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B.R.E: What's The Difference ?
Weak-Minded Perspectives Susceptive To Infectious Genocidal Reflexes When The Powers Of Persuasion & Charisma Connected/
Energetic Words Projected, Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/ Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/ Under The Influence Of Confusion And Meticulously Constructed Illusions/ Who Really Controls The Movement? Who Cares?...Most Abused It/ The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/ Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/ In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/ But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/ Dignity, Each Entity Coincidentally Misplaced It/ Creation Of Revolutions For The Sole Purpose Of Amusement/ Their Passion, Bloodshed Fuels It/ So They Receive What They`re Askin For/ Action...More and More/ Until Hell`s Angels Attack God`s Front Door/ What Have They Come Here For? Individually Constructed Justice That Concept Doesn`t Exist/ But They Don`t Know This, So Of Course These Idiots Persist/ While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/ Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/ So They`re Rightfully Served/ Given The Vision Of Birds To Observe The Apocalypse/ Collision Of Polar Opposites/ The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/ A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/ Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/ Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence.... The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference??? |
holy shit. I thought that was ill. The whole verse flowed amazing, and the multies made it flow better. Very good wordplay. Yer last bar there ending it, that was jus awesome. I loved how that worked. Favourite lines were:
Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/ Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/ The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/ Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/ In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/ But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/ While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/ Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/ The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/ A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/ Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/ Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence.... The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference??? lmao, so yea, I jus quoted like half the verse, but dawg, it was ill. good shit for sure, hope u stay on the site. btw, if you wouldnt mind, could u peep my song "helpless" and drop some feed, Id really appreciate it! Peace |
Damn..Can I Get Atleast A Lil More Feedback ?
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good shit here dawg,was tha task to use everyn complex word in tha dictionary,lol jus playin very good drop.
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WOW! Great Drop, the complexity and flow match perfectly along wit the wordplay, damn!, thas some tight shit
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Thx Fa The Luv....Uppin Fa Critique
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damn nice flow and vocab
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You multis and wordplays are sick. Overall this was a sick piece. Keep it up!!
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Uppin Fa Replies...
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^^^Uppin Summore
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damn nigga, thats complex.. nyce shyt
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yeah man that shit was pure fiyah...like almost everyone said the multis were amazin and the flow was flawless....im really feelin your writin style u aint writin to fill place your shit is worth a readin or 2 or 3 lol
Peep my new track called while my hands bleed http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=404878&q=Hi drop a comment or critique..keep writtin dope stuff like this |
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Guess Ya'll Completely Forgot About This 1..
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shit was mad sicc.............nice vocab.....wordplay.......everything was off the hook.............nice piece............
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