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Smoove vs {Propain}
Battle Rules:
4 bars at max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:03 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win -strobe |
{Propain} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 11:03 PM.
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Smoove has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:54 AM.
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Aight..
. . . . . . . . . With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime Just quit while your ahead kid.. ..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match His parents doesn’t show him no love Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout.. ..& they told him to: Quote:
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..I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..! ..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards.. ...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..! ..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose.. ...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..! ..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched.. ...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..! |
Voted For: {Propain}
..I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down.. ...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..! Too forced ok opener due to 1st line tho ..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards.. ...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..! not as forced but still ..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose.. ...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..! Nice lol ..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched.. ...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..! Nice closer VS With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime Self glorificaton - not gonna reward u but not gonna hold it against u Just quit while your ahead kid.. ..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match WTf His parents doesn’t show him no love Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above Lol ok Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout.. ..& they told him to: Quote: Originally Posted by {Propain} Get the fuck outta here No weak this isnt personal because him sayin it is irrelevant to the punch Punch - Pro Personals - pro Everything propain took this easy wasnt a gr8 verse but the bumpy surface line could of beaten the wholes of smooves verse Weak battle (taking into account pros skil) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: {Propain}
This battle was pretty weak. propain was forcing the hell outta nameplays while smoove was using wack ass filler. but i gotta vote for Propain his last two bars were pretty decent. while smove still came wack pretty consistantly Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Alright, thanks for the votes...
Thats 2-0 me Uppin |
Voted For: Smoove
very good battle to both of you Smoove - i like your verse man..good job..more than i expected..ur opener was very good..good wordplay..ur next bar was kinda weak..nothing special..i like the line about his career..that was original..and very good personal with the closer.....8/10 Propain - ur opener was kinda good..i liked ur next bar..good personal..the bumpy surface line was kinda weak..it was kinda good personal..ur closer was really kinda weak..nothing special about that.....7/10 Smoove wins |
Voted For: Smoove
With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime ^^wasn't really a punchline Just quit while your ahead kid.. ..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match ^^a lil too basic bit ight His parents doesn’t show him no love Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above ^^whack and just flat out stupuid Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout.. ^^this was a nice personal Only shing moments of your verse was the last line.You need to work on werdplay and metas.Fix ya structure up.Ur shit was tough to read and ugly.If you win this,it' because of the last one. I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down.. ...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..! ^^wat the hell u talkin about ..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards.. ...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..! ^^Mediocre....... ..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose.. ...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..! ^^suks.....not a punch ..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched.. ...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..! ^^Shut up Your whole verse spoke about you beatin him up.DISS HIM.It's okay to use one line about killin or beatin him...but you overdid it.Not to mention you had no personals or creativity. Vote-Smoove(Vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851 |
Voted For: {Propain}
Smoove: With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime Decent Wordplay but Not A Direct Punch At Him..4/10 Just quit while your ahead kid.. ..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match Was Funny..but Not Hard Hitting..4/10 His parents doesn’t show him no love Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above Ok..5/10 Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout.. ..& they told him to: Get the fuck outta here Wasn't Feeling This..3/10 Overall: 16/40 Propain: I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down.. ...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..! Wasn't Feeling This Too Much..3/10 ..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards.. ...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..! Ok Name Play..5/10 ..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose.. ...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..! Decent Name Play..6/10 ..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched.. ...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch. Not Hard Hitting..4/10 Overall: 18/40 Vote - Propain For More Consistent Verse and Harder Hitting Punches. ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: {Propain}
propain: ..I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down.. ...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..! ^^^I GET WHUT U SAYIN S"MOO"VE BUT I DIDN'T LIKE DIS..IT SOUND LIKE SOMTHIN MIMESIS WOULD SAY ..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards.. ...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..! ^^DECENT..NAME PLAY ..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose.. ...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..! ^^^GOOD ..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched.. ...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..! ^^^DECENT CLOSER smoove: With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime ^^^^DA HEAT/ZO LINES BEEN USED A WHOLE LOT FAM..AND DIS HAD NOTHIN 2 DO WITH DIS BATTLE Just quit while your ahead kid.. ..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match ^^^GOOD CONCEPT BUT IT WAS WORDED TERRIBLE His parents doesn’t show him no love Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above ^^^LOL NAH Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout.. ..& they told him to: Quote: Originally Posted by {Propain} Get the fuck outta here ^^^DECENT CLOSER... V/PROPAIN...HIS CAME WITH MORE CREATIVITY AND WAS CONSISTANT....SMOOVE U GOT SOME SHIT FAM U JUST GOTTA BRING IT THRU OUT DA WHOLE BATTLE AND LEARN HOW 2 WORD YA BARS DIFFERENTLY |
Aight..this was just a quick key if yall was wondering why I didnt come as hard as I usually do. DOnt worry Im not going downhill ;)
Uppin for the win |
Well, since my opponent is a cry baby herb as far as votes go..
Its now 1-2. Uppin |
Voted For: {Propain}
One Sided shit here {Propain}: Real nice drop here from you man...All of your punches hit and connected, which is a major plus...Sick wordplay, and nice personals here...Structure was fine, so your flow was on point throughout your drop... "..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose.. ...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!" ^^ Favorite Line Smoove: Ok man this was a decent drop here...Punches connected, but they weren't all that strong...You had a couple real nice lines in there however...Structure was a little iffy which kinda threw off the flow at times, but overall, it flowed decently...You need to work on creativity tho man, because some of your punches were on the right track, but weren't working out for you. "..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match" ^^ Favorite Line Decent verse, but I liked Propains verse better V/ {Propain} Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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