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*Untriumphant*
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Listening...
Beat sounds cool... Wow...dont use that echo thing in your verses... Your flow is all over the place...in the first verse anyway...hook is wack...no offense...second verse had better flow... Quality was lacking...overall, you need to keep elevating man...keep working on it. |
hook's flow is ALL over the place don't use the echo like LE said quality is pretty assed out...but thats the mic not you...beats nice concept is great but yeah jus quality pretty much lyrics was iight but yeah this one of your best
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lmfao @ the singing. never do that again unless your not gonna pause all the time, you you sing you gotta be like Untriumphant.......! you got keep sayin it as it was a bigger word or w/e but anyway this is better you got better, quality needs work I still hear them pops. but takin that sock off worked I guess. the verse was short and you still pause to much, keep rappin man, pace yourself and keep spittin dont pause and shit. write them bars longer or somin.
anyway not bad man 1. |
not feeling this flow was some of the worst i heard but better than ur past songs mic is shitty lol and i cant understand alot of what ur saying cause of the accent ok track not feeling the sounds you added lol
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beats nice...lose the echo if you want effects like that on ya voice use a reverb...effected ya flow as well...quite choppy...needs improvement...boo @ ya main page saying your the next best thing from the UK...care to prove it? lol
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Yeah Dont Use The Echo
Flows Off..Bit Choppy Ahh@The Hooks Flow 2nd Verse Flows Wayyyyy Betterr Lol Qualitys Ass Tho Lol...:/ Lol @ The Arr Thing Sounds Like A Duck Yeah Delivery Was Aight Presence Is Better You Def. Elevatin Keep At It Dude You'll Get There Overall:6.5/10 :):) Keep Up Rtf Here Plz:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216320 |
uppin for some more help!
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wow...this beat again
I don't like the echo on ur vocals tough to make out what you're rapping not feelin the hook too many pauses in your delivery of the hook... work on vocal editing/mixing flow isn't all that bad though 1 |
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