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Pure Changes *SOME DEEP SHIT*
yeah just about my life man
this has gotta be one of the best songs i've ever DONE REAL TALK! take a listen lemme know what u think DROP A LINK IF U WANT FEED!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4399388 Links --------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234300 ====== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234412 |
lol FO SHO
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Sup fam this was dope ! not the best at leaving audio feedback,..
But then production was nice, voice carried well. Nice tune. 1~ |
yo thanks for the feed
wtf is up wit people not rtf uppin |
22 views and 1 reply?? COME ON
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what up....this is pretty good man....a bit more passion in this coulda been used.....well i guess cuz im comparing it to the eminem version....but you s's are hissing pretty harsh....but the lyrics are real which adds some validity to the song.....the hook is a strech but it works....good shit
i guess if you wan you can rtf the favor on that cho song that im on.... things i do or somethin...yep |
alright man i'll get at you with some feed
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alright i jus listened to it but im listening to it again jus so i dont miss anything
this beat is hot. for real. definitely matches the emotion that you wanna capture for this kinda song. i like the kids playing in the intro. your first verse kicks right in. as for emotion i think u got that. lyrically this was real cool. its always cool to hear someone jus let go of things and lay it out on a track. that part where u started talkin about church and God was real cool. i remember going through that same phase. chorus - im not feelin this as much as the verse. but the lyrics and the message are good second verse comes in. this is actually a good song. i like how real you're rapping. those are the best songs. it seems like u really dug deep to let this kinda stuff out. overall a pretty good song. the only thing i wasnt too excited about was the chorus, but those verses were well written. good job man. keep it up |
First thing i noticed is your Production... if id known idda been peepin you...
1st Verse:... i like what you speakin on.... the whole church thing you speakin on... powerfull... Hook: deep.... catchy... growin on me... 2ndVerse: deeper than the 1st verse... if you speaking on your life.. thats some shizzle... i feel you.... i gotta to give you props on dropin some serious thought out music... you got your production tight bro... your vocals seem very crisp... what kinda Mic you using??? At anyrate... you holding it down fam... Keep makin songs/ music like this.... cuz this is one of the deeper songs to hit the boards and its actualy very enjoyable.... RTF Don Tito Bronsky |
alright i got ya man
thanks for the feedback |
Rite then.....Beats dope but i expect this to be shit cus of it lol
but its ok your presence is good but you lack in emotion not in the lyrics cus they are deep so you should be putting more into your delivery but this is nice man dont get me wrong hit my shit. |
I just went and peeped out ur music.....I couldn't understand anything you said
no pun intended |
beats sound,
flows on point from the start, voice a little monotone? Still sounds decent, voice and quality are decent, although at some points the effects make you sound like you hav a lisp... hook was sound, more emotion in second verse, a lot better. sick lyrics. good stuff man. |
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Damn kid u needa stop frontin all ur tracks are shit u might have a flow but you stay rappin bout a fantasy of urs how u gon tell me where eva the fuck ur from ur ridin on 26 inch giovanas and u got this and that u don't kid stop actin hard u soft this ain't hate this is tellin u switch ur words u rappin to much bout shit u don't got
str8 up wanksta style right there and don't be like man im fuckin wit rokz and klerk im so big cuz them light weights this rap board shit ain't nothin no one eva makes it off this here so get ur ass off the net and start sendin ur demos out start tourin start sellin ur tape if u so serious bout rap if not its koo if this ur hobby and all understand that but don't think ur gon get signed by sittin on some rap board |
^^lol your hilarious
wanksta shit? this is a song about my life.......you gotta get off my nuts I just had a show tonight.....i'm working with people who make money trust me You have no reason too come in here even hating on me...........cuz chances are your problay wack as fuck lol I grew up with out parents.......I grew up in a 40,000 dollar house....just like i said this is my life.....this is my pain this is my love this is my gain...you can say that you know me you can say your my homie....simple n plain untill you know me.....i say fuck you you dont know SHIT about me....so get off my nuts quick........or step up and battle |
oh yeah by the way the internet is problay one of the best places these days too get signed especillly through myspace....but like i said again i'm 16 not worried about shit right now i'm moving too either new york or california when i turn 18.....then ill be worried about rapping serious for now i'm just building my skills
thats all i'm saying |
the hook is aight nice mix n shit flow seemed to be the same thru out voice is cool subject is cool hook is still ehh too me but yeah it grows on me .lol overall verses was str8 sounds kinda like ll cool jays last album lol gud drop
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Listenin'...
I think you got a lil too much reverb on this..thats my only complaint.. Delivery: This is working alot for you, in this track you spoke up with confidence and delivered the emotion perfectly... Emotion: Flowing off the delivery comment, emotion is perfect here..you can tell you meant it and I feel what you mean about your pops, this is real you can tell that you rlly feelign this... Flow: Havent heard it fall off in this track...it stayed on beat Hook: When I first heard it to be honest i was like ehh...kinda ruined the song but it got better and grew on me...alot.. Lyrics: Personal...Good Overall: Fam, audio-wise you kept this song real nice, also you had that emotion and deepness and I respect that...this is definitely a dope song.. ***Downloads*** Yo fam when we gonna collab man?.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234990 can you rtf please |
haha nah paste tense im talkin bout one of the otha tracks i peeped u rappin obut how u ridin wit this in that and how u got all this when u don't ur shit ain't official stop acting like it is www.myspace.com/theprovidenceproject IM OFFICIAL u lightweight
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Ayo Dope shit man fiya, yah hooks was decent u dropped on-time i like it
Real deep man catchy tune if u kno what im sayin felt it.. Overall: 8/10 I got pretty into the song was feelin it good vibe, deep shit personally great... RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235001 |
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You got G UNIT in your sig I really doubt your "official" by the way having a myspace doesnt make you too official either i haven't heard one track from you |
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woooooooooorrrrrrrrrddddd. |
^^ i will soon as i get home......this computer i'm on is too slow too hear anything on
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real official.. |
Your dumbass kid ima fuckin promoter im not a rapper
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its not private no more they had it like that when the web designer was editing it
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anyone could have a myspace lol your fuckin lame
hahah next he's gonna post a soundclick....get the fuck out |
ok ill check this out.........
vocals were alright could hear u good lyrics were great man no problem there they were great beat ,well i had used that beat not that bad of a beat flow was great whent to the beat it when great with the flow of the song hook was all right i didnt like the first line but the rest of it nice end offs were koo overall it was worth the playback i'd give it a 8.3/10 great trax u can rtf later when i drop otha trax maybe tonight...werd |
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