Xquizit (0-0) vs. carsonjet (0-0) vs. C-Rabbit (0-0)
 

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Verses due TUESDAY
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Topic...
Choice

You may only vote for one person. The person with the most votes will get two wins. The person with the second amount of votes will get a win and a loss. The person with the least votes will get two losses.

Alright yo I am checkin in...

The topic I am doing mine on is "Was caught in a drive by a year ago...still haunted by it...and then decides to do something"

aight?

pEace

Um....You were given a topic. I would suggest following it.

The topic...says "Choice" So I took that as you could do it on w/e you want.

????

im checkin in

So what is the topic then????

Mad Man: The topic is Choice, like being faced with a decision....Get it.

im droppin now

Yo I can remember in Junior High this guy that sat next to me//
Day by day pressin me each class he was stressing me//
Fuckin faggot was talking about how he was thinking bout molestin me//
Each time I tried to squash beef he was steady disrespectin me//
And he went with this girl but she kept rejectin me//
And at the same time back home mom was neglectin me//
I felt alone like nobody was acceptin me//
Pussy couldn’t calm down nothing except the weed//
Puffin on a blunt in my room I began thinking real deep//
I can’t put up with this shit this nigga gonna catch heat//
And that little bitch of his I don’t know if I should touch her//
Maybe I’ll kill my self by fuckin her without a rubber//
I aint gonna do shit to my mother//
Well I guess I could lock her in the garage with the hummer//
I fell into a deep asleep knowin my decision would be final//
And that one of them muthafuckas is leavin earth without a title//
The next day I skipped school I got some connections from close relatives//
On where I could find the best firearms and who sells the shit//
I got the address and paced down the lane//
Till I approached the door which didn’t have a frame//
Should I knock or should I walk right in//
My decision was made by the thunder and lightin//
I walked in the mood was settle I saw this fine chick in stilettos//
I said im lookin for Irene she said “that’s me fellow”//
I told her what I needed and she took me to the storage//
And then took me to the bassment where she had even more shit//
I saw a AK but decided I need something lighter//
I saw a pistol but need something with more power in the fire//
I made my decision as I grabbed the d-eagle//
Should I be calm with it or should I become lethal//
Should I leave every muthfucka at school with skin that’s seethru//
And tick the nation off like kids around little beetles//
I walked to school the next day with the dessert in my bag//
I saw down the street that my boys relative had passed//
Should I go and pay my respects or handle business first//
Yea I didn’t even know the nigga plus this shits worse//
I approached the school steps and then they came quicker than cheetahs//
“do the bitch” do the dude” “do ya self” “I don’t give a fuck you got the heater”//
I couldn’t make a decision so I walked in the school lobby//
Pulled the gun out prayin that security would stop me//
I let three go and the dude was in the way//
The bitch caught it later bullets continued to spray//
My decision was final and when the mayhem stopped//
I looked down at my gun made sure the bitch was cocked//
I held the glock up positioned it firmly to my temple//
Sat down against the wall stretched my legs and saw the tip of my timb boot//
I squeezed the trigger firmly and I remained alive for a few seconds//
Should I keep breathin or do I need to keep pressin//
That was my first topical battle. Sorry for makin it so long but I had to get it across

i seriously hope ya'll aint gonna no show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

don't tell me i wasted a good verse for nothin

Here is my shit....

AK’s and M16’s shooting...car burns out and takes off..

