"Self Esteem Scheme"...new deep song from REFLECZ
 

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Beat: "Come on back"
Hook: Reflecz
Lyrics: Verses 1 & 2 Reflecz
QUALITY IS STILL COMPROMISED DUE TO LACK OF A SET UP.

Concept: Rapping about how I'll keep my focus alive despite black magic being spoken over my life--i.e., negativity.


LYRICS INCLUDED AT THE BOTTOM


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Self Esteem


Verse 1


I'm like a tweeter speaker soundin' high, amplified, damn if I
Start to raise my game up, the haters lay in wait to
Stick dey left foot out to bring me down a level
Devil's level, level with me, y'all have never met a thorough
Cat, I respect the perils that bedevil me and leave me sterile
Givin' birth to dreams, no longer concerned
Though, I'm disturbed yo, and don't have a sign to hang
Up, so they bang and buck until I hang it up
Like I'm talkin' to a rude telemarketer
Tha Q, had to lock him up, cuz dude was failin' lots of stuff and
Suffocatin', I saw more shit than a country kid
Fertile lies, hurt me like fertilizer stink
I heard a certified shrink...try to sell me caca-doo
And do me over, "you a loser you will never move a unit"
Ooo I never knew I could do it, I can change the whole
World and...live in a world where they give a shit

uh

Hook: 2x

I can see my dream, but the past can seem
To gleam past the present, I'm a bastard peasant
I mean, no, but, they laugh and jester, please I'm askin'
The Lord provide more before I die Lord



Verse 2

Lookin' back, can suck me through a vortex
Devastation, heavy laden, lower than a corvette
And more death, it was my personal Dark Age
I 'roamed' alone, then converted to arcane
Practices, God was vain, cold and callous
I stole for grain, while my soul was scattered
Got it the worse about my habit to flow vain
And babel like the tower, no pain, no way, I battled
Rode a saddle on the horse shit, and tried to force it
Before I knew it......thought of grippin' the four-fifth
Hit the floor with, force, split the hemispheres equal
Down the middle like latitude, now I'll film the sequel
Like a drama, part 2....like Obama, I'm a vision of
Alotta things possible, wirh God things are possible
To he who believes, and keeps his hope like leaves
Evergreen, not deciduous, never drop ya vision, uh

Lookin' back, can suck me through a vortex
Devastation, heavy laden, lower than a corvette
And more death, it was my personal Dark Age
I 'roamed' alone, then converted to arcane
Practices, God was vain, cold and callous
I stole for grain, while my soul was scattered



^^^ ill as fuck.. You're the most talented nigga I know.

Preciate the feed dawg





Im sure it'll be my only feed...Shame tho...this is a damn good track


fuckers

yeerrr this is a real nice track, flows perfect on this beat, so's the delivery..lyrics are good aswell, liked the corvette line...shame about the quality, cuz this'd be absolute FIRE with sick quality, but still doesnt take much away from it...yerrr keep up the nice work

Thank you











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^thats a dope ass mixtape cover

Preciate the feed El










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Meh......some mediocrity praising.

Your flow on the first verse wasn't really all that great. Your breath control sucked. Your delivery was nonexistant. The hook was garbage as well. Second verse was a little better, but not that great.


I know I don't really need to mention it, but YOUR QUALITY SUCKS HORRIBLY!!!!!!


:thumbup:

^^your sucha damn hater man lol this tracks hot

no doubt bro


thanx








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Aight......line by line


That reflex, reflex, reflex shit in the background is annoying as hell. This whole first verse sounds like you were reading it off of a crayon scribbled paper. You sound like you're trying to force a swag with it too. Your hook sounds like it would have been better if you replaced your first verse with it. Your dubs are off in the second verse, but you did pick up the flow a bit.


And to be totally honest, if you weren't known on this board at all you would be getting exactly what I just said from everyone. The fact that you're a known crybaby ruins any chance at you getting any good feedback EXCEPT from those who could care less about you.


So take it for what it's worth and elevate :thumbup:

Wow man this song was hot i don't care what ppl are gonna say, the lyrics were bangin and your flow was off the hook, keep it up man.

