***Can't Hold Me***...new concept from ya boyeee
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox


^Click on "Can't hold me"


Beat: Low Profile, or w/e they're called

Intro Clip: From the movie "Signs"

Hook: All Q

Verses: 1-3 Q

Ending: Sorry, I lost it.

Concept: Imagine that everyone you've ever met in your life didn't exist, but was created in your mind.



Holla

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238887
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238893

hahah... ur concept is like A Beautiful Mind

this vibe is perfect on the hook... with the beat... really feelin that openin.... most people dont get the vibe right just try and flow nice and make good lines... ur flow is real nice on this shit... i liek the contrast of the verse and the hook... def sounds mixed differently too

verse 2 has a decent story on it..... some nice lyrics, but not much to say about it cusz im tryin to pay attention... hook is fuckin sick as ive sed for this beat..... u can fit the melody of it pretty well.... this track is ur best in a while man.... good u repeated the hook at the end, really couldnt get enough of it... u shouldve prolly done some adlibs in the last hook for alil switch up

.... god damn, u spent alotta time it seems perfectin this track mixin wise... its CRAZY SON.... i think this might ur best put together song ever..... props, mad props on bein an ARTIST, not just a rapper. 1

I liked this, alot...

Nice flow, but I really liked the concept, you know, no more gun rap, just deep shit about life and God... I feel it...

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Wow I've never heard you pace ya voice like that before. smooth kind a singing type thing on the hook word i liked it. I love your idea for this track man thats insane. your flow is fuckin hot like it usually is. Quality is back up word! I'm lovin ya delivery on this joint. The ebat is fuckin killa kinda like some common sense shit i got my my pc. shits dope im lovin this track, yo ima download it haha.

rtf here man: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238838

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Thats wsup q this is probably one of your fav tracks for me to listen to the opening hook sets the tone from the jump makes u wanna take a seat and enjoy the ride...the voice you used and the mixing for the hook just grasps the listener to feel the emotion the verse kinda jumps out at ya after being lullabyed by the hook but listening to the werds intertwined with this beat really flows the second verse flew in a bit more smooth here lyrics were moving towards that more and more people in and out shit.....ok third verse time to tie it up an explain the theory here definate outsretched imagination for this whole track if half the kids had your creative abilty and thought process to hit a track the rap game would be bannanaz.............................

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Listenin...

Verse is crazy...wow...flow is real dope...and lyrics is real..I know the abuse shit and who u was talking 2..and we over that but ima publically apologize cos i told u shit we were wildin out..this shit is real the bobby lines...hook is hot too..i like the style on here..shit is real..last verse is hot aswell multis are good..that's all i gota say hot track..1

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You have improved so much from the last track I heard of yours. This song has a real polished, professional vibe to it.

The beat is ill, and your flow suits it real well. Lyrics are solid, the hook is good... It's a very good track.

Did you want me to leave feed or an opinion on the concept? In a way it's probably more true than you think.

^^What was the last song of mine u heard? man...

come on...this is 2007!

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lol, it was probably years ago.. -_-

^^Come on man!








word....preciate the nod tho...


DL this and share it with ur HOMIES!

this song is pretty dope
the beat is straight sick
an your flow is perfect on this track
lyrics are deep on this
the hook is good
overall this is a pretty well made song
i give you props man

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Peepin now.....

the bell tolls.... givin it that deep... conscious vibe.... aight here you go... beat kicks in with a nice hook... singing... nice tone.... verse touches on A LOT of demons from your past... abuse and shit.... damn.... hook again.... 2nd verse.... more of that deep shit.... diff faces same people... word... my heads noddin more after this hook and goin into the third verse....WHOA..... this flow and the content... haha... trippy man... mirages and shit.... :high: i love this hook, well put together... no over produced you know what im sayin.... the outro prayer was a nice touch... could visualize some one actualy cryin out .... wow.... this is a solid joint... the content reflects a deeper side of Q.... and good for you for ownin your past and those demons... and takin it in stride and over coming man... word up... Props on a well put together track


9/10


-OYD

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One word to describe this track.................DiRtY!!!!!! .....This shi is nice man ....Keep it up

hey rtf here please
http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...id=4848011&q=hi

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beat sounds nice so far on the intro
nice hook pretty good singing smooth
deep shit on the first verse towards the end sad shit but props to you speaking on it alot of people are ashamed of it
you had a ncie concept you are the most unique artist on rv
and you switch up your flow youre abotu the only poerson on ehre whos threads i go into not knowing what to expect
ncie track

Aiight... Just got home n its 5am so this'll be short bro...................

I was a bit iffy about the hook at the start, but man.. Hey... this is actually pretty tight.. Right, I'm playing this on hi fi and its still sounding a little harsh on the vocal clarity.. Your EQing has gotton a lot better, I think you just need better hardware atm, youve outgrown whatever your using cause your style once the verse kicked in was very pro, jus not pro quality in your clarity department..

The concept you chose is interesting, I've often entertained thoughts like we could exist in a singular concious experience tailored to our own self and placement across the infinite complexity of existance. But I dont exactly think its good to be that self centerered.

One thing with the lyrics I was kind of hoping for more of a proper story to apply this concept to with a final verse peicing together a conclusion.... Or more potent philosophical statements to explain why it is you chose this subject to make a song about cause it could be seen as a comical arbitrary hypothetical peice rather than something bringing light to intricate concepts in life which is what youd be wanting to aim for with a 'deep' track.. In other words, most people would glaze over what your actually trying to get across because your not saying heaps of stuff regular cats would think "ohhh yeah I feel like I'm in the same situation or have empathy towards his feelings or opinions in this track".. But this concept would have been hard to create a sense of empathy with due to the subject itself... so iunno.. You did what you could with what you had to write about.

The beat was good.. suited your subject..... And other than that, I had no problems or comments to add.. This was a tight song.... I wouldnt hesitate to put this on a mixtape or whatever... Good shit dude....

^^I'm glad Im actually smart enough to understand everything u said...dang BRO!

haa...now that's feedback


preciate it!

And yo, feel free to put this joint on a mixtape...The more exposure the better.





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word, the bells is tight at the intro, but kinda get mixed up with the melody mood, beat killa,hooks aight, hooks deep man, flow's real, nicewordplay and shit,I think I heard a couple of multisif im not wrong, but this shit's illy man
uppin my shit to man thanx http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239139

thanks dirty d








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Damn chorus is nice..

the new jump off fo 07 huh!!...

verse is direct flows nicelt to the beat ya dig!! lyrics are indepht i have to say it been awhile i listened to some of ya shit cuz of my Inet disconnected n shit but yeah boi u still doing it..haha

I think the singing seems like it's forced and unclear. Other than that you sound good. Could clean up your dubs in a few places but overall pretty good. Not really my type of stuff but it's good.

forced?...hmm...didn't force it when I did it...But, aiight...



preciate all the listens and the love






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