Hit the ground running as I hear the bullets fly past my head, get up running for my life in dread. /1
Running threw back yards, over fences, and across streets…looking around while trying to stay balanced on my feet /.2
I look to my side and I only see 2 homies with me..I knew I shouldn’t have left with this nine milameter empty /3
Everything seems to be fine so I stop to take a breath..see blood on my clothes, mind flashes pictures of death /4
Realizing the blood isn’t mine, see both my niggaz takin out der nines..look up and I see the hummer run the stop sign../5.
The hummer comes back and shoots at us another time..running the direction we came from while my homies droppin dimes /6
Da hood is wokin up but we know they won’t come out..lookin out der windows but too scared to open da door and shout /7
I trip and fall and I look back too see what I tripped on...its my dawg Mad man laying lifeless and cold…shit man he gone. /8
I see my niggaz running but I can’t get up damn I’m in shock..damn them hatin niggaz coming but no clip in dis glock /9
All alone and no niggaz to have my back..I’ma fight these niggaz and show dem who got da biggest ball sack /10
3 against 1..man dawg you miswell label dis DOOM...swinging and kicking but I get the glock to my jaw..BOOM!! /11
------------------------------------Wakes up with heavy breathing-----------------------------------------------------

Sitting up in my bed drenched with sweet and tears..its been a year but its almost like it happened yesterday everythings so clear /12
I still remember da look on my dawgs face, distorted and bloody, and in his fist that Uzi was still tightly embraced/13
I got a scar under my jaw where the bullet went into my skull..was pronounced dead soon as the paramedics picked me up after da brawl /14
It only took one shot to make my ass fall..I laid there convulsing, after that, motionless completely dull /15
Time of death was 2:15 a.m. on April 24th two thousand and three...I was da top dawg, number one sella in da rap industry /15
But as you see..I’m still alive and kicking...hell beant on revenge is how dis nigga be stickin.../16
I got da gears in my head tickin…coming up with a master plan to get them niggaz straight trippen /17
Should I? Be the man to put these niggaz to rest, permantly being burried in the dirt /18
Or should I? Keep living my life the way I do..constantly reminded of my dawg getting burnt /19
I can’t take it..I’ma fuckin kill every single one off dem bitches..leavin der relatives heart broken and hurt /20
They’re gonna feel the pain that I feel and the shit that I have the deal with every day of my life /21
Have had thoughts about commiting sucide..but couldn’t do it ..not even slitting my wrists wita knife /22
Couseling nor rehab worked ..I lost everything..my job.. even my two kids and my beautiful wife /23
I can’t take it anymore..I am gonna put and a end to this with three slugs to all three of dem niggaz chest /24
Two Mac 10’s and M16 and a automatic nine..hopefully everything goes right if not..I hope I will be saved by this bullest proof vest /25
--------------Sounds of guns being loaded and cocked and then he leaves to put an end to this-------------
I gotta enough gun power behind me to produce a bomb attack..I could kill every motherfuckin pussy up in Iraq /26
I’ma one man army..shit can’t harm me..god gave me another chance to kill all you niggaz….mom I’m sorry /27
I wanna thank you for all you’ve giving me and for all the years of doing my dirty laundry /28
I gotta do this for myself, my dawg Mad Man, and for respect up in da hood /29
If I could I would..blow there hole crew up with a atomic bomb and end it now and for good /30
This bags getting heavy, I’ma throw it in the bed and hot wire this 4x4 chevy /31
Err...another crime just commited ..it don’t matter cause grand theft auto will only add 5 years to my conviction /32
You all have been living it up..da money, hoes, nice cars, and weed…before I kill deez motherfuckers I’ma get high on oxy’s and speed /33
Got the need, to stab you, shoot you till my glock runs out of bullets and then watch you suffer and bleed /34
Shit man I’m here..5th Street...I’ma shut dis car off and take it from here on my feet /35
------------------------------Grabs bag and then heads into the crackhouse----------------------------------------
I enter with silence and steath...sneakin in da back while strappin on dis bullet proof vest to provise my health /36
Shit man I hear talking.. almost there..my adrenaline is pumping dawg…hopefully none of these niggaz came prepared /37
I bust in the door and I start shooting bullets outta my M16...all 4 dem niggaz get up with gats…looks like all together they got fifteen /38
I shot on in da arm and another in his right side..stand up and shoot while I scream “BITCH NOW WHOZ DOWN TO RIDE!!” /39
Two niggaz drop with bullets to there head and chest..outta ammo for the M16 so I grab my Mac 10’s to do the rest /40
Automatic gats is what I am packin in my bag…single shot pistols ain’t shit but I guess the work for deez fags /41
Mac 10’s going off…I hear a nigga scream as another drops to da the floor..damn man now I am only left with this whore /42
Three niggaz dead and only one more nigga to kill..fuck it..I’ma have fun with this one and hang his body on St. Andrews Hill /43
Chasing this nigga down as he runs in retreat..come here nigga so I can slice ya ass down to bones and meat /44
Damn finally caught dat nigga as it was an hour chase..gave him a kick to the kidney and 10 punches to his face /45
Nigga my heart bleeds for you but you will get no remorse..5 shots to dat niggaz head..time to hang his corpse /46
---------------------------------Now we on St. Andrews Hill and the body is hung---------------------------------
Covered in blood and I am shaken thinking what am I gonna do now...I get down on my knees and prepare to take a vowe /47
Please god I am coming ..please take my soul…I commited this bloodshead in good reason...here I come god..watch how I leave in my head a hole /48
--------------------------------Puts the nine in mouth and pulls the trigger-----------------------------------------

