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01-18-06, 09:49 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Sexin ft. Untamed HOOOTTT
IP: 12E7 3621
www.myspace.com/mcpasttense
yeah peep that out i'll rtf on w/e just drop links links ----- http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2623541 --- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218805 |
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01-18-06, 09:57 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Club style track dont usually impress me. Quality is solid [/jealous] Track is good, but its very generic concept and shit. Beat is club, Liek i said not a big fan of club shit.
hook again is club, second verse, same its very generic club style shit. Not saying thats bad, just personally not my preferance of rap. And word to you using my definition of hip hop on your mysapce  |
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01-18-06, 09:59 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
lol word..i had too do it for dem haters sayin white people cant rap
yeah we wanted too somthing quick so i wrote it down in 5 mins and hte hook in 2 then i recorded it and he did his shitbut thanks  |
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01-18-06, 10:20 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
ok typing as I listen.......beat is very amateurish sounding......u opened wit hook but it didn't really have a catch phrase that really HOOKED me in....u was lacking that major factor in ya hook.......flow is decent...its shaky in spots....an its basic in general...coulda changed it up.....second dude I wasnt feeling his voice or delivery but his flow was decent.......all in all this was a subpar track IMO..no hate jus coulda been alot better especially as a club track biggest thing is the HOOK an u feel short there to me........anyways keep dropping....stay up........1
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01-18-06, 10:31 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I like the beat
who spit 1st? when you said "day", it sounded like "SDAY, SDAY" flow is coo tho... lyrics are lackluster...topics like this one are common. So, you have to come with creative imagery to pull them off wassup with the pause between the 1st verse and the hook? I thought the track was over already... decent track...lacks appeal though Feed used 1-18-06 "lord i want to live again" 1 Last edited by will appear : 01-20-06 at 02:52 PM. |
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01-18-06, 10:32 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
I spit first...
yay thanks tho i'll def. hit ya'll back |
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01-19-06, 09:17 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
aight uppin this once again
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