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Mr. Rogers 06-17-03 04:36 AM

B.R.E: What's The Difference ?
 
Weak-Minded Perspectives Susceptive To Infectious Genocidal Reflexes When The Powers Of Persuasion & Charisma Connected/
Energetic Words Projected,
Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/
Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/
Under The Influence Of Confusion And Meticulously Constructed Illusions/
Who Really Controls The Movement?
Who Cares?...Most Abused It/
The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/
Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/
In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/
But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/
Dignity, Each Entity Coincidentally Misplaced It/
Creation Of Revolutions For The Sole Purpose Of Amusement/
Their Passion, Bloodshed Fuels It/
So They Receive What They`re Askin For/
Action...More and More/
Until Hell`s Angels Attack God`s Front Door/
What Have They Come Here For?
Individually Constructed Justice
That Concept Doesn`t Exist/
But They Don`t Know This, So Of Course These Idiots Persist/
While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/
Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/
So They`re Rightfully Served/
Given The Vision Of Birds To Observe The Apocalypse/
Collision Of Polar Opposites/
The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/
A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/
Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/
Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence....

The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference???

D GreE 06-17-03 04:43 AM

holy shit. I thought that was ill. The whole verse flowed amazing, and the multies made it flow better. Very good wordplay. Yer last bar there ending it, that was jus awesome. I loved how that worked. Favourite lines were:

Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/
Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/

The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/
Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/
In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/
But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/

While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/
Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/

The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/
A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/
Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/
Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence....

The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference???

lmao, so yea, I jus quoted like half the verse, but dawg, it was ill. good shit for sure, hope u stay on the site.

btw, if you wouldnt mind, could u peep my song "helpless" and drop some feed, Id really appreciate it!

Peace

Mr. Rogers 06-17-03 02:36 PM

Damn..Can I Get Atleast A Lil More Feedback ?

west 06-17-03 02:41 PM

good shit here dawg,was tha task to use everyn complex word in tha dictionary,lol jus playin very good drop.

Peace

Blood Hound 06-17-03 03:36 PM

WOW! Great Drop, the complexity and flow match perfectly along wit the wordplay, damn!, thas some tight shit

Mr. Rogers 06-17-03 03:42 PM

Thx Fa The Luv....Uppin Fa Critique

Lyrical Killer 06-17-03 03:46 PM

damn nice flow and vocab

KuriousMinds 06-17-03 05:04 PM

You multis and wordplays are sick. Overall this was a sick piece. Keep it up!!

Mr. Rogers 06-17-03 07:03 PM

Uppin Fa Replies...

Mr. Rogers 06-17-03 11:47 PM

^^^Uppin Summore

deushy 06-18-03 12:50 AM

damn nigga, thats complex.. nyce shyt

Atilla 06-18-03 01:51 AM

yeah man that shit was pure fiyah...like almost everyone said the multis were amazin and the flow was flawless....im really feelin your writin style u aint writin to fill place your shit is worth a readin or 2 or 3 lol

Peep my new track called while my hands bleed
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=404878&q=Hi

drop a comment or critique..keep writtin dope stuff like this

Mr. Rogers 06-18-03 02:51 AM

Uppin..

Mr. Rogers 06-18-03 08:46 AM

...^^^

Mr. Rogers 06-19-03 04:53 AM

Guess Ya'll Completely Forgot About This 1..


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