Te Ora just to let you know my old name was Led poetic... obviously you aint get the punches huh

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true, i didn't know you had an alias called led poetic..
whats up with explaning others and not that? lol i'd actually drop explanations altogether but wtvr. that line wouldn't have changed my vote.. but my bad for not getting you to clear it up before i dropped it n shit.

I didnt clarify that i was led becaes everyone knows me as led... and led isnt an alias this is... lol

But word its whatever... everyone got different opnions... even if they are a little misconscued

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One week, your either led po, Lamp, or flash....what the fuck?
But I give em props, his last battle wasn't half bad---->coz all of it sucked
Your talking is tough? Man its obviouse all that trash wak
I'll kick you in your spine hard...just to avoid a flashback
And thats that, Coz Im known to spit and surround nerds
Why'd kemp set this up? like if you could actually compound wordz

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This is what wrote, see?? I'll just leave ya missin kid...
And pump ya full of so much Led...RV'll think your my prison bitch
You should just quit this shit, cuz my victory will be relished..
Mangle ya body beyond ugliness...it'd even make ya face jealous
Wordz a fake bitch...just a kid who try to act cool
But your gonna come up short...like the bus you took to school
Ill uppercut you and punch you in the face with my right
N i'd say your audio's good, but your best off the mic

decent battle but Led had more qoutables in my opinion cuz Wordz had them played lines but wasn't too much of a problem both drop pretty decent tho

v-Flash

*props on da prison line lol shit was funny*

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This is what wrote, see?? I'll just leave ya missin kid...
And pump ya full of so much Led...RV'll think your my prison bitch
Wordz a fake bitch...just a kid who try to act cool
But your gonna come up short...like the bus you took to school

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Your talking is tough? Man its obviouse all that trash wak
I'll kick you in your spine hard...just to avoid a flashback

wORDZ MAN YOU MUSTVE SLACKED THIS WEEK CUZ YOU DROP ALOT BETTER THAN THIS AND FLASH YOU HAD A GOOD VERSE THAT LED SHIT MADE ME LAUGH
I GOT FLASH TAKING THIS 2-1 BY QUOTABLES
V/ FLASH

both came lame to me.. really.



i'll be back to return the favor considering you both voted on my battle.

Your talking is tough? Man its obviouse all that trash wak
I'll kick you in your spine hard...just to avoid a flashback

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This is what wrote, see?? I'll just leave ya missin kid...
And pump ya full of so much Led...RV'll think your my prison bitch
You should just quit this shit, cuz my victory will be relished..
Mangle ya body beyond ugliness...it'd even make ya face jealous
Wordz a fake bitch...just a kid who try to act cool
But your gonna come up short...like the bus you took to school

v/ flash....this was a decent one...wordz you had that one line i liked but you feel off in ya verse...your punchs were weak.an personals..flash you had a more consistent verse wit some more quotes the school line was worded good so it hit hard even tho it was conry in a way..the led line i liked...you get my vote

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Word thanks for the votes... i will try and hit everyones battle that voted on this.

5-4 so i aint gotta keep counting votes

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Your talking is tough? Man its obviouse all that trash wak
I'll kick you in your spine hard...just to avoid a flashback

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You dope, nah your a joke so just fucking stop.
I'd say you gotta chip on your shoulder
But thats just who kept you out of the 1-2 playoffs**

This battle was pretty weak, I had to read it a couple times to find a quotable. Flashback concept was pretty cool, just not used well. Chip on shoulder was used well, but concept was eh. After reading the verses a few times, I think Wordz was slightly more consistent. I almost quoted the came up short line, but i used a very similar line awhile ago so it didn't appeal to me.

Vote - Wordz

Your talking is tough? Man its obviouse all that trash wak
I'll kick you in your spine hard...just to avoid a flashback

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nothing.

i didn't like this battle. i know wordz cna come better.. but flash ain't have nothing i was feeling and actually i kind of expected his verse to be lame anyways because of what i saw in the cypher. wordz ahgod stop postin trash btw.

v/ wordzahgod for the one quotable.

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thanks...I was telling flash on AIM that this was like the worst verse Ive ever written lol. I just had too much shit to do in other leagues so I couldn't concentrate to much but I'll drop better next week. 1

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