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^^Click on "Self Esteem Scheme"




Beat: "Come on back"
Hook: Reflecz
Lyrics: Verses 1 & 2 Reflecz
QUALITY IS STILL COMPROMISED DUE TO LACK OF A SET UP.

Concept: Rapping about how I'll keep my focus alive despite black magic being spoken over my life--i.e., negativity.


LYRICS INCLUDED AT THE BOTTOM


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Self Esteem


Verse 1


I'm like a tweeter speaker soundin' high, amplified, damn if I
Start to raise my game up, the haters lay in wait to
Stick dey left foot out to bring me down a level
Devil's level, level with me, y'all have never met a thorough
Cat, I respect the perils that bedevil me and leave me sterile
Givin' birth to dreams, no longer concerned
Though, I'm disturbed yo, and don't have a sign to hang
Up, so they bang and buck until I hang it up
Like I'm talkin' to a rude telemarketer
Tha Q, had to lock him up, cuz dude was failin' lots of stuff and
Suffocatin', I saw more shit than a country kid
Fertile lies, hurt me like fertilizer stink
I heard a certified shrink...try to sell me caca-doo
And do me over, "you a loser you will never move a unit"
Ooo I never knew I could do it, I can change the whole
World and...live in a world where they give a shit

uh

Hook: 2x

I can see my dream, but the past can seem
To gleam past the present, I'm a bastard peasant
I mean, no, but, they laugh and jester, please I'm askin'
The Lord provide more before I die Lord



Verse 2

Lookin' back, can suck me through a vortex
Devastation, heavy laden, lower than a corvette
And more death, it was my personal Dark Age
I 'roamed' alone, then converted to arcane
Practices, God was vain, cold and callous
I stole for grain, while my soul was scattered
Got it the worse about my habit to flow vain
And babel like the tower, no pain, no way, I battled
Rode a saddle on the horse shit, and tried to force it
Before I knew it......thought of grippin' the four-fifth
Hit the floor with, force, split the hemispheres equal
Down the middle like latitude, now I'll film the sequel
Like a drama, part 2....like Obama, I'm a vision of
Alotta things possible, wirh God things are possible
To he who believes, and keeps his hope like leaves
Evergreen, not deciduous, never drop ya vision, uh

Lookin' back, can suck me through a vortex
Devastation, heavy laden, lower than a corvette
And more death, it was my personal Dark Age
I 'roamed' alone, then converted to arcane
Practices, God was vain, cold and callous
I stole for grain, while my soul was scattered



^^^ ill as fuck.. You're the most talented nigga I know.

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Im sure it'll be my only feed...Shame tho...this is a damn good track


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yeerrr this is a real nice track, flows perfect on this beat, so's the delivery..lyrics are good aswell, liked the corvette line...shame about the quality, cuz this'd be absolute FIRE with sick quality, but still doesnt take much away from it...yerrr keep up the nice work

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^thats a dope ass mixtape cover

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Meh......some mediocrity praising.

Your flow on the first verse wasn't really all that great. Your breath control sucked. Your delivery was nonexistant. The hook was garbage as well. Second verse was a little better, but not that great.


I know I don't really need to mention it, but YOUR QUALITY SUCKS HORRIBLY!!!!!!

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^^your sucha damn hater man lol this tracks hot

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ADD ME LETS MAKE SOMETHING

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no doubt bro


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Aight......line by line


That reflex, reflex, reflex shit in the background is annoying as hell. This whole first verse sounds like you were reading it off of a crayon scribbled paper. You sound like you're trying to force a swag with it too. Your hook sounds like it would have been better if you replaced your first verse with it. Your dubs are off in the second verse, but you did pick up the flow a bit.


And to be totally honest, if you weren't known on this board at all you would be getting exactly what I just said from everyone. The fact that you're a known crybaby ruins any chance at you getting any good feedback EXCEPT from those who could care less about you.


So take it for what it's worth and elevate

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Wow man this song was hot i don't care what ppl are gonna say, the lyrics were bangin and your flow was off the hook, keep it up man.

^^Preciate the love bro








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