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Ysdat 09-18-04 07:02 PM

get ready to bleed
 
This is no mirage, I'm the perfect picture, can't afford a car so I purchase liqour..
Got no time for a worthless spitter, electrifying Earth until the surface flickers..
It's like reality and fact versus fiction, but shit becomes real in certain missions..
And for every single person livin, it's only a matter of time until the curtains thicken..
There's no need to disrespect this, I don't even wanna be seen, just respected..
A victim for every hit ejected, cuz I spit effective, throw a punch n I'll just reflect it..
This journey to tha top, it's been horrendous, but fear me cuz I come equipt n wreckless..
Hip hop is a game and I'm fit to rep this, flowin many ways cuz I'm schizophrenic..
Once I jacked 2 pot plants so I carried the seeds, into my backyard n burried the speed..
Then I chilled n sparked a cherry indeed, I don't wear a ring but I'm married to weed..
I'm very in need, so step to this, but I got a steady belief that I'm already elite..
So watch the deaths of many increase, put ya life on the line n get ready to bleed..

EmerginMc07 09-18-04 07:11 PM

yoo dat shit was raw man ey yo if u lookin for a crew dawg hit up BAM man dat shit was raw i like yo style dawg holla at me

Keith Moon 09-18-04 07:14 PM

preetty good....was felin dta shit......seeing the title made me htink it would be a shitty gangsta piece.......but bleh....itd be cool for audio

7.5/10

-BC

Ysdat 09-18-04 08:13 PM

thnx for the comment's..
my original plan was to be completly audio . no text peice's.
but the day after I joined my shit broke. So I got sick of waiting so i just dropped the lyrics to this.

Its got the hail mary flow to it.

Any more comment's on this?

Ysdat 09-19-04 09:44 PM

upping for feed.....................

Ysdat 09-21-04 01:41 AM

upping for more feed.

Trentorican 09-24-04 10:49 AM

dats shit was really nice dun

Dirty Nigga 09-24-04 11:14 AM

nice, nice, nice..

decent wodplay n vocab, goes hella nice with the hail mary beat like that other kid said, much proppz loved the schitzo line, genuis lol...

decent shit, 8.5/10
keep em comin

return the feed on my open mics

Ysdat 02-25-06 01:37 AM

First open mic ever dropped? you damn right it is, check ya date.

Kawn Flixx 02-25-06 02:08 AM

Closed =P....no links


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