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05-26-03, 09:44 PM
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"No Need"
IP: 343F C529
Tell me what you think..Thankz...
No Need For you to Care anymore I'm Cold now, Lying motionless on the floor It's too late for you to care about me It's all over now, can't you see? I hear you apologize over and over again You wondered where I have been It didn't have to end this way If you would have just listened to what I had to say You never even gave me the chance to speak, Now, I'm laying here, Feeling so damn weak I only wanted to let you know That I am not and have never been a hoe What you try to make me out to be I never have cheated on you, never will...honestly I now feel the thick, red blood trickle down my broken nose The damaging pain streaking through my body, head to toe Still I manage to rise to my cold, bare feet I look up your worthless body untill our eyes meet I set a Cold, Blank stare upon you As your face shakes, while u repediatly say "I didn't mean to" I Grin briefly as I tighten my grip on the gun Now that you have had your little fun I raise it slowly, and rest it in my shaking hand I'm sure the shot could be heard across the quiet land As You drop to a Pulp on the wooden kitchen floor I softly whisper "No need for you to care anymore"... |
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05-26-03, 10:46 PM
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IP: 138A 47F5
okay this is damn good,
come to the revalation angels crew pm me if have any questions Last edited by DarkHisTory : 05-26-03 at 11:12 PM. |
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05-26-03, 11:23 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
Hey I tried to send you a PM but it said your mailbox was too full...Just thought I would let you know
peAce |
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05-26-03, 11:27 PM
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IP: 138A 47F5
oh damn lol ok, imma pm you now
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05-26-03, 11:32 PM
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IP: 138A 47F5
nevamind, i seen u posted in the crew thread
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05-26-03, 11:33 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
Yeah I figured it out...lol Thanks
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05-27-03, 03:14 AM
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IP: E693 37C7
real shit girl,im feelin it,its dark yet calmin to tha troubled mind,real shit boo,keep postin,peace.
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05-27-03, 03:22 AM
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IP: C1DA C961
Thank you once again! Ive enjoyed all your comments! I really appreciate you reading them!
...peAce |
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05-27-03, 04:44 AM
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IP: 6297 AC6B
That was a really tight poem, I felt your anger.
Peace |
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05-27-03, 02:57 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Thank you. I have read some of your material. Your very talented also.
peAce |
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05-28-03, 07:05 AM
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IP: 6297 AC6B
O really, thanks for the comment I really appreicate it =)
Peace. |
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05-29-03, 10:43 AM
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IP: 399E F0FD
Your very welcome! lol. But it is true. :P
peAce |
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05-31-03, 05:16 PM
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BANNED For Being A Dick
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IP: 17BA BD61
Its Alright...Just Make It A Litle Bit More In Depth And It Will Be Straight
Peace. |
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06-06-03, 01:34 PM
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IP: 3921 0878
Thankz
peAce |
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06-06-03, 04:04 PM
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IP: 508E 446C
that shit was tight man keep on posting you should join the corruptionz
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