!!! Da voice; phew....newayz dope track guyz....1

Tha Q. 01-25-06 12:54 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil C
holy shit! Took me a min to check dis...sorry i aint leave no feed earlier. But dis was a dope track!.....Luved da flow(sick as hell) all of ur verses were dope but imma have to say G's and Q's were betta....n G damn!!! Da voice; phew....newayz dope track guyz....1



it's just me and G on the track


lol

thax for the feed tho


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Lil C 01-25-06 01:52 PM

huh oopsie my BAD..........thought i heard 3 different voices:(feels horrible now....lol well then da WHOLE song was dope then; well there was a verse dat seemed a lil choppy

Tha Q. 01-25-06 02:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil C
huh oopsie my BAD..........thought i heard 3 different voices:(feels horrible now....lol well then da WHOLE song was dope then; well there was a verse dat seemed a lil choppy



probably my last 6 lines at the end

lol


neway...preciate da feed






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G Deuce 01-26-06 09:10 AM

hahahaha, uppin one last time.

Tha Q. 02-10-06 05:35 AM

ahhhhhhh...good to see something other than the "norm" being recognized



Yep...I'm bout to get back into recording.


Be on the look out for it.


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