the shits bias/
dragon breath screamin at raigeems like believing in french diets/
while you slay scenes, to betray me and my origin/
its metaphoric, i'm horrid, sent to bury us like carcasses in a graveyard, confirmed/
on this often mishelped hysetria, now the shits serious/
Iraqis are fearing us, so keep the sums up/
is it freedom? cuz we free and dumb/
must be or you leaving you son of a bleeding gun/
fast addicts steeple to bleed while your feet are numb/
adrelinine...
or is it the pill they gave to prevent men from contending chemical weapons despention/
dont mention ends, and juggle contraband/
stand with burgers from mcdonalds in hand/
and beat dead bottles to grams, corporate pirates/
and force to leave your iris...display like a foster child from his parents palms/
and arabic supermarket jobs to paratroopers turned hard/
chopping Harry Truman loops, and conquer truth against their military assaults/
iller than my choruses, Narcicyst always believe in God/
in times many men find these fine rhymes/
sensitized, trying to find a reason why/
hope you get the message like prophetic descendants...they owning yah/
on the streets of Iraq they selling Iraqnophobia

first of all thats a sick name for this song Iraqnophobia,
"on this often mishelped hysetria, now the shits serious/
Iraqis are fearing us" nice word play,
the topic was pretty good if u ask me,
adn the rhymes were nice n constant n original idea,
yo Narc i wanna see u try n spit on sumthing except fo Iraq cuse u everytime u spit sumthin about iraq it becomes too dope,
try n make us look less lower then ur skillz. lol

no i was not dick rydin just read his otha shit

lol^^...
thanks dunny...i appreciate the comments namsayin...your shits ill too namsayin...good looking out...wahid

damn, nice piece.... very oringinal Idea... the content was dope..you started out strong and kept it constant throughout the rhyme... I was definately feeling the ending... much respect...

thanks dunny...pnm me and i can send you trhe track...good looking out...wahid

uppin

ill, mad multies and shit.. I'm getting totally sick of the topic, but you do it well.. I agree with tRill you need to expand your horizons a little in subject matter 'cause your flow and vocab are already sick.. rep1

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very dope drop no doubt killa keep it up...

tha tittle was Ill ,,lol ,,,,,,,,,,, nice Multies , and Ill wordplay ,,,,,,keep it up

thanks for the replies...good looking out...wahid

uppin

some of the best words ive ever read on this site. deep and truthful. Hopefully otherz will b inspired to write on that level.

by the way can ppl pleaz vote here? dont forget to poll if u can

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

That was ill yo0o keep it up.. ~>element<~

thanks for the comments...i got that on audio but it has three verses, too long to write namsayin...anyways good looking out...wahid