Slouch vs Ransum
 

Battle Rules:
12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-25-07 at 09:29 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-07 09:29 PM.

Slouch has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-07 10:07 PM.

You got a clout of pervs, you kidnap to have fun,
They put the money issues aside...
And hold lil white boys for Ransum.
I smash bums, just like this retard,
He posted twice in the 1-2 leauge...
'Sum obviously cant 'add' bars.
Im just pushin a drop, still my flows are great
and fuck rock, paper, scissors...
I got a 'straight hand' ta smack ya poker face.
See Ill still go the distance, I'll impale this prick
and bitch you're a flyweight
So its easy to see why your drops are shit

peace.

come on man that was the keystyle i dropped from before...where's your verse at? I didnt take my time like this...

im waiting on strobe or some of the mods to re-send me my verse that i keyd up to...
i aint pre-write there for i dont remember what i had.....

unless you want me to do another key-verse then i'll do that but i was waiting for store or nick to make this battle fair my dude just gotta wait till one of them re-send me my old verse so chill.... i aint cheating my dude just making it fair but if u want me to write another quick verse let me know and i'll do that..... but it might be unfair since i already know what u drop.....

this aint much effort but why try agenist a slouch
cuz for that title shot i'll trash this dude like oscar the grouch...
open ya mouth... all we see is rotten teeth AN He think he spits dirty....
its funny, cuz for votes he'll peak on wood like a birdy (woodywood peaker)
I'm an ass hole, a dirty fighter, call me a cheater
take a stand.... but they dont think your a "happy boss" when they say "cheer-leader" *HA He look like a Fag*
i got no fear either of hes simple punches like im hotter then hell
cuz he'll act like he got seafood allerge's.... when slouch start dodge'in these shellz
im honest as-well, you battleing aint noting to see like "a-cup bra" flashes
punches? you use to geting your 'Ass-Kick' so its noting to catch a slouch with a 'HOOK' like "Fishing-Tactics"

you take pic's of bikini girls with tiger strips???
take a good look at this Slouch Life,
not only is this Net hes catch of the day... but he looks at hopeless hormons sites....
an get plesure beating off throu the night... FUCKING FAGET!

AND ITS LIKE THAT!!
PATHIC FAGGET.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240023

There is the link to my last bar if you didnt get it... ^^ link to the pic.......





GOOD LUCK FAM NO HATE BUT MUCH RESPECT DUDE....

can i get some votes?????????
ANY VOTES??????
SOMEONE?????
PLEZ VOTE???

Voted For: Slouch

Vote for Slouch, my opinion some of Ransum's bars were forced

thanks man,

uppin for votes,

still in need here..

can we get some more votes in here............................

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

man slouch are u fuckin serious!! man dont battle, dont write, shit i wish u wouldn't even breath. cuz obviously ur brain dead. i hope u didn't actually have to think when u wrote this. it must be a quote from a dr. seuss book or somethin (sorry seuss man pissed on your name). aye but big ups to ransom

even though there was no battle involved, man ur shits hot. if he ducks them shellz dont worry i'll light that fire under his ass n show'em hell

shit fucked up n wouldn't let me vote but ransom u got it

thanks fam for your comment .......

upp'in for more votes or feed back........

