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Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:03 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win
-strobe

{Propain} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 11:03 PM.

Smoove has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:54 AM.

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With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes
While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime
Just quit while your ahead kid..
..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match
His parents doesn’t show him no love
Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above
Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near
Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout..
..& they told him to:

..I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..!
..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards..
...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..!
..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!
..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched..
...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..!

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Voted For: {Propain}

..I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..!

Too forced ok opener due to 1st line tho

..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards..
...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..!

not as forced but still

..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!

Nice lol

..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched..
...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..!

Nice closer

VS

With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes
While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime

Self glorificaton - not gonna reward u but not gonna hold it against u

Just quit while your ahead kid..
..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match

WTf

His parents doesn’t show him no love
Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above

Lol ok

Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near
Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout..
..& they told him to:
Quote:
Originally Posted by {Propain}
Get the fuck outta here

No weak this isnt personal because him sayin it is irrelevant to the punch

Punch - Pro
Personals - pro

Everything propain took this easy wasnt a gr8 verse but the bumpy surface line could of beaten the wholes of smooves verse
Weak battle (taking into account pros skil)

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Voted For: {Propain}

This battle was pretty weak. propain was forcing the hell outta nameplays while smoove was using wack ass filler. but i gotta vote for Propain his last two bars were pretty decent. while smove still came wack pretty consistantly

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Alright, thanks for the votes...

Thats 2-0 me Uppin

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Voted For: Smoove

very good battle to both of you

Smoove - i like your verse man..good job..more than i expected..ur opener was very good..good wordplay..ur next bar was kinda weak..nothing special..i like the line about his career..that was original..and very good personal with the closer.....8/10




Propain - ur opener was kinda good..i liked ur next bar..good personal..the bumpy surface line was kinda weak..it was kinda good personal..ur closer was really kinda weak..nothing special about that.....7/10




Smoove wins

Voted For: Smoove

With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes
While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime
^^wasn't really a punchline
Just quit while your ahead kid..
..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match
^^a lil too basic bit ight
His parents doesn’t show him no love
Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above
^^whack and just flat out stupuid
Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near
Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout..
^^this was a nice personal

Only shing moments of your verse was the last line.You need to work on werdplay and metas.Fix ya structure up.Ur shit was tough to read and ugly.If you win this,it' because of the last one.

I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..!
^^wat the hell u talkin about
..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards..
...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..!
^^Mediocre.......
..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!
^^suks.....not a punch
..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched..
...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..!
^^Shut up

Your whole verse spoke about you beatin him up.DISS HIM.It's okay to use one line about killin or beatin him...but you overdid it.Not to mention you had no personals or creativity.

Vote-Smoove(Vote in link below)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

Voted For: {Propain}


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Voted For: {Propain}

propain:
..I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..!
^^^I GET WHUT U SAYIN S"MOO"VE BUT I DIDN'T LIKE DIS..IT SOUND LIKE SOMTHIN MIMESIS WOULD SAY
..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards..
...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..!
^^DECENT..NAME PLAY
..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!
^^^GOOD
..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched..
...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..!
^^^DECENT CLOSER

smoove:
With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes
While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime
^^^^DA HEAT/ZO LINES BEEN USED A WHOLE LOT FAM..AND DIS HAD NOTHIN 2 DO WITH DIS BATTLE
Just quit while your ahead kid..
..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match
^^^GOOD CONCEPT BUT IT WAS WORDED TERRIBLE
His parents doesn’t show him no love
Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above
^^^LOL NAH
Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near
Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout..
..& they told him to: Quote:
Originally Posted by {Propain}
Get the fuck outta here
^^^DECENT CLOSER...

V/PROPAIN...HIS CAME WITH MORE CREATIVITY AND WAS CONSISTANT....SMOOVE U GOT SOME SHIT FAM U JUST GOTTA BRING IT THRU OUT DA WHOLE BATTLE AND LEARN HOW 2 WORD YA BARS DIFFERENTLY

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

Aight..this was just a quick key if yall was wondering why I didnt come as hard as I usually do. DOnt worry Im not going downhill


Uppin for the win

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Well, since my opponent is a cry baby herb as far as votes go..

Its now 1-2. Uppin

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