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"Cry ft. Konvict"

Another addition to my cd "Inside My Lifestyle". We both kinda just went blah with it.

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word up is this our track, if it is im Konvict and u aint uploaded it yet

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QUEENS TO BROOKLYN ALL DAY FT TRIPLE N

oh sorry man.....

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Returning the feed.

Nice intro,attention grabbing, solid quality, your flows come along way since ..chikka chikka, yeh wigga wigga -_- lol.
Good dubs. emotion could be a bit better, sound a bit monotonous, but meh, not that signifigant. just enthuisiasm I feel you could up, sound like your not enjoying being on the mic, dunno if Im simpyl missing your style, but yeh, just speaking what i hear bro.

Like this hook...
second dude take track over, nice flow, nice emotion, sound's cool,rounds the track up nicley


overall good track.

listening.......sample in the beat is ok...

beat is coo...i dunno...im not feeling it a lot though.....

uh oh...para is getting better with it.....quality stepped up a lot...only thing i really feel u need to work on is the flow still...its still a lil choppy...although it has gotten tons better...here in a couple months...youll be beast with it.....

kon.....presence is nice as hell...flow is nice........lyrics are nice.......really i dont have any complaints with this....just a good verse....youve improved like hell.....


nice track fellas...i was liking this shit......good job...

please rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

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Aight

Para...flows gettin better,first thing i notice is your quality...nice,deliverys koo,could be upped a bit...feelin the lyrics...jus need to work on your flow a lil.

Kon...............flows nice,lyrics koo...feelin em,like the delivery,emotions dope...feelin it,presence is nice....i like it.Good verse

Koo track,just need to work on your flow para,i thought it ended a lil weird with the lil clap thing...but koo shit

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thanks for the feeds, I'll get up on them links in a bit.

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beats straight..iono not my typa beat.......those effects were ion just not doin it for me......yo paranoid....u got good voice and emotion and pressense..but you gotta up the way you flow..it sounds kinda choppy in some parts..u gotta spit it all at once in stead of bit by bit..tyr it out man..trust me...it helps a lot..like instead of sayin it like for example:ie "I-Like-Your-Hat" say "I like your hat" ya feel me

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*listening*


i like the fade in effect...paranoid ur lyrics were tight..ur voice was quite balanced moe than kon's...yeah i liked ur verse only thing if it didnt really really really flow...but ay it was iight...i'm liking this beat and the hook is quite nice too..i'm kinna caught up in the mood...kon ur verse had a tight flow....i liked ur verse only thing is ur voice wasnt all that balanced..lol u kinna went up and down a lil in several places but ay it wud take a maginifying ear to hear that,i guess,so it aint a huge prob...overall nice track dudes...i liked it


hit my sig

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thanks for the feed man.....on this song, the beat is okay sounds a lil simple....your volume leves come in good. you sound hesetant on your flow....its like your still reading, it puts you off a lil....sample is the hook, not too much to say im starting to get over the whole sample thing.....konvict aka stacks....you come in loud, its muffles out paranoids verse....but you were really on beat you rode it well, your spit control is getting better....some good stuff but production has to be better, smooth out the rough edges, like difference in verse volume....beat is not that gripping so you need to up the energy a bit, but not a bad track...just keep workin on ya flow

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Listening...

Not feeling the beat...

Paranoid...flow is getting better, but it still seems choppy and slow in some parts...your so close...keep at it...Delivery is very monotonous...it seems like your so concentrated into your flow that you forget to deliver it properly. Just keep working on it. Quality was decent.

Kon...I couldn't understand alot of your verse. I dont know if it was your dubs or what, but I dunno, the words just seemed kinda muffled to me. Flow was good. Delivery was appropriate.

Overall, good track. Keep it up both of you.

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thanks for the feed, everyone keeps sayin the same thing bout my verse so I'm good enough for feed. My flow will always be better then this though.

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