This is no mirage, I'm the perfect picture, can't afford a car so I purchase liqour..
Got no time for a worthless spitter, electrifying Earth until the surface flickers..
It's like reality and fact versus fiction, but shit becomes real in certain missions..
And for every single person livin, it's only a matter of time until the curtains thicken..
There's no need to disrespect this, I don't even wanna be seen, just respected..
A victim for every hit ejected, cuz I spit effective, throw a punch n I'll just reflect it..
This journey to tha top, it's been horrendous, but fear me cuz I come equipt n wreckless..
Hip hop is a game and I'm fit to rep this, flowin many ways cuz I'm schizophrenic..
Once I jacked 2 pot plants so I carried the seeds, into my backyard n burried the speed..
Then I chilled n sparked a cherry indeed, I don't wear a ring but I'm married to weed..
I'm very in need, so step to this, but I got a steady belief that I'm already elite..
So watch the deaths of many increase, put ya life on the line n get ready to bleed..

yoo dat shit was raw man ey yo if u lookin for a crew dawg hit up BAM man dat shit was raw i like yo style dawg holla at me

preetty good....was felin dta shit......seeing the title made me htink it would be a shitty gangsta piece.......but bleh....itd be cool for audio

7.5/10

-BC

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thnx for the comment's..
my original plan was to be completly audio . no text peice's.
but the day after I joined my shit broke. So I got sick of waiting so i just dropped the lyrics to this.

Its got the hail mary flow to it.

Any more comment's on this?

upping for feed.....................

upping for more feed.

dats shit was really nice dun

nice, nice, nice..

decent wodplay n vocab, goes hella nice with the hail mary beat like that other kid said, much proppz loved the schitzo line, genuis lol...

decent shit, 8.5/10
keep em comin

return the feed on my open mics

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First open mic ever dropped? you damn right it is, check ya date.