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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-05-07 at 11:24 PM

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Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-07 04:13 PM.

Rizo*da*God has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-07 04:18 PM.

Cum lay ya scary ass round here and receive sticthes
You just like ya motar kidd big body but lil britches
Smack da shit out cha like when bitches talk ___------and get out of line
!@$%$---====``my bad I feared for ya life after that so I got out of ryhme
Keep vote-N against me like the blacks did against bush
You lay fear cuz when you fuck you put critters in ya girls bush
You reside in college park but don’t have a credit of education
Ill ad my konflick wit proffessor and give you a technique demonstration
Im da god bitch so the fear you lay is easily over lapped
So after your shit ill lay my shit then you will be over crapped…

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Ya name is out of place its flipped I'll jus mod this kiddo
MC vs MC but compared to him...I'm more like a God da Rizo.
I shot this widow, you smoke the mary jane? MJ,jus say it bastard
Girls shout !Don't !Stop til !You Get !Enough..cept they say it backwards
Ya hacker, you a clown with a disease for hitten keys, RG watchs herself
I searched your posts tryin to dig shit up on u...but was pilin u ontop yourself
He has 'Konflick' wit mc's, ya don't get enuf 'income', shout some shit
Battlin that^ n' me is different..but got the same 'outcome' bitch
:Lay Fear a btich, a rook, n rides dick a guy wit no fingers could whore me:
No pain No gain, ^wanted to feel insulted once in this battle.......
.........your verse jus didn't do it for me

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Fear

Voted For: Lay Fear

Alot of Rizo's shit weren't even punchlines. I was a decent battle but LF was more consistent with his punchlines, whereas you had one every know and then. LF's were also harder hitting. If I need to explain more so this doesn't get DQ'ed tell me.

Vote- LF

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Fear

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Fear

Voted For: Lay Fear

easily. lay fear got this one. rizo your verse was mad wack for a couple of bars, then it started to make sense towards the end. just didnt have enough to come back. lay fear, dissed yourself, nice ending. vote goes to lay fear.

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What Up Gangsta?

Voted For: Lay Fear

Rizo da God:
Cum lay ya scary ass round here and receive sticthes
You just like ya motar kidd big body but lil britches
^No, just weak. 0/5
Smack da shit out cha like when bitches talk ___------and get out of line
!@$%$---====``my bad I feared for ya life after that so I got out of ryhme
^This was blah. .5/5
Keep vote-N against me like the blacks did against bush
You lay fear cuz when you fuck you put critters in ya girls bush
^Nope. .5/5
You reside in college park but don’t have a credit of education
Ill ad my konflick wit proffessor and give you a technique demonstration
^This was not good at all. .5/5
Im da god bitch so the fear you lay is easily over lapped
So after your shit ill lay my shit then you will be over crapped…
^Hrm, naw bro. 0/5


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Lay Fear:
Ya name is out of place its flipped I'll jus mod this kiddo
MC vs MC but compared to him...I'm more like a God da Rizo.
^This was alright. 1.5/5
I shot this widow, you smoke the mary jane? MJ,jus say it bastard
Girls shout !Don't !Stop til !You Get !Enough..cept they say it backwards
^Heh, decent. 1.5/5
Ya hacker, you a clown with a disease for hitten keys, RG watchs herself
I searched your posts tryin to dig shit up on u...but was pilin u ontop yourself
^Blah. Nothing special about this. 1/5
He has 'Konflick' wit mc's, ya don't get enuf 'income', shout some shit
Battlin that^ n' me is different..but got the same 'outcome' bitch
^Decent bar here. Punch was a bit weak. 1.5/5
:Lay Fear a btich, a rook, n rides dick a guy wit no fingers could whore me:
No pain No gain, ^wanted to feel insulted once in this battle.......
.........your verse jus didn't do it for me
^Alright punchline here. 1.5/5


Overall a pretty weak battle. Lay Fear got my vote thou coming strong & w/ better punchlines. Both need work thou. Keep it up fellas.





Vote = LayFear

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Fear

Voted For: Lay Fear

rizo:
nothin'

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Lay:
I shot this widow, you smoke the mary jane? MJ,jus say it bastard
Girls shout !Don't !Stop til !You Get !Enough..cept they say it backwards


overall:
this was a pretty weak battle but I have to give my vote to lay for havin' better lines.


rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=241446

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