Weak-Minded Perspectives Susceptive To Infectious Genocidal Reflexes When The Powers Of Persuasion & Charisma Connected/
Energetic Words Projected,
Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/
Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/
Under The Influence Of Confusion And Meticulously Constructed Illusions/
Who Really Controls The Movement?
Who Cares?...Most Abused It/
The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/
Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/
In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/
But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/
Dignity, Each Entity Coincidentally Misplaced It/
Creation Of Revolutions For The Sole Purpose Of Amusement/
Their Passion, Bloodshed Fuels It/
So They Receive What They`re Askin For/
Action...More and More/
Until Hell`s Angels Attack God`s Front Door/
What Have They Come Here For?
Individually Constructed Justice
That Concept Doesn`t Exist/
But They Don`t Know This, So Of Course These Idiots Persist/
While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/
Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/
So They`re Rightfully Served/
Given The Vision Of Birds To Observe The Apocalypse/
Collision Of Polar Opposites/
The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/
A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/
Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/
Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence....

The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference???

holy shit. I thought that was ill. The whole verse flowed amazing, and the multies made it flow better. Very good wordplay. Yer last bar there ending it, that was jus awesome. I loved how that worked. Favourite lines were:

Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/
Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/

The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/
Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/
In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/
But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/

While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/
Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/

The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/
A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/
Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/
Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence....

The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference???

lmao, so yea, I jus quoted like half the verse, but dawg, it was ill. good shit for sure, hope u stay on the site.

btw, if you wouldnt mind, could u peep my song "helpless" and drop some feed, Id really appreciate it!

Peace

Damn..Can I Get Atleast A Lil More Feedback ?

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good shit here dawg,was tha task to use everyn complex word in tha dictionary,lol jus playin very good drop.

Peace

WOW! Great Drop, the complexity and flow match perfectly along wit the wordplay, damn!, thas some tight shit

Thx Fa The Luv....Uppin Fa Critique

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damn nice flow and vocab

You multis and wordplays are sick. Overall this was a sick piece. Keep it up!!

Uppin Fa Replies...

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^^^Uppin Summore

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damn nigga, thats complex.. nyce shyt

yeah man that shit was pure fiyah...like almost everyone said the multis were amazin and the flow was flawless....im really feelin your writin style u aint writin to fill place your shit is worth a readin or 2 or 3 lol

Peep my new track called while my hands bleed
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=404878&q=Hi

drop a comment or critique..keep writtin dope stuff like this

Uppin..

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