-I cant wait-
 

venting on this track,you wont be dissapointed.
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I cant wait

hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4100237&q=hi

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228324
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227496

Nice beat choice, LE used this in a ill ass song once. But it's yea a good beat choice. Your emotion is pretty good, your breathe runs short though from trying so hard it seems. But that might just seem like that cuz your vocal volume is to low for this hard beat. I'd say turn it up a bit more man. Your hook wasn't to bad, the quality is way better now and your more fluent on the beat. not bad man, keep it up.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230367

Listening...

Loved working with this beat...got me on the radio :cool:

Wow...quality is horrible...hook was alright I suppose. Pretty choppy though.

Your delivery is good. It doesnt change but it's good. Flow is pretty good, nice and fast, vocals are pretty low. Flow does fall off due to your gasping at some points in the track.

Overall, pretty good from your last stuff. Keep it up.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230369

listening.....

i like the intro to the beat....midievil type ish....

hook kicks in....first thing i notice is quality is lacking....hook goes with the beat...i feel if it was mixed better...itd be more catchy...but its kinda muffly.....

also if you added like some whispering in the background of the hook..it would add to it...hooks where u take a lot of spaces inbetween words benefit from that......its almost like a 2nd hook in the background if u know what i mean


lyrics are good....from what i can hear.....everything is coo really....

just up the quality.....

please rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

apreciatte the feed, will hit tracks up soon.

pretty dope man keep droppin .




hooks ok and uhh verse is coo. :cool:

is there a verse on this track????

all i hear is the beat... damn kid... i thought you was gonna drop a lil somthing....

eh.... w/e...

UPP YOUR VOCALS if there are any laid on this track :thumbup:

vocals seem a lil, iunno, heavy but at the same time sounds like there's too much delay or somethin. it's like your too far away from the mic. maybe it's just the mic. flow is on point though, beat's not my type but it fits your delivery good. lyrics were decent, eh it's gettin a lil boring now, like the rhyme scheme is staying exactly the same. needs layers or adlibs or somethin. so what is it just like one long verse w/ 2 hooks? shit was kinda weird

play it hi fi bro.

its obvious you need to up your vocals...maybe start to dub your shit....if you dubbed the i cant wait part itd sound good, you feel off in the first once or twice......the hook could be good....its not bad just learn production skills...n youll move up quick....

RTF - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479

Appreciatte the feed. Links will be hit up in a few hours when i get on a computer that doesnt have a pop up/cookie blocker.

*listening*



beat is tight i'm feeling it madly...flow was nice u had a couple of multis there..dats a plus..and yeah u got nice breathe control...tight....only thing is u shud try making ur vocals clear xcept ur mic is cheap cos i heard it on hi fi and was kinna blur to my hearing...anyways hook was simple and nice,fit the tempo quite well..this is something i cud clap to rather than nod to..lol..keep them coming tho...props once again!


hit my sig

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up!

Beatspretty sick, your delivery is different but yeah i like it, has a lot of energy and the flows constantly on point.

Lyrics sound decent for the most point but are a bit 'muffled' at some points, hook thing fits in.

Overall it was solid and packed with energy, i liked it mate.

decent stuff.

lol, i used this beat for a joke song, it's tight tho man, qualitys not great but acceptable....flows on....volume is a bit to low...flows here, delevery is a tad low...yeah, amp ur vocals a bit tho...hard to hear you, lyrics seem ok, from what i could hear..not special but not bad, shoulda done something w the 5 seconds open their, hooks not bad but not much energy into it...u need to noise reduct also...

not bad....

appreciate the feed, Ill hit one of your tracks up soon.

Listenin', yeah beat is on the anthem tip fam, nice choice, heard it before but its real tight...aight well first thing I notice is your accent..its not hurting tho..hook is a nice touch, I like the lyrics and the verse is decent too...flow is ookay but the best thing is your emotion, thats real nice...and breath control is good..but what you do gtta work on is the flow and speaking up on some words...quality aint good, if you had better mixing specially on the hook shit wud be alot more nicer...so what I suggest in this song..try work on the presence and the flow..dont pack as many words in and use more small-syllable multis nah mean...nice track I was quite taken away by the effort you made nice...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...687#post2778687

can you rtf plz thanks

Thanks will hit your link up soon.

Aighhh

I love this beat!!!

Word
Hook?? if it is its nice i like the flow like stop thing nice

flows nice,feelin it...deliverys koo,could come more natural...but that'll come over time,man you mad improved snce i last heard you on RV mixtape,flows real nice...presence is koo,seem confident,qualitys better,could be mixed better...lyrics are really nice man,feelin it..


Good track,jus work on your quality

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I see your hittin up every else but mine :(...cud u please rtf

my bad bro, thought Ill got at yours.
Ill get at it now.

It's koo and thanks alot

yo that link shit won't work for me. post your SC up foo!

wipe that jizz from your eyes then son.

http://www.soundclick.com/2kn

word

^Lmao.

*jizzes*


*runs*

lmao stfu bitch. :mad:

aiight peepin

beat on some lord of the rings type shit in intro. lmao iunno... but uhh aiight finally it starts.

hook i think this is, nice emotion and shit. but upp vocals some. But hook nice tho. i like it

first verse, like your delivery and emotion shit's coo. nice flow, lyrics sound coo, but can't really tell much cuz a lil low. but flow fall of a tiny bit, nothing to worry about tho. overall good verse. lol damn this a long verse. I'm guessing just one long ass verse? lol hook again. word nice lil joint man. only big problem was volume. made it hard to hear a bit. but good shit son. I'd give it a 8.5, but since you made that jizz comment you can get a 8/10 :love:

EZ

thanks, appreciatte it.