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Multi Battle - Mr Multie vs N.Tavarez
 Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Eastern No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = Vote Deduction Swaying = Vote Deduction Must Vote On Four Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Saturday Night New Battles Up Sunday Morning For Full Rules Click Here Both battlers must aim to drop the best multi's in their verse. This is the first time the LBL has hosted a battle of this type! |
I'll post my verse in the morning make sure you drop T u requested our battle lol
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alright, but let me know how many lines you doing
i got 3 other battles i gotta drop for |
Let me warm up lol g/l Tav
Im diss'n clowns who learn they're, no match when my words there Go wild for days, ya style is plaid, but im not misprounce'n da shirtwear . . . Multies my style, while homie u hardly can spit, let me mention ur neglected n' sorry as shit U can call me a bitch, prick u fall'n with this, i'll make ur addition sit-com like bobby n' whit Come w/ monster spits, clock n' pop ya bitch ya shit is gay, cuz facts is u not stop'n this I've cop'd the win, cuz frankly with the spot ur in, u beat'n me is unheard of like lobster lips Quote:
Try to drop me, i get it crack'n like concrete, stop T, ur going no where with ya plot frees Off my cock please, leave rattled n' cocky, battle'd mad heads but still have yet shock'd me Like hemorrhoids my ass is ill, my raps are real, clap n' personals safe to say da facts'll kill U vs. me? ur way overmatched in skills, but im itch'n to get @ this pussy without da vagisil I'll leave ya soul crushed, nice rec but so what, dome bust, then creamated n' bones dust U get'n no luck, throw flame i'll roll up, but neva met a metal opponent, i doubt this foes tuff Ya kno what? bow down pussy i'll grade ya tho, on call u could cut a cell wita razor phone Hated hoe, fuck how did u make it tho?, brown bags in water's how T change his flow . . . Swept and broom'd this victim, my multies heavy and fused with sickness U wack see, you only got half my keys like a petty apprentice to musicians Fuck it your rhyme'ns a sin, OMB is next, and your not liver then him U gangsta? bitch ur fresh ink, i kno you've never serve time in a pen Match Me...N. Tav lets get this to legends homie |
alright 18 lines you posted, ima try and match you today latest tomorrow morning i didnt think you'd show so i didnt start writing
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Well if its possible drop by today
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sorry for the half ass, i gotta get writing for my other battles too
this knife leave U soaking you'll be broken in two, provoking ya doom from open tombs you'll go from mr. multi to mr. multiple wounds im breezing em by, mad skills, son believe its no lie the only thing you do good i champed the league in 05' get punches thrown to ya stomach so let me know if you want it and leave em smoking longer than chain smoking 100's Me, all in, the way ya teams falling seems appalling I'll make you fly so high Jim Jones'll scream "ballliiiiinnnnng" Take some for the road, land punches when I swung for his nose When Mr hand key,his verse resemble da one on dat show Multi on the brink of regret, think he a threat but "I'm Simply the Best" your shit puts cats to sleep mine'll have em resisting arrest wrap it up, you dont practice enough, you wack ass fuck who uses multi's in they rhymes to mask the fact that they suck? Im trashing this geek, you asking for beef? get back in ya seat I'll smash ya teeth on on concrete so you can rap for the streets Your a practical dumb spoof,Already mastered my gun use And take ya dome off like it came with a retractable sun roof |
for a multi battle, this shit was straight.. but majority of both of you's work was kinda forced.. like yo'd go off of the same rhyme until you ran outta words which makes it choppy and off to me. for example:
tav. Me, all in, the way ya teams falling seems appalling I'll make you fly so high Jim Jones'll scream "ballliiiiinnnnng" yeah, i know you got teams falling, then scream ballllllliiiiiinnnnng or w/e, but the end rhyme seems appalling has an extra syllable which makes it flow different. Multi on the brink of regret, think he a threat but "I'm Simply the Best" your shit puts cats to sleep mine'll have em resisting arrest k, so once again brink and simp don't exactly rhyme when i slow it down.. sayig it extra fast is forced btw. mr. multie. really you just forced to much shit in one line.. like you really had stretched lines for text which when i spit it aloud breath control was kinda bad in certain places. you had lines that were cool when it came to flow, but being able to keep goin seemed kinda weird to me, just my opinion though, digg? i kinda found some stuff repetitive.. well, more so soundin the same. k, so both of you KNOW what multis are, of course.. mr. multie probably should've came with more than 2 syllable multis in his verse.. yeah, some were longer, but some were ust two syllable all the way through and the flow was predictable at times. ehh.. tav seemed more in order to me.. like from the openin 2 lines i thought his verse would be really tight but maybe cause it was rushed it seemed a little off sorta. but tav still came better for a multi battle if you ask me.. v/ tav.. just my thoughts. |
meh..when i spit it out loud its fine to me but thas wassup the object was to have the most multis so i basically did bout 3 in each line and if u spit it right it wont sound stretched
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i know what a mutli battle is lol.
