EVERYDAY - New track - (Get those blunts ready)
 

Somethin i through together.... after thinkin of some shit........
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hot joint

enuff sed

Aight now i see yer style a lil' betta and where yer comin from. I like the way you ride the beat, tight shit, talkin' bout' real shit nigga. not a lot of word play or stand out lyrics/vocab. This was put together nice and you got good sound quality 2. Overall this was a good drop. Nice shit.

a'ight "this blunt's ready"... lol..

nice beat... you do ride it well... lyrical content is sick, feelin' this track 4 real.. really shud have made it a lil longer.. like a hook would've been good... still, shit's tite... 1

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I like this track. I'm feeling your style and your voice. Emotion was nice. Should have normalized your vocals to be a little bit louder, or maybe make your adlibs a little louder. Some parts of the song are real clear, but then sometimes it sounds like your running out of breath and your voice fades a bit. Work on your delivery to get rid of that, or maybe you didn't use Dynamics Processing in Cool Edit. I dunno. The track was nice though, I'm feeling the whole idea that you portrayed here. Real nice drop bro.

^Thanx im glad yall understand...... its a time to be lyrical and time to just relax..... and just spit real....... feel me.....

Dont sleep..... smoke

ight ...intro is startin ight...the beat is little mellow type shit...nice cocky voice and shit...lyrics nice..flow and deliv3ery are nice to...overall ya could make it longer it'll sounds better...nice shit though...peep back...(THERE I SEND FEED)..lol...

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ok..beat is mellow..flow is cool..nice delivery that cool laid back ish.. needs to be leveled out better tho....the comment on cool edit dynamics processing is a good tip..this shouldve been longer but i like your style homie
peace

return the favor please..
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^Ill hit yall shit up.....
But yea i didnt fuck with cool edit this time..... or the mix would have been solid.

i used acid which i am still relatively new with..... My delivery skillss are there just i should have normalize/compressed it better........ yea....... thanks

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good track....beats nice...lyrics nice...emotion was put into this audio good....all in all nice track...n a good peice..only advice...u could prolly do better on fasterbeats..n make audios longer ..nice jjob

^im a hype ass fast beat rapper......... but sumtimes you gotta kicck back. even tho it really my style....... this is just a verse..... for a reason... if i wanted to make it longer i would have.............................................. ....

everyday...
not feeling the beat but you ride it well... polly could have added a hook...

kinda short...4/10

Smoken My life away...
feeling this ... the beat is like a wutang beat

and the lyrics are felt ... sometimes theres no better way to describe pain than just saying it the way it is
8/10

Gangsta that...
nas beat... nice... riding the beat well

the sound effects from the song are adding to your lyrics
ok
i'm not one to claim gangsta and sometimes songs like this get tirering ....7/10

pc.

^good lookin........ everyday was just a verse for a reason..... its a snippet......... gangsta that was a freestyle..... =]

I cant explain why but your style is sort of unique. You road the beat nicely and lyrics were on point. Mic presense might need a lil work. Pretty nice track on a net level, it was worth the listen.

Cise

lmao... and I won't comment...

but I will say...


You gotta be 15-17...

if you are younger than that... good job...



If you are older than that... never talk shit about anyone's audio...


and if you are in that bracket... lol... I'm out...

^wtf??? sound like a hata... im guessing you aint got no audio...... stupid textcee's hahaha..... funny how every otha nigga on 3DIFFERENT SITES.... feelin my shit.. but this wank gotta say some stupid shit..... can you even say ONE LINE I SAID?? you didnt even listen to my shit....... fukin wank... wat eva....... HATA
dont bring your garbage in my threads. plz....
and im 17 nigga

yall know im ill

said you gotta be 15-17... www.soundclick.com/avalonproductions yea... I'm all text dog...













If I don't like it... I don't like it... that don't mean that I'm hatin...
-Common...

i like the beat, it cool

u sound nice on this, nice delivery

nice lyrics,

nice drop
7/10

You want a critique..? You got it...


Everyday...


turn your vocals up slightly...
intro... was to long... slightly boring...
your voice is annoying...
an average day in my hood song is played... has been for about 9 years...
lyrics blah...
rhyme scheme good...
punches... none... and I don't mean battle punches... I mean punches as in something to make me say OOOooh... nice... NONE...
beat was ok... not great...




Smoken My life Away...

Yet again... Songs content is blah... these songs went out 9 years ago...
Vocals alot better...
whoever's first... probably Yung... good flow... rhyme scheme... eh...
2nd: flow slightly better than everyday... still choppy... rhyme sheme is eh... yet once again...
nothing but you're dumb ass comments made me keep listening... Make a song someone will want to listen to...


Gangsta that...


The Opening wasn't hot at all...
content was kinda ok still played...
wordplay was played...
although not that bad... best joint from you hands down...
flow was alot better...
Punches alot better...
Best beat you picked so far...
but the whole... "yall gangstas right..? I'm the hardest gangsta and this is why" shit is played...
No one who I know that listened believes you... but get ya start
that laugh and what not at 2:10 isn't hot... could've ended it alot better...


All in all 1 out of 3 songs was ok... 4-10...


once again...

If I don't like it... I don't like it... That don't mean that I'm hatin...
-Common


Look at that... see what you want to work on... I'm not gonna hold ya fuckin hand... that wasn't only a critique... it was my opinion... so If you're gonna be in the game... grow some nuts...



Av...

^ i really didnt take into account anything you just said..... most of it was stupid...... but ok... and gangsta that was a freestyle..... and no one asked you to belive my lifestyle....... everything is played to you....... lol at your comments "no one will listen" when PEOPLE SEEM TO BE LISTENING..... well dont matta you just one person against 100's sooooooooooooo yea. keep your opinions....... your wack anyway..... and thats truth..... and do you know anything about rap structure??? u said no punches...... i should punch you.

Post Man - Your not THAT nice dawg. Your shit is slightly above the net average, SLIGHTLY. Your too cocky, if someone gives you their opinion and you just shoot it down and tell them they hatin, and you "dont take into account" anything the person tells you, you will get no where.

^ you dont know what i take into account...... when i get someones honest opinion and crituqe. i take into account... and im no where near cocky....... i get help with my shit from people far beyond mine or your level all the time........ but he didnt say shit that would help me........

1.My voice is annoying - WTF AM I GOING TO TAKE INTO ACCOUNT WITH THIS ONE???

2.All my topics are played out - Ok so i guess im not supposed to rap about REAL life and what i see... let me rap about big chains and bein in the club... that seems to be in now a days....

3.Your laid back track had no "ppunches" - ITS A LAID BACK TRACK ABOUT EVERYDAY LIVING.... WHERE IM FROM...... MAYBE ITS NOT IN YOUR SUBERBIA.....

^now if you think these were valid suggestions.. THEN YOUR AN IDIOT RIGHT ALONG WITH HIM... NUFF SAID.

lmao, there comes a time in every MC's Life where you just gotta lay back, grab the mic, light it up, and just go nutz.

I'm really feelin this track, it was short, but I can tell you just wanted to fuck around on a track. did you make this beat? pretty nice. ridin the beat real nice, qualities nice, I like how you play with the pronunciation of words, pretty tight.

I love you

goodnight, sir

i like this track...nice smokin song...n the lines
Dont Matta What Ya Age Is,Cats Young as 8..Allready On The Streets Makin Wages
that was nice..no complants....good work
i liked this track...holla