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Unique Expression
Unique Expression
I express maself by invision and by puttin ma sticky tips to tha keyboard/ tha world wide web got me catchin information allowin me to see more/ i'ma story teller but ma highs and lows are certainly not fiction/ there real life dealings which will leave you in a state of addiction/ injecting into ma mind is like goin back to when we couldn't navigate in terrential rain/ lost skin pretruding memories of titanic disasters and a heroin sufferers pain/ my emotions are so varied there as different as a year without four seasons/ we got hot,cold,rainy and dry sometimes multiple,date and time give me tha reasons/ whether it be a look,word or touch i can honestly express maself in many ways/ but no escaping tha truth my senses are as unique as tha exit from an unfinished maze/ i extend and forward my hand to which another is placed to symbolise a greeting/ lookin in tha eye of an enemy to give him tha sign that West aint retreating/ graspin sign language i use one finger pointing north to say fuck you i'm never gonna stop/ it's gonna be a hard climb but i won't lose grip until i reach it to tha top/ Hook - I can only be myself - (It's shouted) I've circome to tha fact that whether good or bad i will leave you with an impression/ I can only be myself - (It's shouted) Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expression/ You can't be noone else - (It's shouted) You should circome to tha fact that whether good or bad you will leave people with an impression/ You can't be noone else - (It's shouted) Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expresssion/ I express my knowledge from sources like dissertations and advanced books/ hip pop rappers get there checks early from record labels who worry bout beats and hooks/ television,tabloids and magazines use propaganda to sway tha majorities opinions/ fictitous advertisements brainwash and turn tha masses into non free thinking minions/ jus pass me tha mic and i'll capture a still of reality and frame it with my lyrics/ i paint a picture of clarity through vocals releasing tha impossible and i pause tha mimics/ computers can fly through pages calculate and control through certain programmes and commands/ but artificial intelligence can't express without bein piloted,given tha sum or given orders by man/ artforms are thoughts expressed from tha mind emcompassed in sculpture,writings and plays/ i mould an image and give foot notes describing what thoughts i wanted to provoke and replay/ conversations with eminem,canibus,Nas and jay-z clones give rise to tha same 100 bars bein duplicated/ i'm a ray of sunshine,solid as a roc coz i remember,destroy and rebuild and can communicate it/ no original flow or extra terrestrial ideas emcees only wanna talk about what they acheived and own/ how many songs bout bling and bitches,must be written before they find out theyr'e not alone/ expression is when a thought is conveyed into a movement,number,word or entire action/ i speak tha truth,show you tha way home and lead you to a place where my flow isn't a minor fraction/ Hook - I can only be myself - (It's shouted) I've circome to tha fact that whether good or bad i will leave you with an impression/ I can only be myself - (It's shouted) Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expression/ You can't be noone else - (It's shouted) You should circome to tha fact that whether good or bad you will leave people with an impression/ You can't be noone else - (It's shouted) Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expresssion/ I can only be myself - (It's shouted) I've circome to tha fact that whether good or bad i will leave you with an impression/ You can't be noone else - (It's shouted) Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expresssion/ |
so many sleepers nowadays.
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I liked it, it was really cool, gave good flow and had some nice meaning in there, good overal. Probably don't mean much comeing from a noob though.
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Yo dawg all critiques are appreciated,Uppin.
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dawg... that was fuckin sick mang...
i like the hook and your verses were good too... that shit had definate flow... |
Thanx.
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Yo uppin peeps.
Peace |
hey west dat was pretty nice
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^^^that was pretty nice bruv, keep elavating |
tight drop man..verses an hook was pure fire...i liked your starting verse it was ill u had it all in that...1
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thanx dawgs.
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some feedback peeps.
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ZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........
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wow...good shit man...nice vocab and the flow was tight too...you had some quotablez but I'm too lazy to uote em now...lol...but I think you know where they are...
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Thanx man,uppin this peeps.
Peace |
Uppin this for some feedback.
Peace |
uppin once again.
Peace |
first of all respect...i was feelin this piece all around namean...i think the verses were hot shit like curry excrement, and the hook was mad ill like alfred e neuman in a hospital bed...good topic, wordplay was consistant throughout the piece...keep elevatin locsta...wahid
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Thanx dawg,uppin.
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damn...
lol, basically sat there after reading it and said damn. your obviously on a high level,some nice shit at first glance i was gunna say shorten it but after reading it through like twice... you got it down right...it aint oo long nice hook too- fereal quote: "no original flow or extra terrestrial ideas emcees only wanna talk about what they acheived and own/ how many songs bout bling and bitches,must be written before they find out theyr'e not alone/" so tru b, so tru |
thanx dawg,uppin,
Peace |
seems like alot of replies but it's actually only been ike 4,i been uppin alot.
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ZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........Again peeps.
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uppin again all u sleepy people,jus another few replies will do.
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Damn dawgs.
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man, I couldn't sleep on this one. I feel this. I am self made and motivated. expression is freedom. This is nice.
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graspin sign language i use one finger pointing north to say fuck you i'm never gonna stop/
it's gonna be a hard climb but i won't lose grip until i reach it to tha top/ Nice drop west.....very nice.....straight fire... Your vocab seemed a little lower than ususal, but its ok, you did good in this part. Vocab Overall- 7/10 FLow was excellent, Nice job, none of your lines seemed to be stretched. Flow Overall- 9/10 Creativity, Loved the Topic, NIce Choice, Nice Added in hook there, really brought this peice up. Overall- 9/10....I think you did a really nice job on this peice.... Get at me about a collab, ya know? Nice drop...:) Keep it real |
thanks,uppin.
Peace |
Tight, tight, tight. This was amazing. Good use of vocab. The opening line was really good. return the favor on my piece Outlaw
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Thanx dawg,Uppin.
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Uppin,once more.
Peace |
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