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i am teh best 23 0 0%
pine-cone 5 100.00%
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Old 10-02-03, 09:20 PM   #1
da boxa
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From: Pine-Tree
i am teh best 23, second battle, vs pine-cone

IP: 8EB8 B942

yo normal rules.
, and try to write a longer verse this time.
 
Old 10-02-03, 09:27 PM   #2
da boxa
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From: Pine-Tree
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hey man,
ok heres the plan/
i'm gonna rap with words a flame,
i'll leave you standing with noone to blame/
just cause my words are so elaberant, extravagent,
that even you couldn't have planned for it/
can you stand it, i hope your mind isn't exerted,
cause after this it will be distorted/
so go eat you candy, it might come in handy,
when you trying to hold down you brandy/
cause i know the vodca wont go,
but anything you drink will make you blow/
 
Old 10-02-03, 09:33 PM   #3
da boxa
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From: Pine-Tree
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yo greg where are you?.............
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Old 10-02-03, 09:33 PM   #4
da boxa
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From: Pine-Tree
IP: 8EB8 B942

come on just feed off of my verse and make fun of shit that i said, or turn it around.............
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Old 10-02-03, 09:36 PM   #5
i am teh best 23
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chrish your mam so fat when she jumped in the water the wales sang we are family. yu wnt to rap try this you think you strong the strongest part of you is your thong
 
Old 10-02-03, 09:43 PM   #6
i am teh best 23
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turn aruontd your crap i could spin cricles aroud your crap,
you think you can surive you cauld not surive if you lived in a shopping mall. I am head strong u r finger strong .
 
Old 10-02-03, 09:45 PM   #7
da boxa
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From: Pine-Tree
IP: 8EB8 B942

dude, that still sucked, you gotta make them rhyme, and dont rhyme shit like "crap" with "crap"..........
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Old 10-02-03, 09:52 PM   #8
i am teh best 23
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i got my knife and i plan on killing you and obie tirce. you want to suck suck on this . you think u have nuts all gor probilibiy as bigger nut sthean you. you want to fight fight this tears .
 
Old 10-02-03, 09:57 PM   #9
stuckmysta
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this guys purely wack as fcuk!!! dont no one give newbies any lessons how to structure a verse??? shit
 
Old 10-02-03, 10:07 PM   #10
Rap~Man
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i think that newbie needs some help lol checkin into the WEC mabye they can help you out man! learn how to use longer verses and word on ur rhymes then mabye you can take that pine-cone cuz hes just wack too
 
Old 10-02-03, 10:09 PM   #11
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Old 10-02-03, 10:44 PM   #12
mr.iceman
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pine cone took this easily. i am teh best you are whack as fuck my nigga im sorry but you need to elevate badly
 
Old 10-02-03, 11:03 PM   #13
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pine cone you could have beat him while you were fucking his moms
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Old 10-02-03, 11:10 PM   #14
GameTime
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how are u guys takin this seriously?

its obvioulsy a bullsiht battle i think....


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Old 10-02-03, 11:26 PM   #15
Tonya~Montana
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pine cone has potential...don't waste ya time on wack ass nuccas...23 has got to be the wackest outta 30 rapsites i been on!!!

vote pine cone...battle comp and up ya skills....
 
 


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