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11-02-03, 01:24 PM | #1 | ||||||
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EVERYDAY - New track - (Get those blunts ready)
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Somethin i through together.... after thinkin of some shit........
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11-02-03, 03:21 PM | #2 | |||||||
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hot joint
enuff sed |
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11-02-03, 04:08 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Aight now i see yer style a lil' betta and where yer comin from. I like the way you ride the beat, tight shit, talkin' bout' real shit nigga. not a lot of word play or stand out lyrics/vocab. This was put together nice and you got good sound quality 2. Overall this was a good drop. Nice shit.
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11-02-03, 04:37 PM | #4 | |||||||
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a'ight "this blunt's ready"... lol..
nice beat... you do ride it well... lyrical content is sick, feelin' this track 4 real.. really shud have made it a lil longer.. like a hook would've been good... still, shit's tite... 1 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=89258 ^peep my new shit..
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11-02-03, 06:01 PM | #5 | ||||||
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I like this track. I'm feeling your style and your voice. Emotion was nice. Should have normalized your vocals to be a little bit louder, or maybe make your adlibs a little louder. Some parts of the song are real clear, but then sometimes it sounds like your running out of breath and your voice fades a bit. Work on your delivery to get rid of that, or maybe you didn't use Dynamics Processing in Cool Edit. I dunno. The track was nice though, I'm feeling the whole idea that you portrayed here. Real nice drop bro.
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11-02-03, 07:53 PM | #6 | ||||||
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^Thanx im glad yall understand...... its a time to be lyrical and time to just relax..... and just spit real....... feel me.....
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11-02-03, 11:20 PM | #7 | ||||||
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Dont sleep..... smoke
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11-03-03, 12:40 AM | #8 | ||||||
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ight ...intro is startin ight...the beat is little mellow type shit...nice cocky voice and shit...lyrics nice..flow and deliv3ery are nice to...overall ya could make it longer it'll sounds better...nice shit though...peep back...(THERE I SEND FEED)..lol...
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11-03-03, 02:01 AM | #9 | |||||||
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ok..beat is mellow..flow is cool..nice delivery that cool laid back ish.. needs to be leveled out better tho....the comment on cool edit dynamics processing is a good tip..this shouldve been longer but i like your style homie
peace return the favor please.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89343
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11-03-03, 10:08 AM | #10 | ||||||
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^Ill hit yall shit up.....
But yea i didnt fuck with cool edit this time..... or the mix would have been solid. i used acid which i am still relatively new with..... My delivery skillss are there just i should have normalize/compressed it better........ yea....... thanks |
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11-03-03, 04:20 PM | #11 | ||||||
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feedback and drop a link
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11-04-03, 03:12 PM | #12 | ||||||
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up
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11-04-03, 06:46 PM | #13 | ||||||
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good track....beats nice...lyrics nice...emotion was put into this audio good....all in all nice track...n a good peice..only advice...u could prolly do better on fasterbeats..n make audios longer ..nice jjob
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11-05-03, 06:06 AM | #14 | ||||||
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^im a hype ass fast beat rapper......... but sumtimes you gotta kicck back. even tho it really my style....... this is just a verse..... for a reason... if i wanted to make it longer i would have.............................................. ....
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11-07-03, 10:48 AM | #15 | ||||||
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everyday...
not feeling the beat but you ride it well... polly could have added a hook... kinda short...4/10 Smoken My life away... feeling this ... the beat is like a wutang beat and the lyrics are felt ... sometimes theres no better way to describe pain than just saying it the way it is 8/10 Gangsta that... nas beat... nice... riding the beat well the sound effects from the song are adding to your lyrics ok i'm not one to claim gangsta and sometimes songs like this get tirering ....7/10 pc. |
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