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Narcicyst 05-06-03 11:27 AM

Iraqnophobia (short rhyme)
 
the shits bias/
dragon breath screamin at raigeems like believing in french diets/
while you slay scenes, to betray me and my origin/
its metaphoric, i'm horrid, sent to bury us like carcasses in a graveyard, confirmed/
on this often mishelped hysetria, now the shits serious/
Iraqis are fearing us, so keep the sums up/
is it freedom? cuz we free and dumb/
must be or you leaving you son of a bleeding gun/
fast addicts steeple to bleed while your feet are numb/
adrelinine...
or is it the pill they gave to prevent men from contending chemical weapons despention/
dont mention ends, and juggle contraband/
stand with burgers from mcdonalds in hand/
and beat dead bottles to grams, corporate pirates/
and force to leave your iris...display like a foster child from his parents palms/
and arabic supermarket jobs to paratroopers turned hard/
chopping Harry Truman loops, and conquer truth against their military assaults/
iller than my choruses, Narcicyst always believe in God/
in times many men find these fine rhymes/
sensitized, trying to find a reason why/
hope you get the message like prophetic descendants...they owning yah/
on the streets of Iraq they selling Iraqnophobia

tRiLL 05-06-03 11:35 AM

first of all thats a sick name for this song Iraqnophobia,
"on this often mishelped hysetria, now the shits serious/
Iraqis are fearing us" nice word play,
the topic was pretty good if u ask me,
adn the rhymes were nice n constant n original idea,
yo Narc i wanna see u try n spit on sumthing except fo Iraq cuse u everytime u spit sumthin about iraq it becomes too dope,
try n make us look less lower then ur skillz. lol

no i was not dick rydin just read his otha shit

Narcicyst 05-06-03 11:40 AM

lol^^...
thanks dunny...i appreciate the comments namsayin...your shits ill too namsayin...good looking out...wahid

DaviD WoRdplay 05-06-03 12:04 PM

damn, nice piece.... very oringinal Idea... the content was dope..you started out strong and kept it constant throughout the rhyme... I was definately feeling the ending... much respect...

Narcicyst 05-06-03 12:28 PM

thanks dunny...pnm me and i can send you trhe track...good looking out...wahid

Narcicyst 05-06-03 12:59 PM

uppin

BlUnT-MC 05-06-03 03:02 PM

ill, mad multies and shit.. I'm getting totally sick of the topic, but you do it well.. I agree with tRill you need to expand your horizons a little in subject matter 'cause your flow and vocab are already sick.. rep1

.BacK:PaY. 05-06-03 03:24 PM

very dope drop no doubt killa keep it up...

Bash 05-06-03 10:53 PM

tha tittle was Ill ,,lol ,,,,,,,,,,, nice Multies , and Ill wordplay ,,,,,,keep it up

Narcicyst 05-07-03 04:53 AM

thanks for the replies...good looking out...wahid

Narcicyst 05-07-03 10:54 AM

uppin

R-Cypher 05-07-03 10:58 AM

some of the best words ive ever read on this site. deep and truthful. Hopefully otherz will b inspired to write on that level.

by the way can ppl pleaz vote here? dont forget to poll if u can

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

xXelementXx 05-07-03 11:03 AM

That was ill yo0o keep it up.. ~>element<~

Narcicyst 05-07-03 11:23 AM

thanks for the comments...i got that on audio but it has three verses, too long to write namsayin...anyways good looking out...wahid

Narcicyst 05-07-03 01:43 PM

uppin^^

Narcicyst 05-08-03 02:50 AM

uppin

Atetrack define' 05-08-03 03:27 AM

haha to all the cats that aint heard this on an audio,yall missin out on something forsure...and haha to all the cats asleep too,yall missin out on something ill no doubt...i tol dyou already what i thought of this narc ahha..no need to repeat.
bismillah

Narcicyst 05-08-03 05:45 AM

Shukran dunny...man they prolly wouldnt understand 3% of the audio namsayin...good looking out dunny...wahid

rageous_bitch 05-08-03 02:30 PM

Re: Iraqnophobia (short rhyme)
 
Quote:
Originally posted by Narcicyst
the shits bias/
dragon breath screamin at raigeems like believing in french diets/
while you slay scenes, to betray me and my origin/
its metaphoric, i'm horrid, sent to bury us like carcasses in a graveyard, confirmed/
on this often mishelped hysetria, now the shits serious/
Iraqis are fearing us, so keep the sums up/
is it freedom? cuz we free and dumb/
must be or you leaving you son of a bleeding gun/
fast addicts steeple to bleed while your feet are numb/
adrelinine...
or is it the pill they gave to prevent men from contending chemical weapons despention/
dont mention ends, and juggle contraband/
stand with burgers from mcdonalds in hand/
and beat dead bottles to grams, corporate pirates/
and force to leave your iris...display like a foster child from his parents palms/
and arabic supermarket jobs to paratroopers turned hard/
chopping Harry Truman loops, and conquer truth against their military assaults/
iller than my choruses, Narcicyst always believe in God/
in times many men find these fine rhymes/


yo dat shit pretty dope.
so lets go wave your hat/
get ready for a combat/
cause its da comback when u.s hits dis shit/
so hide don't he sublimed/
to confirm /
we'll diminish da truth/
while youth uncover another step in da booth.
sensitized, trying to find a reason why/
hope you get the message like prophetic descendants...they owning yah/
on the streets of Iraq they selling Iraqnophobia

Narcicyst 05-10-03 05:03 AM

^^the fuck...why you biting my shit for your rhyme???the fuck newbies always pull the weirdest shit namsayin...wahid

Atetrack define' 05-10-03 05:26 AM

......what the fuck???biterdun...desimate desimate....no doubt i dont understand what shes tlaking baout anyway...but if your talking about the hardships of iraqi people ,you cant say nothign unless youve been there and lived it,the middle east is a totally differnet place than anythign the media is showing...sometimes its not as bad as it portrays and then sometimes its worse...still i dont understand whats shestalking about...or why shes bitten this...or why why why...its a quote??????????...
you lost me missy....

Narcicyst 05-10-03 10:09 AM

dawg she just tryin to bite my steez namsayin...stupid biatch....and yah i rap aboput what you dont hear on CNN and shit cuz its one sided and i just want people to know the truth namsayin...good looking out...wahid

Atetrack define' 05-10-03 10:12 AM

ahah foreal...fuck cnn...

check those pms dun haha....


quit sleepin cats

Narcicyst 05-10-03 10:44 AM

aigth dunny

Saladin 05-10-03 11:18 AM

iller than my choruses, Narcicyst always believe in God/
in times many men find these fine rhymes/

Word Brother...keep spreadin the deen..remove the blindfold from the ignorant..

peace
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Narcicyst 05-10-03 11:24 AM

Shukran...of course dunny thats the reason why i rhyme namsayin...kats always be like yo rhyme up somethuin different instead of that iraqi influenced rhymes...fuck that namsayin...wahid


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