Aight that’s my topical spit….

I hope it was good…it meant a lot to me and I liked it.

pEace

good drop son UPPIN FOR CARSON!

Well looks like that bitch CarsonJet never checked in..so I guess he is counted as a no show. So I guess peeps just vote on Xquzit's and my shit.

Am I right?

looks like it

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Well lets get the votes uppin then ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Well atleast neither one of us will be leaving without a win...cause CarsonJet is gonna have the 0-2.....the 2nd place duy will have 1-1 and the winner will have 2-0...so I guess thats cool

pEace

When do you the voting start? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin for votes

my vote goes ta r-rated cuz he had a way longer wich gave him tha advantage ta let more shit come out. he also had better flow. xquizit yo shit was hot to, no hate.

vote- r-rated

yo i read both pieces and after them i believe Rated's stuck wit me more....i like his it went together perfectly and that is gonna get my vote

Vote = R

aite man 2-0 you

the first vote shoudn't count since me and you had the same size verse but w/e

my vote goes to r-rated..that was publishing material..would make a good song if you had a hook and ish..lol i liked it better overall: 9/10..it was hot...was on topic...and kept me interested thru out the verse

carsonjet aint one to no show...i had no idea i was signed up..i sent a pm sayin i wanted to be in...figured id get a pm bak notifying me i was in...i wasnt...jus seen this now...i guess i get a no-show loss but what eva...was kinda lookin forward to this topical league too....

If you post, I won't give you the no-show aight. And you guys gotta take it upon yourself's to check these things out. I don't have time to pm everyone, I get 20 pm's a day aight.

if he posts before tonight is over?? That sounds more fair. If he posts before midnight tonight then he should be allowed but if not ....then no.

Right now it is 3-0 me. So lets keep these votes coming and lets see if he can get his shit in before midnight. pEace

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Uppin

will it start over if he post tonight

wheresa dude go to sign up?

im tryna get down on this shit, wassup...........

i bet u think im not gunna type any more, but u r dead wrong, id like to take this time to say.....fuck illusionist, fuck ghettowhiteboy, fuck 50 cent, ...i love pornography, hotti7 is in love with me, um.... RB is great cuz if i said any diff id get banned, id also like to say that ill prolly end up killin my self soon, uh, id like to say was up to my homeboys in chi-town rep it up, fuck warlords, ruthless has a milf, all i want for cristmas is pictures of the olsen twins naked,, add that i too am naked right now, id like to say that while theres a lotta homosexuals on this site, Illusionist and ghettowhiteboy are the biggest, id also like to reveal my biggest secret...














i am Krayzie Bone, and im not lying, um, id like to say that Eminem has a record comin out in 2004 right after 50 cents, Dre has a farewelll album droppin in late 03, Snoop Dogg is a pussy, and left threats on my answering macheine cuz i think he shot Pac, suge is llying, he knows who shot Pac, ummm id like to take this time to say that theres a certain someone on this site who is a fuckin bitch, and i cant say who, but u all know him, id like to say that u r alll welcome to come to my chat segment The Ladies Man friday at 7pm central time in the RB chat room, i tell herbs how to pick up girls, i help ppl with their relationships, sexual or romatic, Pair-a-Dice is the only person who thinks im not an herb, and i respect him for that, and thats about it....

