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west 09-08-03 02:42 PM

Unique Expression
 
Unique Expression

I express maself by invision and by puttin ma sticky tips to tha keyboard/
tha world wide web got me catchin information allowin me to see more/
i'ma story teller but ma highs and lows are certainly not fiction/
there real life dealings which will leave you in a state of addiction/
injecting into ma mind is like goin back to when we couldn't navigate in terrential rain/
lost skin pretruding memories of titanic disasters and a heroin sufferers pain/
my emotions are so varied there as different as a year without four seasons/
we got hot,cold,rainy and dry sometimes multiple,date and time give me tha reasons/
whether it be a look,word or touch i can honestly express maself in many ways/
but no escaping tha truth my senses are as unique as tha exit from an unfinished maze/
i extend and forward my hand to which another is placed to symbolise a greeting/
lookin in tha eye of an enemy to give him tha sign that West aint retreating/
graspin sign language i use one finger pointing north to say fuck you i'm never gonna stop/
it's gonna be a hard climb but i won't lose grip until i reach it to tha top/

Hook -

I can only be myself - (It's shouted)
I've circome to tha fact that whether good or bad i will leave you with an impression/
I can only be myself - (It's shouted)
Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expression/
You can't be noone else - (It's shouted)
You should circome to tha fact that whether good or bad you will leave people with an impression/
You can't be noone else - (It's shouted)
Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expresssion/

I express my knowledge from sources like dissertations and advanced books/
hip pop rappers get there checks early from record labels who worry bout beats and hooks/
television,tabloids and magazines use propaganda to sway tha majorities opinions/
fictitous advertisements brainwash and turn tha masses into non free thinking minions/
jus pass me tha mic and i'll capture a still of reality and frame it with my lyrics/
i paint a picture of clarity through vocals releasing tha impossible and i pause tha mimics/
computers can fly through pages calculate and control through certain programmes and commands/
but artificial intelligence can't express without bein piloted,given tha sum or given orders by man/
artforms are thoughts expressed from tha mind emcompassed in sculpture,writings and plays/
i mould an image and give foot notes describing what thoughts i wanted to provoke and replay/
conversations with eminem,canibus,Nas and jay-z clones give rise to tha same 100 bars bein duplicated/
i'm a ray of sunshine,solid as a roc coz i remember,destroy and rebuild and can communicate it/
no original flow or extra terrestrial ideas emcees only wanna talk about what they acheived and own/
how many songs bout bling and bitches,must be written before they find out theyr'e not alone/
expression is when a thought is conveyed into a movement,number,word or entire action/
i speak tha truth,show you tha way home and lead you to a place where my flow isn't a minor fraction/

Hook -

I can only be myself - (It's shouted)
I've circome to tha fact that whether good or bad i will leave you with an impression/
I can only be myself - (It's shouted)
Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expression/
You can't be noone else - (It's shouted)
You should circome to tha fact that whether good or bad you will leave people with an impression/
You can't be noone else - (It's shouted)
Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expresssion/
I can only be myself - (It's shouted)
I've circome to tha fact that whether good or bad i will leave you with an impression/
You can't be noone else - (It's shouted)
Coz whether good or bad everyone has a unique expresssion/

west 09-08-03 03:30 PM

so many sleepers nowadays.

Alchemy 09-08-03 03:33 PM

I liked it, it was really cool, gave good flow and had some nice meaning in there, good overal. Probably don't mean much comeing from a noob though.

west 09-08-03 05:24 PM

Yo dawg all critiques are appreciated,Uppin.

Peace

A.T. 09-08-03 05:41 PM

dawg... that was fuckin sick mang...
i like the hook and your verses were good too...
that shit had definate flow...

west 09-08-03 05:48 PM

Thanx.

west 09-08-03 08:25 PM

Yo uppin peeps.

Peace

/:Ayura:\ 09-08-03 08:50 PM

hey west dat was pretty nice


Quote:
paint a picture of clarity through vocals releasing tha impossible and i pause tha mimics/
computers can fly through pages calculate and control through certain programmes and commands/


^^^that was pretty nice bruv, keep elavating

rule 09-08-03 08:53 PM

tight drop man..verses an hook was pure fire...i liked your starting verse it was ill u had it all in that...1

west 09-08-03 08:59 PM

thanx dawgs.

Peace

west 09-08-03 09:42 PM

some feedback peeps.

west 09-08-03 09:56 PM

ZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........

Otherwordz 09-08-03 11:20 PM

wow...good shit man...nice vocab and the flow was tight too...you had some quotablez but I'm too lazy to uote em now...lol...but I think you know where they are...

west 09-08-03 11:29 PM

Thanx man,uppin this peeps.

Peace

west 09-08-03 11:35 PM

Uppin this for some feedback.

Peace

west 09-09-03 12:05 AM

uppin once again.

Peace

Narcicyst 09-09-03 12:11 AM

first of all respect...i was feelin this piece all around namean...i think the verses were hot shit like curry excrement, and the hook was mad ill like alfred e neuman in a hospital bed...good topic, wordplay was consistant throughout the piece...keep elevatin locsta...wahid

west 09-09-03 12:22 AM

Thanx dawg,uppin.

K-RaZy 09-09-03 12:40 AM

damn...
lol, basically sat there after reading it and said damn.
your obviously on a high level,some nice shit

at first glance i was gunna say shorten it
but after reading it through like twice...
you got it down right...it aint oo long

nice hook too- fereal

quote:

"no original flow or extra terrestrial ideas emcees only wanna talk about what they acheived and own/
how many songs bout bling and bitches,must be written before they find out theyr'e not alone/"

so tru b, so tru

west 09-09-03 10:04 AM

thanx dawg,uppin,

Peace

west 09-09-03 10:47 AM

seems like alot of replies but it's actually only been ike 4,i been uppin alot.

Peace

west 09-09-03 11:40 AM

ZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........Again peeps.

Peace

west 09-09-03 01:04 PM

uppin again all u sleepy people,jus another few replies will do.

Peace

west 09-09-03 02:15 PM

Damn dawgs.

J Nice 09-09-03 03:14 PM

man, I couldn't sleep on this one. I feel this. I am self made and motivated. expression is freedom. This is nice.

Slik 09-09-03 05:47 PM

graspin sign language i use one finger pointing north to say fuck you i'm never gonna stop/
it's gonna be a hard climb but i won't lose grip until i reach it to tha top/

Nice drop west.....very nice.....straight fire...

Your vocab seemed a little lower than ususal, but its ok, you did good in this part. Vocab Overall- 7/10
FLow was excellent, Nice job, none of your lines seemed to be stretched. Flow Overall- 9/10
Creativity, Loved the Topic, NIce Choice, Nice Added in hook there, really brought this peice up.

Overall- 9/10....I think you did a really nice job on this peice....
Get at me about a collab, ya know?
Nice drop...:)

Keep it real

west 09-09-03 06:49 PM

thanks,uppin.

Peace

Passivist 09-09-03 07:52 PM

Tight, tight, tight. This was amazing. Good use of vocab. The opening line was really good. return the favor on my piece Outlaw

west 09-09-03 10:33 PM

Thanx dawg,Uppin.

west 09-09-03 11:58 PM

Uppin,once more.

Peace


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