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D523 vs *Antic*
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10-14 lines no being gay no d/r no crew votes anddd yeah dont be gay good luck :uptight: Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 01-23-06 at 11:56 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 12:05 AM.
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*Antic* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 12:54 AM.
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Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy* Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right... I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like! It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe That when battling me?? You audio league*** *Sodomy is anal sex ** Tight end , wide receiver - gay sex ***- Audio(out of yo) league |
Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'... Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'// I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders... Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'// Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'// |
good job,
bumpin this battle up |
BUMP, cmon vote on this shit
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Voted For: *Antic*
Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension Blah played as fuck Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy* mehhhh Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right... I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like! played but iiight It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique iiight It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” no ......bullshit My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** ..................................... Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe That when battling me?? You audio league*** wack closer basiclly you had bad punches some were played and most were juss dumb flow was iight Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'... D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// LMAO good punch/personal nice opener Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// iiiight I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// nahhhh I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'... Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'// iight but played concept I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders... Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'// nope not feeling it Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'// nice closer overall antic had beter punches and he flowed better nice personals too |
love to know how my first line is played.. but ok
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uppin this shitttt
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This was feedback posted for D523
Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// ^comics and jokes usually don't have funny names, but funny material....plus, the punch has horrible wording Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// ^ how is his style like rotting flesh falling off? that doesn't make sense, and i doubt he's a lepper I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// man, say some real shit...his style's not a book, you are not hitler...and the punch is played I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'... Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'// d of 5 guys? wtf? you're number 23? WTF?....not a bad punch, horrible wording and concept is played I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders... Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'// ^best punch in the battle, shoulda said posters though, cause i dont pin up my pictures, i frame them Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'// ^who cares about seeing crack, thats a fucking bad thing, and the punch fuggin sucked Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension ^played concept, but not bad Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy* ^barely rhymes, but not bad, kinda gay though Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right... I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like! ^played concept It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique ^creative, wording poorly though It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” ^concept played, and you didn't take his lunch :shoot: My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** ^oooh, seen this before as well *smh*, not bad Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe That when battling me?? You audio league*** ^a good punch if not bitten, this won the battle yeah, both you need to step up, d523 won this because he had better overall punches, other dude, you need to get ideas of better concepts, word |
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OMFG YOU ARE SO WHACK AND YOU DESERVE TO DIE, YOU ARE NOT ELITE, YOU ARE SUCH A FUCKING DICKRIDER, wowowowowooww, holy shit, antic did not win |
everyone's a critic...just a fuckin' textbattle...means nothin'...ayo if peepz gonna take time to do a break down of the verses, don't just say "this sucks" or "that's wack", explain some shit...that's just dumb.
uppin'. |
Voted For: *Antic*
this was a nice battle man............dopeness this was good and close. creativity: D523 wordplay: ANTIC punches: D523 flow:ANTIC overall verse: ANTIC word. nice battle guy's. |
these people man.. i appreciate the vote, but, if we both have 2, how does he win?
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man, your whole verse was dumb, what do you want me to explain...everything was fake personals....you had no wordplay, no creativity....like, both of you dropped whack, but D523 at least had some creative stuff, with wordplay, with actual punches....you just came out, and stated the gayest shit....like, how do you bar and code someone? WTF is that?!?! |
look man, it's cool that you know a lot, but it ain't cool to degrade both of us for workin' to elevate. No cat is born instantly ill as fuck, it just don't happen. That's why you got like 7,000 posts and we got like a hundred or so.
Don't hate. It takes the fun outta shit, I just do this text shit for tha hell of it, to sharpen my mind. Sorry I ain't Jin or whatever. D523, the votes are off, that last dude's vote didn't make sense really. we kin scrap that shit if ya want. |
This was feedback posted for D523
I just want to check the polls.. because this was posted in LL and normally I wouldn't even do this, but I don't care..
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im just sayin to get that dudes vote out of here, he said i had better punches and more creativity and then gives you the vote! with no explination. get that shit out of thereee
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Bumppppppppppppp
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what would you rather me do? baby you like all the other hurting noobs? ask fucking D523, when he first came, he was soooo shitty, but he elevated a hella ton, and i treated him the same way....buddy, its criticism, if you can't take it, shove off, you're actually handling it better than most, but its better for someone to come right out and say you're whack, they fancying it up saying shit like "oh, it was aigh, but whatever" ^ thats not advice, criticism, anything...i tell you whats up, and i'll try to give you a few pointers...i'm not the best, but i know some shit cause i have been here for a while....but yeah, text is for fun, i just have seeing people like paramik, who don't know diddly squat, nah saying? |
true.. haha i remember i rode your ass askin for battles. when i was hittin you with punches that were like.. i swear to god, your a frod, i fucked your mom without her thong on like sischo with the thong song :)
ahhh the good days haha BUT FORREAL VOTE ON THIS FUCKING BATTLE :) |
This was feedback posted for D523
uppin this battle.. yeah, its D523 lol
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bumppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppp
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uppin this.............................................. ...............
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uppinnnnn this..........
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fucking. vote. or. else.
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damn people........................just vote...........................
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vote......................
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Voted For: D523
Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension ^^ good punch cuz you flipped the stick out* wordplay new, with a clever metaphor -My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** ^^ good wordplay, decent punch, i was ganna use that wide receiver concept before. vs. Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'// ^^ this if u worded it better, and most of your stuff wasn't really worded right .... anyway return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220983 |
thanks man and yeah ill return the favor
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uppin thisssssss
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uppin this shitt
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Voted For: *Antic*
though atleast 1 of Antic's personals was one hell of a stretch and an awful force... I think over all he had the harder hitting punches in this battle, coupled with a better structure and stronger flow... Opener: Antic Closer: D523 (I fucked with the audio line) Punches: Antic Personals: Antic Creativity: Antic Complexity: Antic Vocab: Antic Vote: Antic Though it doesn't look like it from my breakdwon I think this is the closest battle I've seen Antic in at this site yet |
for the love of everything holy.............vote..................post a link and I'll RTF.....................
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This was feedback posted for *Antic*
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873
first of all return the fav on my battle i think u got him knock him out the box rtf |
how about we get some votes up in hea
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Voted For: *Antic*
Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'... D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// Vs It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” V/antic......came wit more quotables...an had a more consistent verse that had some decent concepts.....RTF in the sig |
Voted For: D523
..Audio is pronounced Odd-e-oh, not Out of yo....forced. |
Get that shit out of here now...it was a mistake. BTW, weak ass battle.
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