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Zone Out vs troublesome06
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2 - 2:30 minutes long no hate, no dickriding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-07-06 at 01:53 AM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
troublesome06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-06 01:13 PM.
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check check fugly you reacdy to drop yet.......cuz imwaiting on your faget
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Zone Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-06 11:49 PM.
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Trouble None
BTW, Limited Edition used that same old song of mines when he battled me last year! Just thought I'd let you know |
This was feedback posted for troublesome06
i aint gon vote.....troublesomes flow was better, but zone's punches were better in my opinion......so split for me.
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Voted For: Zone Out
-troublesome- beat is okay..i dont really like it too much..voice sounds kinda funny. sounds like you tryna sound like triple N..flow is on point. you dont really fall off too much. that line about your son spitting up food was kinda cool. ok honestly your flow is getting real boring. you need to switch it up some. ok the end was actually kinda lame. overall i think you coulda done a lot better with this. the flow really needs some kinda switch up cause it sounded boring as the song went on. lyrically you had 2 lines that i actually thought were cool as a diss. other than that it wasnt all that great -zone out- beat choice? hahaha @ the sample and talking. i like this beat. the first thing i noticed was that your vocals were a little too loud. maybe soften that up. flow fell off at one point. your emotion kinda falls off too. lyrically this was okay. the mention of carson jet was kinda lame..that baby back rib line was hella funny. why u gonna hate on mr.rodgers..hahaha @ the hair line..i like that acapella part at the end. you defintely got better since that last time i heard you overall this battle goes to zone out. i think his beat choice was a lot better. and lyrically he had more punches in his verse. the only line i was feelin from troublesome was that spitting up food line. zone out your flow could also use some change ups but you definitely had more disses in there. battle goes to zone out |
Voted For: Zone Out
Troublesome:Okay, right off the bat i see some "similarities" and "influences" on troublesomes track, but i'll let it slide BWAHAHA yo troublesome your voice sounded hillarious comin on the beat. like a prepubescent immortal technique. vocals a little high, sizzle like woah. beat hits hard, but it's not a battle type beat. you come wrong off the beat and that's bringin a knife to a gunfight. lol @ playing with the kid concept. lol @ the lips jokes. zone met his dad lmao, it'd be killer if he didn't. some humerous shit in there, was hoping to hear something that'll break his ribs. damn, your voice sounds funny, sounds like uhhh...you sounds like having probs breathing, like a cancer patient or somethin man lol not to be funny, but your breath sounds the same like that lol. usin that recording, i think that sample was kinda hot personally. that's the shit i wanna see this man get back to. basics! but that gunshot soundeffect at the end was fuckin parcheesy. typical as fuck and oh so weak soundin, like you recorded it off a clock radio. shoulda cut it before that sample and it woulda went out on a high note Zone: lmao dude came in the track hillarious. too bad you can't mix for jiddack. lmao @ porkchops. haha @ raspy voice. could came with something more creative for that. AAHAHAHA @ babyback. good work on the "k.o." set. ironic, seeing that you just came off of one lol. too bad you didnt' have more emotion in the deliv, shit woulda leaped out more. you chumped out on that "beat the shit outta you" bit. haha @ hang w/sadaam lol ok breakin that one in early lol. your speech gets slurred in some parts man, you gotta stay on top of that. Bottom Line: Iight, i listened to both these tracks twice. trouble's shit shit was cool and he flowed well but zone's shit was way funnier so im gonna have to give it to man. shit def aint perfect, but pound for pound zone gave troublesome the business. |
This was feedback posted for troublesome06
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This was feedback posted for Zone Out
Haha props to zone. troubles flow better than i expected. he still duckin me tho. but good battle im not voting for that bitch to complain about hate vote
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Voted For: troublesome06
ight i think imma have to go wit trouble on this.....most the lines zone out had seemed like they can be toward anyone....especially that comb line.....dont like ur flow in this....so yeah anyways decent drop trouble ur flow was smoother...beat was better but i liked zone outs intro....overall i think u got it wit ovewrall better everything.......yall both stay up |
lol how can most of my lines be towards anyone when I addressed his baby, his voice and used his name, addressed his country, his raspy voice, and his style?
I didnt even use a comb line wtf, Ecko? |
This was feedback posted for Zone Out
Canada is the only country to beat the US in a war. Haha, meh both verses were alright, I liked troublesomes better to be honest with you. I won't vote though, just droppin my two cents.
