EJK vs Onslaught - X
 

ight man u first 10 - 20 lines

JOEY STABILE IM HITTING YOU WITH VERBAL STEEL/ YO THE FUNK IS WHAT YOUR FAKIN/ I MAKE YOUR BLOODCLOT LIKE I WAS JAMAICAN/ YOU NAME IS ON SLAUGHT? WELL IM ABOUT TO SLAUGHTER/ YOUR MOMS YOURS DADS YOURS SONS AND DAUGHTERS/ YOU CALL THIS A BATTLE/ BITCH BEST RECOGNIZE IMA KILL YOU LIKE CATTLE/ YOU AINT GOT THE HEART TO BEAT DUDE YOU AINT PUT IN THE WORK/ IM BURY YOU 6 FEET IN THE DIRT/ MY RAPS HURT LIKE VERBAL BLOWS TO THOSE WHO CANT HANDLES PROS/ ALL MY FLOWS ARE CONSISTENT/ YOURS ARE ON AND OFF/ I NEVER SAID I WAS HARD BUT BITCH YOU SOFT/ THIS SHIT IS A JOKE/ GO TO THE MEDIC YOU JUST GOT VERBALLY SMOKED

Not only does he intimidate you with all capslock but his avatar is stewie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

checkin in what with caps lock man .................................................. .................................................. ...................................

caps lock scares all and stewies just plain evil.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................

its so gay with the 100 characters so u just gotta do this shit ".................................................. ..........................."

Tick tick tick tick tick.............................................. .................................................. ........

lol calm down, have some patience,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

i know but i gotta go to bed soon im tired............................................. .................................................. ......................

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when im finished with this kid theyll be a police investigation, man i read your bio your a fan or masterbation
well i heard u ate your own u just when and stuck your face-in,
man your buck teeth and height make u look like an asian
i know u only like rap on the occasion , well ur face is so ugly it
wont even help if u get an operation
man remember chuckie u couldnt keep steady
when im through with u theyll be throwing up confedi
pieces of your body like italians with sphegitti
your rymes dirty and stolen like immirants on the ferry

that burns yo i gotta go that was tight peace............................................. ......................................

uppin vote everybody!!! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(1)

uppin vote everybody!!! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(2)

Im a vote on this battle. EJK one point of advice, dont write in all caps. Spread your shit out like Slaught did. Just makes it easier to read. You some punches EJK and flow, but creativity wasant there. Slaught came with some nice punches. I found he had more creativity on his lyrics. For a lightweight good shit..

Im gonna go wit Slaught on this...

nice, lets see some more votes............................................. ..........................

uppin to see who won


my brother or my friend

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uppin (3) lets see some votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

oh yeah thanks for the vote lillem i appreciate it .................................................. .................................................. .....................

ejk is whack he needs serious elevation. onslaught took this wit harder punches better vocab and better structure.

my vote=onslaught x

hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87013

thanks for the vote iceman and i will hit yours up with an honest vote as soon as i get 100 posts until then i got no say in battle votes

uppin (4) can we get some votes in here .................................................. .................................................. ...

uppin 5 comeon why dont no one vote i would if i had 100 posts COME ON!!!!!!!!!....................................... .................................................. .........

yo this battle was a mess..... EJK get some format going man, that shit hurts the eyez to read...

X good flow, decent punches, work on your spelling it will help mf's understand your shit better

punches: X
personals: tie
originality: X
overall: X

keep elevatin yall

vote = X

hit this up http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87114

thanks man for the vote and ill work on spelling.......................................... .................................................. ....................................

X had better structure, punches, floh and basically everything else this battle had to offer, Now not to say tha other kat was wack, just needs to elevate like X too,

but in this battle X tookit

so vote: X

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87176
^throw up a poll vote at this battle, ppl sleepin, make sure its a honest vote....

thanks fennix thanks for the good comments and it is tru he wasnt whac maybe just a bad rap or something

yo X hit up my battle with twisted G thanks............................................ .......

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87114

shit sorry you don't have enough posts....

thanks anyway. sorry to free post but at least it ups the battle for votes huh

yeah u know it good match though nice vocab............................................. .................................................. ..

onslaught won this with punches wich is all i look for in a battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86297

onslauth got this wit every catorgorie especially punches
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thanks man im loving that comment .................................................. .................................................. .....

onslaught got this one.....

no explanation needed really......

he just had an overall better verse.......

in avery aspect.....weak battle.....

but my vote goes to onslaught.....

for harder hitting punches...and a nicer flow.....

yep..
pz...