Man well verses were due on Tuesday and he had like 6 hours to get his in before midnight and he never spit. So its only fair that he doesn't get to post his now. So can we keep it just between Xquizit and Me? If sp its 3-0 me.

pEace

here i jus read madman said i could drop

choices

choices, choices, decisions engraved in my mindset, cravin intense intalect//
tryna recollect the correct answer to all the question of life- wit intense dialect//
speakin easy witta mind...hard to find choices sprung up in my dome, hope answers i'll find//
Crimes of devilish-dutys brought to me wit lines tween insanity, spread cross like my soul's for decisions i signed//

I try to make right when all i prove is so wrong//
Long-short, clear-distort, i collect these signals wit no source port//

now im sit here in court, hearing...charges pressed, vehicular mansluaghter, remember the flesh of urs tearing//
unhealthy earthling i am, help i seek from devine spirits no virues held gainst my will wit no bearing//
Insane, maybe, but ecentric yeh im positive//
Tryna figure out witch life i wanna live//
From the street to the cell i lay, contemplate on how my life travels//
levels...i dare to die as i will sucomb to rotten bellows till my character mellows//

Crime..rotten glory wit gore from the curb to the flesh of the inocent//
My desicions follow thru...toe fore head first, mindset, jus an incident//
Harm forced naw but my choise to push in a glaze of red i mus re-live again//
To heaven i send..an under-privilidged spirit wit an un-marked end//
pretend? no not a game, no re-start-no med-kits to mend//
Life..our cycle..ineveitbale, gravitational circiuts work on an eternal bend//

Heavens please grace me for sparse decisions an choices i have made//
If i could give a level or grade i fail, but lord i sit wittan apoligiy of will set-out-n-laid//
choices..every day problems many saved many lost//
How-ever all the same wit no equall value or cost//

As Cj turns dow the mic he begins deep insight witta passage above thru a bright light//
Desicions poor made, forgivin, recieved wit open arms god laid, wit all his might, unimaginable height//
I creeped the valley of the unforgiven long enouph for my choices//
Heavans reep benifits on immunity, fatality of all in growing voices//
Remember, choices be choices but a nature of em all is whats growing in our soul//
Forgive an let be forgivin or be -reborn as i have... re-incarnated in satanical foal//

aight well its still 3-0 me...I am up three on ya both...lets keep the votes comin

pEace

Mad Man...letting his post that is bullshit....he posted it Wensday night when we had to post ours Tuesday night....and Xquizit and myself both posted ours on Monday. Its not our fault CarsonJet is irresponsible. But w/e..lets just let votes decide.

IT DONT MATTER DUDE IS MAD WACK

haha yeah....well damn peeps need to start votin on dis shit..^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
uppin

pEace

not mad wak....i dropped in 10 simply cus ia aint a no-show...gotta test for ya skills...quit talkin an set it up in battle lines...i jus stay tru to my word n drop...pc

all three of theses verses had no quality to them..
line lengths were irratic... i read all three..
and it was a waste of my time..

-Sureal

i agree on be-half of my verse...was dumb, off topic, jus a last minute drop to drop...what ya gon do...oh well...jus felt i should imput that i agree on the fact that my verse was of low-quality

R-Rated (2-0)
Xquizit (0-1)
carsonjet (0-1)
No votes went the other way, so I'm just giving it to R-Rated.