i know you had a lot of multis in each lines.. but it didnt flow smooth. that's my only point. if it doesn't sound smooth when i spit it, then the multis are only half effective it's just my thoughts though man, if you want you can deduct my vote. |
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really, multie might had more multies... but i don't think that was the whole idea of the battle.. i think it was the idea of still punching with hella multies...
IMO i thought Tav had iight multies n delivered a witty punch with them that makes me lean to him... prop's to both... shit ima have to hop in 1 these next time V/tav |
i'm not sure how i'm meant to be voting here.. is it meant to go to who had the best multi's, or who had the best diss verse in general? lol
i'd score both to n.taverez anyway.. i defintley think in terms of quantity mr multi had it, but taverz used his multi's a lot better in conjunction with his punches. i liked his opener.. even if the sylabell count was a bit uneven at the begining of his punch. i liked taverz resisting arrest line.. multi's in the set up were cool and the punch wasn't too bad either. i actually liked mr multi's closer.. weird thing was there was no multi's in that set lol. v/ n.taverez |
werd...felt that Tav. came away with a clean win here. Mr. Multi did his thing no doubt but fell hella short to me in the punch category. Still had to drop them fists on nigga.
Tav was pretty effective thru-out his verse and the flow was better than his opponents. V/ N Tav. |
good battle Tav we'll have to do this again lol props tho
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Multi- you had a hell of alot of multis in your verse but your punches didnt really hit or nor where they witty... i think the point of a multi battle is to just ahave some multis in your lines and still have the shit hit and not juts have your bars all multis without having real punches in them... thats what took away from yours
Tav. your shit was funny and had the multi's nothing really bad to say aout your verse V/ Tav |
meh Props Tav. ur the first to beat me in a multi battle im really impressed a re-match will be in order cuz mines was below my usual drop of multis i can think PLK n AB (sites) for that lmao oh well we can still battle in that 3 way with OMB
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Mr. Multi had a lot of multies yes but, most of them where simple as fuck like the lobster lips line. The simplisity of his multies really killed it and made it look like if he lost the shit that I seen in his OM. Me personally Im not just looking for quantity, Im also looking for the quality of the writings. Like yes, mr. multi had the quantity, but anybody could write some of the simple shit he put down. N. Tav put down shit together to make good punches. Its obviouse his shit had more thought put into it. You just have to read this one and see its as one sided really. But good job to both.
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Wish rules were clarified a bit more here. I'm gonna quote anything that sounds hot basically. Doesn't have to be a hard punch, but its preferred
Come w/ monster spits, clock n' pop ya bitch ya shit is gay, cuz facts is u not stop'n this I've cop'd the win, cuz frankly with the spot ur in, u beat'n me is unheard of like lobster lips Like hemorrhoids my ass is ill, my raps are real, clap n' personals safe to say da facts'll kill U vs. me? ur way overmatched in skills, but im itch'n to get @ this pussy without da vagisil vs. this knife leave U soaking you'll be broken in two, provoking ya doom from open tombs you'll go from mr. multi to mr. multiple wounds wrap it up, you dont practice enough, you wack ass fuck who uses multi's in they rhymes to mask the fact that they suck? Im trashing this geek, you asking for beef? get back in ya seat I'll smash ya teeth on on concrete so you can rap for the streets Your a practical dumb spoof,Already mastered my gun use And take ya dome off like it came with a retractable sun roof It's hard to do quotables in a multie-battle, but this is what i came up with. N. Tav finished with some fired and good flow. Opener from N. Tav was my fave line of the battle and really exemplified I think what the point of this was. A really funny punchline that hit hard and had multies. Multie, u had too many multies. Too many takes away the effect of them, 2 or 3 in a line is really the max i think, you had more than that in some of ur lines. The ones I quoted were okay i guess, but the flow was a little shaky on them too. Fun read though for sure. Vote N. Tavarez |
Mr multi had the best multis, tav had the best punches.
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i didn't kno if we were doing punches with multies or just multies so i did multies only really but its all good on the next one rules need to be more specified
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N.Tavarez wins 7-0.
N.Tavarez wins. |
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