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canada's the only country to beat the US in a war? uhhh...no they're not.
ever heard of the Alamo? lets see if this battle closes in under a month |
I don't know too much about it, see if the US lost, it's rarely talked about because they like to self glory the shit outta themselves. I'll look it up, regardless, Zone Out's Canada war line was weak, because A. We beat the US, B. Even Hitler said if he had Canadian troops instead of German troops he would have won the war. C. I have to go back to work now, peace.
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Voted For: troublesome06
gotta go with this duke... I know I know who you are... but fuck if I can remember your name... which actually makes Zone's punches great... cause they were funny... hit hard and on point... what lost the battle for him... is simple... flow... delivery... mic presence... emotion and ability to ride the beat... You won based on those things and like 2 good punches... the rest was ok... Vote switched |
actually the more I think about it... I'm still thinkin about Zone's verse... but he can't spit for shit... damn... which is fuckin me up... you know what... Someone go ahead and change my vote... I don't have mod powers over here... I mean... he dissed the fuck out of you which was funny... change it.
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ok but how many wars have America won since then? and how many wars have Canada won since then? my point exactly you dont even like rap anyway, STFU! |
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cant fucking change a vote unless u explain why cause it was funnier? ok but yet u said my flow/pressence.delvery....and riding tha beat was better
so how tha fuck did he win? this is a rap battle right? its wutever nice verse too zone........no hate there |
if I would've put some effort into my delivery I would've won by now 5-0
but I was tired from recording other shit thats the only thing I regret about my verse. |
dogg take ya arogant ass sumwhere else i said nice verse and u still fucking make exuses
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This was feedback posted for Zone Out
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Voted For: Zone Out
man......hard...shits close..........for real.....trouble got the flow n shit ....but i think zone got the punches n delevery.....troubles was put together tigher...quality wise....but thats not what wins a battle IMO...and zone had a few nice punches and metas...."i son kids that son kids....head cold n shit.....he was comin at dude...and trouble sounded better overall man....but that an't whats up, cuz zone came nice, AND had punches man.....and i think he won this w them punches for real..."mr rogers hood" n shit....zone took this |
This was feedback posted for troublesome06
trouble you had really nice flow production was nice
will had soem nide punches |
i kinda wish i had voted now
if i had my vote would have been for zone hiw flow and breath control wasn't as nice as troubles but as far as punches go zone got this easy |
^ see... it's a 2nd thought thing... you had good flow etc... but punches when a battle... you didn't have enough punches to win it... which is FUCKING crazy. he had a shit load of punches that were nice... you had 2. you had a better flow... but... I didn't remember anything but that from your verse... he beat you duke...
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This was feedback posted for troublesome06
Intro : i was feeling zone out's intro
Beat :troublesome had a nicer one,tho to me this beat dosent fit a battle zone out's beat fitted a battle...but troublesome gets this cos compared to zone outs i was feeling it a lil more Flows : troublesome got this again,he was confident on he beat,steady flow!..zone out was steady too but kinna fell off here and there... Punches / Emotion : (iight listening to both for the second time)...zone out gets this,he had more wordplays i was actually feeling..tho he wasnt FULLY on point with the emotion,but compared to troublesomehe was more convincing...more hard with is words which actually helped him more with the punches...troublesome had more personals than punches...and the punches he had werent as hard as zone out's...and troublesome's emotion was more like he was making a normal track,kinna laid back,he dosent seem hard/convincing the way he spitting his words... Quality / Delivery : troublesome got this,yeah he had a better quality and mixed his vocals better..and he had some effects plus them hi's(which were almost too high)...zone out idk ur mic is just on a lower stand compared to troublesomes...zone didnt have any effects and quality was slacking...your voice was louder than the beat! Outro : zone out had a nice closer...i liked it,got me nodding ....so ummm from all that ^^^ Troublesome got 3 Zone Out got 3 |
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Voted For: Zone Out
aiight this was a tight battle f'real. I'm coo with both of y'all. Zone: i hated your beat lol. It was decent but w/e.. but lyrics were pretty tight. had nice flow too. lyrics was hard hitting. damn got harsh with the baby disses and shit. but overall nice shit son Trouble: word your beat I ain't like too much either.....your flow was coo. you had some nice disses too. But iunno nothing that really made me go OHHH SNAP... like shit was still coo, don't get me wrong, just really had no stand out blows man. But i liked this track too, it was coo But overall, nice tracs y'all. good battle. good to see some battles on RV that are nice. But I just think Zone got it. seemed to want it a lil bit more. Dissing the baby and shit really showed he had that fire for it. no hate to both. props v/Zone |
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