^^Preciate the love bro








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Ight track. Yea, quality killed it. No hate, but hook was pure trash to me. First verse sounded like you were reading off a paper, no flow or swag there that I really like that jumped out at me. 2nd verse, you started off great. Flow was on point, lyrics was nice, and with out reading tha lyrics, I understood what you were saying. Nice track tho, no hate from me, just keep doing you and you gunna get alot better. Elevation is the key. Just not something I would bump in tha whip.

And, I usually could care less about people, but Egyma is a straight ass hole. I wanted to say that, but I wanted to listen to his music before I did such a thing. And now the thought stands.

I love you too M Eazy :love:

Hahaha...bro, why'd you come back in here? hahaha

^^Preciate the feedback...and yea, I listened to this track 100000 times...The quality doesn't allow u to hear the nuances in my delivery...And, the flow on the first verse does come off chopped in spots...but, the 2nd verse is rockin...LOL

Also, I'm def. gonna get better until the day I die. But, note that I'm in the process of re-inventing my flow/schemes/style. Have you heard some of my old work as Tha Q? Bro...I'm not braggin, but I can hold my own against anyone on RV without a doubt.









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Same reason you did :rolleyes:

WTF did you do to these people Q. You're getting gang banged in every thread i see you in now.

The beat was ok. The Quality was meh...but what the fuck am i gonna say about quality right?

The flo on both were nice actually. I like your flo it's original to me 95% of the time. The only thing i hate is when you do that run jump and stop thing then have to get going again. Alot of people consider that flo but i don't. I'm for smoothness though...

Your chorus was dope to me. Anybody who hates this chorus...probably hasn't or doesn't want to take the time to feel it. Sometimes people hate on auto pilot with out knowing it. Shit i do it sometimes. That we fly high. I thought that shit was wack till i found my self yelling "Balllin". Realized i just hated cause i hated him.

Anyways i'm not going to go in to my favorites, be easier to say what i didn't like which was the fertilizer stink line. But i hate the word stink for some weird ass reason. Just an ugly word. That's it.

Yup yup.

^^Preciate the feed...But, what's run jump and stop?






lol

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Stop sayin ya name on the intro so much... Once or twice is enough bro... Was that you having a convo with yourself aswell?...heh... Vocals could be a little clearer, it sounds like youve reduced the reverb with some filter.. Prolly could just use an EQ tweak..

Lyric style reminds me of old andre 3000 which is fucken awesome...props for that. One problem I did have which is most likly only personal preference was that your style is real metaphorical on this track n at times its hard to understand what your getting at with some lines as your listening, could be a little more direct with what your saying rather than expressing yourself somewhat abstract like that.

Hook was aiight, I feel as though this track could have benefitted from using a singer n more beat variations during the chorus and verses to emphasise certain lines n sort of lose that loop feel to it a bit.

But overall, I enjoyed listening.. If you can fix the clarity on your vocals just a tad this track would be killer... Good shit.......

When someone does a flo and comes up to a word and they stop with emphasis and then go and stop again. The spaces bug me. I really couldn't explain it well.

lyrics are nice... feelin this. flow is nice. nice choice of beat. verse is the best in my opinion... lovin this... chorus is nice. i like this. verse 2 is persistant. goes nice with verse 1. good shit = ).

rtf

Thank you Nos...This feedback has helped me more than you know. I have a basis to improve upon now. Thank you.


Blackmage. I feel you bro. I do that in many of my tracks. It's a BIGGIE technique. BUt, I guess I go overboard with it. LOL I'll use it only ONCE in a while from now on.


Thanks for all the feedback peeps




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returning the favor...sorry it took so long duuude...

listening...im liking the beat....u come in pretty nice....flow is pretty nice....some of the lyrics im not feeling....but some are ok....you should def. get that new setup asap...cause as im sure you know...it takes away a lot from the tracks....hook is ehhh...dunno..not something id be singing in an hour...im liking your 2nd verse a lot better than 1st....lyrically and flow wise.....

i think if this was done in high quality..youd prolly get a lot of downloads n shit...not bad...keep it up..

preciate it













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not really much else i can say that hasn't already been said. i'd just be repeating everyone else. the track was ill. but u really do need to hurry n get that new setup, ya quality is takin ALOT away from your music

^^tell me about it












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errrrrrrrr up











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