Voted For: Ransum

this aint much effort but why try agenist a slouch
cuz for that title shot i'll trash this dude like oscar the grouch...
^^^ pretty simple, and what title shot? u need better set ups and its always better to word your bars so u dont have to use the word "like".. but this was still your best line
open ya mouth... all we see is rotten teeth AN He think he spits dirty....
its funny, cuz for votes he'll peak on wood like a birdy (woodywood peaker)
^^how can a person peck on wood, not really a diss, bad wording
I'm an ass hole, a dirty fighter, call me a cheater
take a stand.... but they dont think your a "happy boss" when they say "cheer-leader" *HA He look like a Fag*
^^^ attempt at wordplay, but very lame, and u usually wanna put the word u playin wit near the beginning of the second line
i got no fear either of hes simple punches like im hotter then hell
cuz he'll act like he got seafood allerge's.... when slouch start dodge'in these shellz
^^^agian with the like, but good format for the punch, just shell wordplay is pretty played
im honest as-well, you battleing aint noting to see like "a-cup bra" flashes
punches? you use to geting your 'Ass-Kick' so its noting to catch a slouch with a 'HOOK' like "Fishing-Tactics"
^^the first line woulda been a better punch, and u dont wanna have two punches in one bar. u wanna set one up to make it hit harder.
..
anyway
vs.
..
You got a clout of pervs, you kidnap to have fun,
They put the money issues aside...
And hold lil white boys for Ransum.
^^best bar of the battle, perfect format with the set up and wordplay at the beginning of second line
I smash bums, just like this retard,
He posted twice in the 1-2 leauge...
'Sum obviously cant 'add' bars.
^^
real lame cuz in that league your u have to post twice
Im just pushin a drop, still my flows are great
and fuck rock, paper, scissors...
I got a 'straight hand' ta smack ya poker face.
^^^bad wording u shoulda put the straight hand part where the rock paper scissors part was and word it for a better punch
See Ill still go the distance, I'll impale this prick
and bitch you're a flyweight
So its easy to see why your drops are shit
^^^
and this was just shit and had no wordplay or real hard hitting anything

vote- ransom for attempting more wordplay and havin an overall better and well thought out verse.

return the favor on my battle... link in my sig, its here in front lines aswell, youl'll see it

thank for the vote....

upp'in for more votes............

Voted For: Ransum

Ah I will have to give this one to ransum, for just a better versus, Slouch didnt' have much at all..he had like 5 word lines..so he didn't have much to work with on settin up punches better. Ransum was strechted punches..but it won the battle.

v/Ransum

Voted For: Slouch

Yo I like your shit Slouch... Not only did you write less then him you hit him Harder. Way to get to the point and rip him

V/Slouch

Voted For: Slouch

this one was a close one to call. but my vote is gunna go to slouch. he had the better punches. ransum came in hard but then he faded away and had some complicated lines. stay simple. vote goes to slouch.

Voted For: Slouch

Ransum:
this aint much effort but why try agenist a slouch
cuz for that title shot i'll trash this dude like oscar the grouch...
^This was ok. 1.5/5
open ya mouth... all we see is rotten teeth AN He think he spits dirty....
its funny, cuz for votes he'll peak on wood like a birdy (woodywood peaker)
^Wording was bad, concept was cool thou. 1.5/5
I'm an ass hole, a dirty fighter, call me a cheater
take a stand.... but they dont think your a "happy boss" when they say "cheer-leader" *HA He look like a Fag*
^Clever wordplay, decent punch. Unique line here. 2/5
i got no fear either of hes simple punches like im hotter then hell
cuz he'll act like he got seafood allerge's.... when slouch start dodge'in these shellz
^Concept/play on Shells is kinda old but flipped nicely. 2/5
im honest as-well, you battleing aint noting to see like "a-cup bra" flashes
punches? you use to geting your 'Ass-Kick' so its noting to catch a slouch with a 'HOOK' like "Fishing-Tactics"
^Nah, nothing too good about this one. 1/5

you take pic's of bikini girls with tiger strips???
take a good look at this Slouch Life,
not only is this Net hes catch of the day... but he looks at hopeless hormons sites....
an get plesure beating off throu the night... FUCKING FAGET!
^Not too good but a funny diss. 1.5/5


vs.


Slouch:
You got a clout of pervs, you kidnap to have fun,
They put the money issues aside...
And hold lil white boys for Ransum.
^Lol, funny clownage line. 2/5
I smash bums, just like this retard,
He posted twice in the 1-2 leauge...
'Sum obviously cant 'add' bars.
^Hah, clever line. 2.5/5
Im just pushin a drop, still my flows are great
and fuck rock, paper, scissors...
I got a 'straight hand' ta smack ya poker face.
^Decent wordplay here. 2/5
See Ill still go the distance, I'll impale this prick
and bitch you're a flyweight
So its easy to see why your drops are shit
^Nah, ya' weakest bar. 1.5/5



This was a pretty close match. A good battle here. Slouch edged it out w/ more clever punches & a comical relief type style. Good job thou guys.






Vote = Slouch

Voted For: Slouch

better structure alot better flow...ransum had you in punches but your flow carried you thru this battlle nice job