Word up.
Song Order goes..

1.Dough Stackz
2.Zone Out
3.Dough Stackz
4.Zone Out

www.spityogame.com/zone_out

Scroll down on the player until you see In The Ghetto!
thanks!


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...stpost&t=238726
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...stpost&t=238868

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nice ass beat
doughs vocals are too lo0ud i think he sent this to me a few eeks ago
always liked dough lyrically very intense on the mic

you sound like idk something sounds kinda weird like youre far away from the mic maybe
alot mroe laid back then dough lyrically cool
doughs second verse not aas nice as the first heard an adlib that sounded fucked

zone not feelign the flow in the beginning of this verse sounds off but you fixed it mad quick i think you need to make your adlibs a little louder on this verse


cool track i liked it

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Listenin'...btw Willa wtf is it with you and pitbulls..lol..

Dough Stackz...I like yo flow on this..lyrics is hawt...delivery is nice cuda switched up..you sound kinda like Zone...Beat is Hawt....Zone.."weapons send u to hell for heavens sake" I like this shit..flow is nice..u use reverb on this?..vocals a lil low...delivery is nice..."jump you like leap frog"..

Dough's again...yeah same shit nig...presence is hot..wheelchair line was nice...Zone again..."bullets up in yo chest, like there was treasure inside"...LOL at will n grace line...flow was hot..."let a nigga front of me, ill blow his back off" ZONE u came witht he lines NEGRO..holla nice ass joint..

RTF TO cOME TOo Far (produced by Triple N)

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....suck a dick faggot.....

This track is like 3 or 4 months old. It was before I got my quality poppin and shit.
But thanks for the feedback.. I was actually just listenin to that Come too Far track on your myspace..

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Oh fa real?..what u think my dude?..actualy i don't wan clog up yo thread hit up mine if you want 2 my nig

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....suck a dick faggot.....

Watch you take this like I'm just hating...(do me a favor and just take the feedback and don't talk shit)

Your lisp fucking sucks, it makes lines sound all gay, try to talk more clearly. You flow is coo I guess but you're mad unconvincing, it's like you're trying to prove to people that you're gunna fucking kill anyone who comes in your path and it all sounds so fucking textbook, nothing that screams Zone Out, it just screams "fake thug". Like seriously, stop and think, "Other than the beat, what the fuck sets this track apart from any other 'Look, I'm so gangsta' track?" This was the type of track that people just listen to to have noise in the background as they do something else. Your voice is kinda annoying too, it's not the type of voice I'd want to hear for a whole album. If you put some more bass in it, it might help. Umm basically what I'm saying is nothing sets you apart, you're just some dude on a track, not THAT dude on a track, feel me?

Yeah, just, if you don't like what I said, pretend I didn't say it, cuz I'm just being honest, don't come at me on some bullshit when I'm just trying to help you out.

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Soundclick

Yeah, but you know what the thing is.
After all the negative shit you said about me in your previous post about me being just another nigga on a track and all that.
My songs are still better than yours.
My punches are still better than yours.
I've collabed with people that are better than you.
And Im just an all around better emcee/rapper w/e you wanna call it then you.
So how does that make you feel, knowin that Im all of these things you said, to know that you're still no where near my level?

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this track was good for me ide say any issues i heard were more on a mixing level dough had a more upbeat apporach while zone had that swag goin for em but still seems like the samson given you some issues but the beat choice was cool .......both had some solid lines in here no complaints here...........rtf ....tha last blast

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It makes me feel like I know you only think you know what you're talking about.

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Soundclick

This was before you even gave me the software for it.
THATS how old this track is..
but thanks for the feedback

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So you think you're better than me?
As my nig Majid used to say..
"Nigga where ya bars at?"

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beat is kinda hot

1st verse...pretty decent...the rhymin words didn't jump off to me tho...like u were spittin but somethin was missin... a lil OOMPH


2nd verse...needs better vocal quality...

decent basics tho (flow/delivery, etc.)


hook is decent for a prepackaged hook



Not a bad track


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