"No Need"
 

Tell me what you think..Thankz...

No Need For you to Care anymore
I'm Cold now, Lying motionless on the floor
It's too late for you to care about me
It's all over now, can't you see?
I hear you apologize over and over again
You wondered where I have been
It didn't have to end this way
If you would have just listened to what I had to say
You never even gave me the chance to speak,
Now, I'm laying here, Feeling so damn weak
I only wanted to let you know
That I am not and have never been a hoe
What you try to make me out to be
I never have cheated on you, never will...honestly
I now feel the thick, red blood trickle down my broken nose
The damaging pain streaking through my body, head to toe
Still I manage to rise to my cold, bare feet
I look up your worthless body untill our eyes meet
I set a Cold, Blank stare upon you
As your face shakes, while u repediatly say "I didn't mean to"
I Grin briefly as I tighten my grip on the gun
Now that you have had your little fun
I raise it slowly, and rest it in my shaking hand
I'm sure the shot could be heard across the quiet land
As You drop to a Pulp on the wooden kitchen floor
I softly whisper "No need for you to care anymore"...

okay this is damn good,
come to the revalation angels crew


pm me if have any questions

Hey I tried to send you a PM but it said your mailbox was too full...Just thought I would let you know

peAce

oh damn lol ok, imma pm you now

nevamind, i seen u posted in the crew thread

Yeah I figured it out...lol Thanks :)

real shit girl,im feelin it,its dark yet calmin to tha troubled mind,real shit boo,keep postin,peace.

Thank you once again! Ive enjoyed all your comments! I really appreciate you reading them! :)...

peAce

That was a really tight poem, I felt your anger.

Peace

Thank you. I have read some of your material. Your very talented also.

peAce

O really, thanks for the comment I really appreicate it =)



Peace.

Your very welcome! lol. But it is true. :P

peAce

Its Alright...Just Make It A Litle Bit More In Depth And It Will Be Straight

Peace.

Thankz

peAce

that shit was tight man keep on posting you should join the corruptionz

Thank you. I will keep that in mind ;)

peAce

this piece got interestin towards tha end..didnt expect it to end that way which made it twisted...nah but nice piece a...keep droppin dem poems...pz and much luv

fuck u fag

Thankz you Xxplict_Desire...and as for you Smokin Dro...Kiss my Ass

nice shyt, i feeling it

Thanks :)

peAce

yeah that was a good piece and i agree with the other chick the ending was real unexpected but i like that not really knowing for sure whats going to hit you keep pumping

Thankz for writting

peAce