i am teh best 23, second battle, vs pine-cone
 

yo normal rules.
, and try to write a longer verse this time.

hey man,
ok heres the plan/
i'm gonna rap with words a flame,
i'll leave you standing with noone to blame/
just cause my words are so elaberant, extravagent,
that even you couldn't have planned for it/
can you stand it, i hope your mind isn't exerted,
cause after this it will be distorted/
so go eat you candy, it might come in handy,
when you trying to hold down you brandy/
cause i know the vodca wont go,
but anything you drink will make you blow/

yo greg where are you?.............
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come on just feed off of my verse and make fun of shit that i said, or turn it around.............
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chrish your mam so fat when she jumped in the water the wales sang we are family. yu wnt to rap try this you think you strong the strongest part of you is your thong

turn aruontd your crap i could spin cricles aroud your crap,
you think you can surive you cauld not surive if you lived in a shopping mall. I am head strong u r finger strong .

dude, that still sucked, you gotta make them rhyme, and dont rhyme shit like "crap" with "crap"..........
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i got my knife and i plan on killing you and obie tirce. you want to suck suck on this . you think u have nuts all gor probilibiy as bigger nut sthean you. you want to fight fight this tears .

this guys purely wack as fcuk!!! dont no one give newbies any lessons how to structure a verse??? shit

i think that newbie needs some help lol checkin into the WEC mabye they can help you out man! learn how to use longer verses and word on ur rhymes then mabye you can take that pine-cone cuz hes just wack too

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pine cone took this easily. i am teh best you are whack as fuck my nigga im sorry but you need to elevate badly

pine cone you could have beat him while you were fucking his moms
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how are u guys takin this seriously?

its obvioulsy a bullsiht battle i think....


GameTime...

pine cone has potential...don't waste ya time on wack ass nuccas...23 has got to be the wackest outta 30 rapsites i been on!!!

vote pine cone...battle comp and up ya skills....

^^^werd, u do have potential dude, but ur gettin no where by battlin him, u need to battle someone who can at least give u a desent challlenge. pine cone took this easily, there is no need to even explain it.

peace......

thanks dogg, but teh best 23 just wanted me to battle him and show him the ropes, he will catch on soon.....
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pine-cone don't waste time on newbie's there is no point only if you wanna get your wins up man challenge me in the near future man i'll have one more go with you if ppl will vote on it next time lol

Pime cone had flow, vocab the other guy suck both of yall need to get better

vote pinecone

hit the link up and vote for the battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83090

23=wack as fuck..........................pine cone will win cos the other guys poor as fuck.............................................. ..................


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