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9mm Vs Ambiguous
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1.15 lines 2.no hate votes 3.no dickriders 4.u spit first 5. 1 round |
check in and i'll spit afta u
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I just checked my PM's... i said 10 lines MAX in bitch slapped... i ain't battling to these rules.
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~Rules~ 1.10 lines 2.no hate votes 3.no dickriders 4.u spit first 5. 1 round .................................................. .................................................. .................................... |
Aite... i'm down, this is my check in, i'll spit in a bit
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coo i'll spit afta u
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Sorry for taking so long... here's my verse.
9 Millimeter… must be referin’ to his manhood’s size, he’ll meet his demise, if-he-tries-to-act-wise/ He acts like he’s spreadin’-girls-thighs, well SURPRISE… he’s messin with priests, tryin’ to get “baptized”/ “We “spit” together, we “rise” together”… homosexual fantasies is what his crew, really-wants-to-explore/ On the real, your verse is “tite”… like triple-XL shirts on anorexic whores, his verse makes sense, like a cripple on a dance floor/ Kid couldn’t “drop-a-nice-verse” if it was laced with soap, him winning this battle… my computer freezin’ is his only hope/ Crack-kills… you dope, why don’t you two go and elope, nine is already past his “peak”, his verse seems like it was written on a downward slope/ Your whack verse gets read quickly like the alphabet’s, “L-M-N-O-P”, my words have this fag “shaking”… more than Muhammad Ali/ Let’s agree to disagree, I could hang you from a tree to make you scream like a banshee… maybe then, you’ll sound like a real emcee/ He’s strapped with “thermostats”… so he says he’s “bringing-the-heat”, trick or treat, either way you’ll get “beat-like-meat” and left shredded like wheat/ Like singing acapella, your verse is “off-beat”, messin’ with me you, better retreat or face another defeat, get “paved” like streets, if you think you elite/ |
nice drop you could u hit my battle up against xtreme flow. i'll come back and vote when 9 drops aight thanx
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You couldn't have read that in a minute... please don't freepost, i'll check out your battle right now............................................... ....
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You gonna drop or what... i see that you're online, you've had enough time to prewrite... let's go.
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i bout to spit
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This kids ryme was cold but now his ice gone thin,my flows throw blows that make this kids chest cave in/1
Put chains on ya hands and feet and make u my new slave,bury 20 feet deep and then piss on ya grave/2 My dogs wanna battle too but they can have whats left,punches are so hard they'll make u lose ya breath/3 My flows come wit forces more powerful than floods,slice ur neck from ear to ear and watch u drown in your blood/4 Any signs of past wins should be evaporated,put ur head on the chop block and watch u be decapotated/5 Im comin out wit my rymes so playa dont trip,swell this kids whole face up bigger than jay-z's lip/6 This kids got game but the games too old,couldnt beat 9mm's game if i gave him the code/7 Spit rymes too big for this kids comprehension,make this kid beat his meat to relieve most of his tension/8 Flow wit rymes that gives sickness and is known to kill,kick this man while he's down and break his will/9 The battle is officially over with the win i just gained,leave this kid dumbfounded wit his record blood stained/10 |
It took you 19 hours plus to spit... and you still couldn't spell words right... and you fed off my "beat like meat" line, man that ain't cool, i thought someone with your record would spit soon, not 19 hours later, whatever, let's get some votes.
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I thought ambigous was the better man here
better flow bettr dissing beter wordplay and mutli'a he burned ir up here good battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67356 |
he spits late....and losses..wut else could go wrong...lol j/k but ur verse was iight 9mm.....AMBIGUOUS...newbie on fire...u had everythign in this battle..
punches...hot wordplay...yup ill multi's...i'd like to see more complexity..it was definately there.... overall u good....:) get at me on aim or yim or damn something one day so i can holla at u..my s/n are in my profile.holla |
i think this goes to 9mill tha otha cat spitted tight but i personall don't think it was good enough.
Vote:9mill poll Vote:9mill |
Haha, thanks hottie... that means a lot coming from a vet, and j-wizzle... i have nothing to say about that vote 1-1.
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i cant vote yet but heres my thought of tha battle
flow-9 vocab-9 disses-amb punches-9 multis-amb overall:9 Vote:9 |
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I agree what he said dis was a close battle and both spitted sick as hell |
uppin for votes... this faggot is campaigning for votes, that ain't cool, hit this up with honest votes, (#1)
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i'm tellin people to vote honest so shut tha hell up i'm only doin it so are battle don't get sleep on dumbass
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aiight ambiguous got this one through wordplay...some graphic punches, i was jus feelin ambigous's verse more...tite battle...no beef...oNe
vote-ambiguous |
Thanks for the HONEST vote, i'm just gettin pissed by 9 goin to every battle and campaigning for votes. 2-1, let's get some more votes.
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yo man i liked nine milimeters verse, ambiguous had some sweet lines tho i gotta give some respect to that, the "cripple on a dance floor" line was HOT...but i dunno like flow nine milimeter had i thought was quite better, so i gotta give my vote to him
if i could poll, my vote would be -> 9Milimeter |
ambig took it wit a lil betta unches and flow really close battle tho im out holla
peep mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2375#post642375 |
thanx for ur thought man i appreciate it.........................................
Uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
3-1, thanks for the vote show, i'll hit it up in a lil bit, 2 more votes to finish off this pathetic faggot that campaigns for votes.
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ima go wit 9 on dis one punches were makin me laugh yo could u peep my pinkslip battle against crazy patient i sent his ass home in a body bag
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3-2, um... ok, i guess everyone is entitled to their opinion... did 9mm PM you for a vote or tell you to vote in your battle?
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Word 9 youve got merked..........he had it all a real better overall.......you had some nice things in your verse but he ripped you......4 real Vote-Ambiguous....... |
See... all the vets that know how to vote know who won... i dunno were 9 got all those votes from... uppin to end this faggot.
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vote-9
poll vote-9 better overall .................................................. ................................. |
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Thats not a fukkin vote you herb you should been banned for that |
Damn... thanks thugsdocry... that's how i fuckin feel right now, how the hell is this battle even that close... 4-4??? that's some bullshit, he got merked easy.
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Ambiguous Was On Top on this... better punches, all on target, tight flow, and good wordplay..... better verse overall.......
vote: Ambiguous |
Gotta give this to Ambiguous...
His wordplay is what took this... Milli came with straight punches that were good, but kinda played and well, predictable. Ambigious had the punches, along with nice flow and complexity added. |
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